Akdha ff Love Part 5 updated on 5th May 2016 on pg no 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update. ..
Jodha meeting with her feature family members was cute...
Update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update! well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 I had only read the Prologue
and now you've send a PM with Part 4
will read all the parts before the weekend and than comment
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nice chappy buddy
mostly the intro of chappy is awesome
update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyys here is the next part of my Akdha ff Love... Thank you so much for ur lovely comments and like... i hope this is long enough...

Precap-

Jodha blushed on her comment. And they talked more with jodha bakshi really liked her hone wali bhabi jaan she gelled up with jodha very easily and in minutes they were like bff's.Jodha introduced her with reva.She gelled up with her also and they talked and talked until the dulhe raja arrival's news not came.

Part 5

A man in his twenties came out from his mercedes... He was none other than handsome,dashing Multi millionaire JALAL MUHAMMAD. He is the son of humayun and hamida he loves his parents a lot but never shows it to them. And he trusts his badi ammi more than his parents. He is really very close to his badi ammi because when he was 5 years old his father and mother left him to live with his badi ammi as they have to go abroad because their company got one offer which could make them billionair. But they was not able to take jalal with them due to his studies. Firstly As it was September Month mid of his session. So it would affect his studies and apart from studies main issue was that how would he get the addmission in USA's school and if they will search for school and all then how would they earn money.They were not so rich that time so they also didn't had any approaches and all so they thought they should leave jalal with Mahamanga only and bakshi was not born at that time.

Jalal was so upset and angry also on his parents that they did not even talked with him before leaving. Hamida was so emotional she said she will not be able to see jalal's crying face so she will not be able to meet jalal and humayun also agreed with Hamida and they didn't meet jalal before going.And maham took jalal's responsibility and helped him in every phase of his life where his parents should help him. And within Five years time

Muhammad industries became No.1. But Humayun and Hamida had lost the most precious thing in their life their son Jalal who was now fully in maham's control.Those 5 yrs was big mistake for them they even thought to bring jalal with them after two yrs but till than jalal was fully in maham's control.And maham also said.that she will take care of jalal.So Hamida agreed.As she was not aware of true intentions of maham.Although jalal was in maham's control but one person was there whose existence was the sole reason for the love in jalal for his parents.She was none other than his grand mother Zainab bi.She always told jalal about his parents love story and his birth everything related to him and his parents which helped him to stay connected with his parents. And yes not to forget She was also the reason behind his alliance with jodha. Jodha's grandmother Rajvanti and Zainab bi are best friends. And they thought to convert their friendship into relationship and here they are going to see jodha although they knew that alliance is fixed just for the sake of family members and not to forget jalal and jodha they thought to let them meet and here all the arrangements are done for there engagement also.


Jalal moved to the other side of car and opened the door for his grand mother and than he move back and opened the door for maham.Others also came out that is adham his wife javida and their cute little son Rahim.And they headed towards jodha's house. And here outside bharmal with humayun and mainavati with hamida and bakshi were standing outside to welcome them. They greeted each other. Jalal took blessings from bharmal and mainavati.


Javeda also took blessings and said-"hamari hone wali devraniji kaha hai yeh toh bataiye auntyji.."


Mainavati said-"ji vo andar hai beta"


Javeeda in jalal's ear -"kyun devarji aap toh bahaut betaab honge apni hone wali sharikehayaad se milne ke liye chaliye chaliye ab sharmaiye mat andar chalte hai..."


Jalal blushed and said-"kya bhabi aap bhi..."


Rahim said-"ammi... ammi ye chachu ke gaal lal kyu ho rahe hai..."


Javeeda said with teasing smile-"apki chachi se milne ja rahe hai na issliye beta..."


Rahim said-"chachi se milne ja rahe hai nhi pehle mai milunga chachi se sabse pahele vo meri Chachi hai..."


Javeeda said-"accha. accha thk hai baba pahele tum mil lena.. kyun devarji appko koi pareshaani toh nahi hai na..."and laughed


Jalal said while blushing-"nhi ab chale andar.." and everyone laughed on jalal's situation.


