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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1061

Originally posted by: natashathakur
Lovely chapter n thnxx for pm di n don't stop writing n update nxt asap eagerly waiting

Thnaks Natasha...

I will update..

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1062

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA
Awsome chappy of both last part...
Ja is doing great to support his jo...
Thank god Abhi also support jo...
How Bharmal say those words to his daughter...

Thanks dear...

Yep,, abhi helped Jodha by stopping his mom...

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1063

Originally posted by: jasmine87
Emotional one but was nice update.
Hw can a father say dis to a daughter at this stage of her life
Plz don't stop writing. Continue with ur updates.
Thanks for pm.

Thanks jasmine...

I will update soon dear...

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1064

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898
Hi dear its very emotional chappy...i feel very bad about jodha now i can feel how a girl feel when she get r**ed socity always blamed girl not a guy...
Hey sissy don't stop writing this story we all emotionaly get attached with this story...please please...
And when time comes then and then only write SR we can understand the situation
love you a lot

Thanks dear...

Thanks for understanding sissy...

I will continue..

I am really glad dear...u attached to it..

🤗

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
It was a very emotional chapter. And pls take the story forward the way you want to take it. I love this story as it is. The person who brought so much unhappiness will one day bring so much happiness in jodhas life that it will erase all sadness of her past.

Thnaks divya...

I will continue dear...

Glad dear u loved it...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Love u payu...

U become a good frd of mine just short span of time...

I am really feeling happy to have u payu..

Thanks for becoming my best buddy...🤗❤️

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1067

Thank u sooo much for lovely comments..

Thanks for understanding..

I will write..I.won't stop writing..

Thanks for the support dears...

Love u all...

I will update again by evening today...

CHAPTER 30:

Whole journey jodha didn't talked.. she was crying silently..

Jalal knows what she is going through..but he didn't stopped her..

He thinks at least with the crying she let out her pain.. but he really feeling suffocated looking at her teary face...he wants to hug her to soothe her..to give support...but he himself promised don't do any action without her permission...so he stopped doing that..

Jalal : jodha i will talk with my parents today...

Jodha didn't speak any word...

Jalal: say something plz..

Do u want to go vaishu house for sometime?? U may feel better if u talk with Vaishu..

Jodha: no.. I don't want to burden on anyone.. I wanted to go back..but Amma took promise from me.. I don't know where I have to go now... I don't have none.. oh god.. where u left me.. I don't have any shelter..or I can't go back.. I am alone..

Jalal: jodha u have me.. who said u are alone.I am there for u... whatever belongs to me is belongs to u also..u have home & family..everything u have... Plz don't say like that...

Jodha: u are happy na jalal now.. after destroying my life... if u won't come to my life I may married with abhi.. at least I can give happy to my parents.. but now everything changed..

Jalal: jodha plz.. but stops himself saying further..he didn't speak.. he kept silent.. drives to his home...

Jodha was exhausted because of nonstop crying so she slept in the car..

Jalal reaches to his house.. wakes up salim... tells salim to wake-up jodha..

Salim: mumma mumma get up.. we came to our house...

Jodha gets up.. looks at the house.. she don't want to go inside..but she don't have another place to go...

Jalal understands her & says jodha just give me 1 day.. we will move from this house... Plz..just 1 day...&

Tomorrow we are going to marry jodha.. I will inform to Vaishu to come tomorrow.. just go inside take some rest...plz..

Jodha don't say a single word.. goes inside..

Jalal came inside & kept her luggage aside...

Jalal : jodha take some rest..I will order food for u.. have it plz..U didn't are anything from morning...

I have little work...I will be back in a while...

Goes outside...

Jalal calls to Vaishu to inform their discussion in jodha house...

Vaishu feels sad listening to him..

Jalal: Vaishu tomorrow I want to marry jodha.. now I am going to meet my parents..they already came to my brother house.. I am going now.. I expected all this will happen...so I called them yesterday only to come to my brother place..

Vaishu: that's good.. between where is jodha??

Jalal: she is in my home.. can u do a favor for me..Plz...

Vaishu: say it anayya...I will do...

