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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update sissy 😃
Big hug to you 🤗 Hehe 😆
Milwa dia milwa dia yahooo yipee
Aww jalal bhai still loves her 😳
He's so sweet And what he said 😳 that if she will get marry still he won't stop loving her
Awww Jallu bhai big hug to you 🤗
Hehe 😆 Haaain 😕 Nah nah nah
is She is really getting married to bava ? 😕
No no no 😲 Wow Jalal got biggest shock to see salim 😃
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow di awesome chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments dear...
I will do pms later..
Thank u all.

CHAPTER 21:

Jalal got biggest shock in his life..

Jalal pov:
salim??? Jodha bava name is abhi.. who is this salim?? He is a kid.. calling jodha as mumma.. wait.. see salim.. he is just like me.. same eyes.. same nose...same features.. oh god... what is this?? How come this salim is just like me?? Like my Xerox.. how is this possible..
Is he my son??? Oh god...My son.. how... jalal wants to conform with jodha..

End of pov..

Vaishu came & sit beside jodha.. both are observing jalal reaction after seeing salim...

Jalal: jodha who is this salim?? Y is he exactly same like me?? Y I am feeling that he is related to me.. who is this salim jodha.. give the answers jodha...

Jodha didn't speak anything.. she just sits quite..

Jalal got frustration.. & shouts at her.. jodha i am asking u.. give the answers.. who the he'll is he?? Don't keep quite.. I want answer...

Jodha: he is my son.. 3 years back one basterd ra**d me.. salim has his bloody blood.. yes.. he is my son..

Jalal: got tears on listening jodha painfull words.. but composes himself & says vaishanvai if u don't mind I want to talk with jodha alone.. can u give privacy plz..

Vaishu looks at jodha..

Jodha also thinks the same .. assures Vaishu that she is fine..
Vaishu thinks the same & bids bye to them... she wents to home..

Seeing all this salim little worried..starts crying..

Jalal gets up from his place try to take salim from jodha hand..
Jodha refused to give him..
But jalal looks at jodha very angrily.. ( first time she saw angry towards her in his eyes... she felt really scared)
She didn't protest much..
Jalal took salim in his hands..

Salim looks at his face..

Jalal: salim.. y u are looking at me like this.. don't u know who I am??

Salim: nope.. who are u??

Jalal pov:

He is my son.. my blood..what's the fate he don't know who I am? This is the worst situation in my life.. I need to introduce myself to my son.. till today I even don't know his existence.. I am sorry my son.. but from today onwards I will be there for u.. I will keep u safe in my hands.. I will protect u from all the evil my son..

End of pov.

Salim: who r u?? Y mumma is serious??

Jalal: I am ur DAD... beta...

Salim: WHAT.. r u really??

Jalal: yes salim... I am ur DAD..

Salim: mumma true.?? Is he my dad??

Jodha: just nodes..


Salim: DAD... u are my dad.. hugs him tightly..

Jalal feels happy.. hugs salim tightly...he never think someone will call him dad one day.. he was happy... he got tears in his eyes.. happy is a very small word to describe his feelings..after 3 years he felt he got some energy to his life..he felt blessed.. I will never left u again beta..I will protect u from all the evil..I love u my son...oh god. Thanks a lot. Thank u sooo much.. finally u gave some meaning to my life.. Sonu I will never forgive u for hiding my son from me..y u did this to me Sonu??? Y?? .But still I can't angry on u..I love u both..

Salim also feeling the same.. till today she don't know salim missed his dad.. she felt she is enough for salim.. but today just looking in to the salim she can say the little boy missed his father..

Jodha: jalal I want to say something..

Jalal: not here... & not know.. wait for sometime...

Jodha was scared to see this side of jalal..he was calm..which scaring her a lot..

Both father & son enjoyed in the mall for an hour..
They completely forgot about jodha..both man enjoyed themselves..

Jodha tried to talk with jalal but she didn't get success..jalal avoided jodha..

Jalal & salim enjoyed a lot..

They played & shopped few hot wheels cars & few toys..

After 2 hours..

Jalal: beta let's go home.. today we played a lot na.. lifts salim in his hands..

Salim: yes dad...let's go.. I am feeling sleepy dad..mumma let's go..

Jodha: no I don't want to come... salim let's go to our home.. Dadi will be waiting for us..

Jalal: if u want to go then u can go jodha.. nobody will stop u.. & salim won't come with u.. salim let's go..

He takes salim with him to the car parking..

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Posted: 9 years ago
what the f**k???😲😲😡
How could he??😡😡

I am really shocked with his behaviour.😲
I agreed that he was upset and was angry on jo but he has no right to be angry on her. He has no right on salim. That poor girl had raised her boy after facing so much difficulties and here in one hour he's claiming his right on salim."His son"
oh cmon dude.. you are not his father.
You're not there with him when he needed u.. you're not there with the mother of "Your son" when she needed her partner during her pregnancy. Infact you are the reason of all her miseries😡
You ruined her life and how could she trust him again????
How could she go to his home again??
Get some life dude and show this anger to ur mother😡😡

I am waiting for next chappy dear but I didn't like jalal in this chapter.😡😡
Feeling bad for jo😭😭


why this always happen with girls After doing so much still a mother realized that his son wanted his father and I am not saying that it's wrong but I am feeling bad that why our society pressurize on this thing that a girl needs a man in her life


Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Noce one..
Ja got to know that he has a child ..
He shocked n happy at the same time ..
Bt also angry on jo for hiding about salim..
Bothja n salim enjoyed alot with each other..
Bt ja totally ignore jo ..
Waiting for nxt part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg this ja is scaring me. . Oh poor jo...hope he cool down soon. ..continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome di
Ja got to know that he has a child ..
He shocked n happy at the same time ..
Bt also angry on jo for hiding about salim..
Bothja n salim enjoyed alot with each other..
Bt ja totally ignore jo ..
wat gonna happen next
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
What the hell?How can Jalal take away Salim😡
May be,out of anger,he says so or to make Jo realise how it feels to be away from their kid..but,Jo is right in her place..so many thoughts na😆
I love angry Jalal😛
Lovely and emotional update,akka😊
Poor kid missed his dad so much and Jalal is super happy after a long time.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Suspense uff cant wait updateee dr
Superrr
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Posted: 9 years ago
dii chppy is gud..
jalal is in soo much angry mood but he love his sonu also..
both r ryt at their own place..
but jodha ne vo kiya jo koi bhi hota to vahi krta..
jalal ko smjhna padega..

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