Akdha SS:His True Love Chapter-5 on pg-69

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First of all I am really sorry guys to make u wait for so long but finally I got time to update this story
K now enough of my bak bak and here comes the story

His True Love
Chapter-1

Jalal is 15years old boy lives in delhi with his parents hamida and humayun
Jodha was 14years old girl who with her father and mother got shifted to Delhi as her father got transferred here
both jodha and jalals parents become neighbourers and friends too and jodha too got admission in jalals school They both completed their high school together and they both becomes good friends like their parents along with Moti and Abdul
The four entered in CLG together
Our jalal become quite popular in CLG too like he was popular in their school and all girls r behind him as he is too handsome and attractive but he likes none he was waiting for someone special but who he himself don't in short He was waiting for HIS TRUE LOVE whereas our jodha was shy and beautiful as usual but she knows every shade of jalal when he is angry when he is upset when is tense she has to know na after all she loves jalal madly but can't get confidence to express her feelings in fear of loosing their precious friendship
In CLG
Jalal Abdul Along with jodha Moti after exiting from their class
Abdul:Hi jalal r u taking part in competition
Jalal:I don't known dude
Abdul:But u love singing and playing on guitar
I think u should participate
and tomorrow u have to play a line
Jalal:And sing too
and u r forgetting it should be original
Abdul:But I know u can Do it
Jalal:Hm i think u r right
With this boys started their usual chat
Jodha whose full concentration was on jalal Abdul's convo got happy after hearing her jalal is participating but she saw some nervousness in jalals voice
Jodha:Is jalal nervous but why
I have to find it ;she thought but her chains of thought got broken
Moti:Hi r u there jodha
Jodha:Ya I am just thinkng about competition
Moti:R u participating in it
Oh ya how can I forget ur voice is too melodious
Jodha:No I can't u know me
I can't do that plz Moti
Moti:K k I will not force u happy

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At Night
In jalals house
The door bell rings a servant opens the door
Hamida:Who is it mohan
Mohan(servant):Its jodha baby madam
After entering in
Jodha:Hello hamida aunty
Hamida:Hello beta ;said while taking jodha in hug
So how r u and how's ur CLG
Jodha: i am Good aunty and CLG is too going good;said while looking around
Hamida:R u looking for jalal
Jodha: wo..h Actually yes aunty he had borrowed notes from me so I
Hamida:Oh he is in his room from the moment he has returned from the CLG he is too busy in his singing and guitar that's why he skipped his lunch then dinner too
Hearing this jodha :What ;said with sad voice
Hamida:Don't worry beta u know him na when he gets engross in singing and guitar he forgets everything
Jodha:Aunty I will take his dinner
And will surely make him eat
On this hamida:This girl is madly love in with my son
my son is really lucky and I hope he will realize HIS TRUE LOVE soon ;Thought with a smile
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In jalals room
The boy teared another page after getting unsuccessful for the 100th time in making a song and threw the notebook aside
Jodha:Ouchh;cried and tray was about to fall as the notebook hitted on her hand but jalal saves it on the right time
Hearing cry jalal realize some presence in the room and also realises that his notebook hit somebody turning his back he saw jodha and also saw the tray in her hand about to fall he immediately runs towards her
Jalal:I am sorry jodha
I didn't see u;while taking the tray
Jodha:Its k
its not ur fault;said with a smile
Jalal:U know u r really sweet;said while placing his hand on her hand
Jodha:Ahh;cried due to the sudden touch on the swollen hand
Jalal:I am sorry
did I hurt u
jodha:No not at all;said with fake smile
Jalal:Show me ur hand
Jodha:Its nothing
its just a little scar nothing more;said while hidding her hand
But our jalal is not a one who couldn't be easily agreed
Jalal:Just show me said while grabbing her hand softly
After seeing her hand swollen due to himself
Jalal:Oh my god jodha
its not a little scar its fully swollen
I am so sorry
I should be careful ;said with anger and disappointment on himself
Jodha:Its k jalal
I know u done it unintentionally; said with a smile
Jalal:Wait I first aid u
After placing first aid kit on the bed jalal kneels before jodha
Jodha:What r u doing jalal and plz dont sit like this
Jalal:I don't have any problem in this
Jodha:i am completly fine
i dont need antiseptic cream
Jalal:I know why r u saying this bcoz it burns but if u won't cure ur wound it will become worse
Jodha:Plz jalal
Jalal:just keep ur mouth shut and let me do my work;said and starts dressing her wound
Jodha:Ahh its burning; said with teary eyes
Jalal:Sorry jodha;said blowing on her wound
His cool blows starts send shiver in her body and she forgets the burning sensation of cream
Jalal:Is it still burning; asked with concern
Hearing his voice jodha came back from her dream land
Jodha:N..o it's fine now;said with an assuring smile
after completing the dressing
Jalal:So what r u doing here and this food ;asked while placing himself on the chair
Jodha:Woh aunty told me u hadn't eat anything
so I brought ur dinner here and u have too eat it that's final
Jalal:But
Jodha:No ifs and no buts
Jalal knew that that its waste of of time in arguing with jodha when it comes to his health she doesn't listen anything
With this thought jalal starts eating


Precap:Abdul:Ready for the competition
Jalal:No dude
I can't participate in it as I failed to compose a new one

Done guys it will be a 3- 4shots story
Do hit like and do tell me how's it
Love u all



Index
Chapter-1 above
Chapter-2 on 16
Chapter-3 on 22
Chapter-4 on pg 48
Chapter-5 on pg 69
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