Jalal: she is not comfortable in my old house..so I took a new apartment for rent for few days... owner gave the keys to me..but thing is that there is no furniture in the house now..not a single chair.. I told my friend to purchase new furniture & I will move my things to new house this night.. can jodha & salim stay in ur house for this night. Plz. If u dont have any problem...then only...

Vaishu: Annayya..she is my friend.. Plz don't ask me like that.. she can come anytime.. don't forget I am always there for Jodhu.. drop her in my home.. I will bring her to the temple tomorrow by marriage time. Moreover it's not good to keep her alone at this time.. drop her in my home. & do it work... & I am sorry..

Jalal: thanks Vaishu.. & y sorry??

Vaishu: I slapped u in an angry..

Jalal gives a faint smile..I deserve more Vaishu.. & u are correct in ur place.. & because of u only I got to know how much she suffered.. don't worry Vaishu..I promise u she will be happy.. May be not now..but in future she will.. thank u for being with her when she required me more.. I owe u Vaishu.. for that..

Vaishu: I will ask u Annayya.. when I really need.. ok.. bring her..

Jalal hungs up phone & come inside...

Jodha didn't touched the food.. salim is playing in iPad... she just closed her eyes.. thinking something..even she didn't moved her place.. she just sits on the sofa only..

Jalal feels bad for her..

Jalal: salim salim. .

With this jodha also opens her eyes..

Salim beta.. now we are going to Vaishu aunty place.. dad has little work beta.. I will come tomorrow morning ok na..

Salim: y dad??

Jalal: salim..Plz...try to understand..just today.. after that u will be with me only.. we will move to our new house... ok na.. Plz.. salim..

He was telling indirectly to jodha..

Jodha: salim don't be ziddy.. let's go.. first time she shouted on salim..

Salim: sorry mumma.. I will come.. became dull..

Jodha feels bad for shouting at salim.. she wants to lift him but..

Jalal takes salim in his hands & says.. beta just one day.. only..after that we will stay together only.. mumma is not feeling well. So plz don't irritate her.. salim is very good boy na.. i will bring toys for u tomorrow.. I need to talk with ur Dadi.. so I am going beta.. try to understand plz..

Salim: ok dad.. mumma sorry..gives his hands to jodha..

Jodha: mumma also sorry beta..

Jalal drops jodha &salim in. Vaishu house..& gives a small cover to Vaishu.. which is noticed by jodha. But she didn't ask anything.. she went to Vaishu room & slept on the bed.. asks Vaishu to take care of salim..

Precap:

Hamida: jalal how can u think that we will accept her??

We won't accept her.. I know I didn't do anything... I have confidence on my son.. she is trapping u jalal.. I won't accept her as my bahu...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1068

Nice chapter dear😊

jalal was feeling her pain but knowing that he's the only reason for all her miseries he was helpless and getting punished in this way too.

He loved her so much but can't wake her up as he has no right on a mother of his son. how sad

He's trying to make her feel comfortable and assured her that she has a home but how can she feel comfortable with him, in his home???😕

I liked when he was indirectly telling to jodha that he has arranged a new home. How sweet❤️

He is really taking care of her now and already called his family too😊

Jo shouted on salim.. I understand

But jalal is supporting jo. I am relaxed now😛

Vaishu too i think😆

I loved it that he already decided to marry her the next day without talking to his family. This jalal is not that bad😉

Thanks for the pm dear.. and Tkc!!😊

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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rameshwari11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1069

very poor our jalal dear when jodha understand and behave smooth to jalal please give some good behave to jalal hoewaloko baranahi zasaktha but ane walako tho sudar sakthehe na . kithuna prem thikathahe phir bhi wohipurani bathe bolthirehathihe .always con't support jodha now she is doing wrong to jalal. I do not know what is in your mind how long you take to bering them together.?

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1070

Originally posted by: rameshwari11
very poor our jalal dear when jodha understand and behave smooth to jalal please give some good behave to jalal hoewaloko baranahi zasaktha but ane walako tho sudar sakthehe na . kithuna prem thikathahe phir bhi wohipurani bathe bolthirehathihe .always con't support jodha now she is doing wrong to jalal. I do not know what is in your mind how long you take to bering them together.?

ha ha ha

From day 1 u are supporting only jalal dear😆

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