Adham said teasingly-"aree aree itni bhi jaldi kya hai dulhe raja aapki dulhaniya kahin bhaag nhi rahi itminaan rakhiye.. haha.."


Jalal said poutedly-" kya bhaijaan aap bhi"


Zainab bi said-"aree.. bas karo mere pote ki taang khichana tum sab log... chalo beta andar chakte hai.. "

Jalal said-"thank you dadi you r my saviour... I Love you. "


Dadi said-"Are... are. Saara pyaar mujhpe loota doge to apni hone wali biwi ko kya doge.." and laughed...


Jalal said making a baby face -"Dadi..."

Everyone laughed wholeheartedly and moved inside the mansion.


Do Anjaane Ajnabi
Chale Bandhne Bandhan

Haye Re Dil Mein Hai Yeh Uljhan
Milkar Kyaa Bole ,
Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milkar Kyaa Bole


Jodha was seeing everyone from her balcony with moti. And was hell nervous. She was not able to listen what they were talking. And also she didn't saw jalal's face as javeeda was standing there.


Nayi Umang Nayi Khushi
Mehak Utha Hai Aangan

Haaye Re Ghar Aaye Man Bhaavan
Milkar Kyaa Bole ,
Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milkar Kyaa Bole


As jalal was moving inside mansion he was feeling some strange emotions. He was struggling not to show his nervousness to anyone. He is still feeling very nervous about how would he talk to her what he will ask etc..


Bechaini Betaabi
Aaj Mujhe Yeh Kaise
Aaj Hai Jo
Pehle Na Thi
Yeh Dil Ki Halat Aise


As they got inside the mansion everyone was chatting while sitting on sofa. But jalal is looking here and there as if searching for someone. Although he has seen jodha's photograph in his daadi's phone. But he was very eager to see her in reality. And jodha was sitting behind the mirror and reva was correcting her saree and seeing last minute touch up.


Hooo
Ankhon Ko Usi Ka Intezaar Hai

Unhi Ke Liye Yeh Roop Yeh Shringaar Hai
Dekhi Hai Tasveer Hii

Hooo
Aaj Milenge Darshan

Hoo oo

Haye Re Dil Mein Hai Yeh Uljhan
Milkar Kyaa Bole ,
Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milkar Kyaa Bole


Bakshi came to reva and said that everyone is waiting for jodha. And they started going downstairs.As jodha stepped out of her room she can listen the voices of her inlaws laughing and talking but she was not able to look upward due to shyness as they started coming down from staird she looked up and her eyes got glued to jalal.#Eyelock# Jalal was first time seeing someone so beautiful. He was mesmerized by jodha. She
Was looking divine in red saree. And jalal was also not less he was equally looking dashing. Their eyelock broke when

Reva shaked her and she looked down her cheeks turned pink jalal smiled to see this and she came downstairs.


Roop Ki Rani Aayi Hai
Jaise Gagan Se Utaar Ke
Mere Liye Kya Mere Liye
Aise Saj Ke Sawar Ke

Hooo
Sabse Chhupa Ke Idhar Udhar Se
Mujhko Hi Dekhe Chor Nazar Se

Baat Labon Per Hai Ruki
Tez Dilon Ki Dharkan

Haaye Re
Kal Ke Sajni Saajan
Milkar Kyaa Bole ,
Kyaa Bole Kyaa Bole
Re Milkar Kyaa Bole...


Precap-Jalal jodha meet privately.


Do like and comment..

And guysss plzzz i need your reviews about how i write am i able to clear my point of view.. or not.. and ya if anyone is having doubt about jalal's childhood do ask me... i ' m waiting for ur reviews so plzz tell me fast..

Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
awesome chappy dear
what a teasings yaar
update soonbuddy
waise perfect song for the situation
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yippee i'm first
Edited by Kavya_P - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update himani..
Jalal's parents left him in his childhood days coz of business that's why jalal is much more attached to his dadi and maham..
Aww everyone was teasing jalal and he was blushing 😳
He was clean bowled seeing jodha
excited for precap 😃
thanku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update himani...
here also Ja mote attach compare to his Parents but one diffrnc he still love her parents most...😃
hmm...so Ja hv daddi also thank god she was with him to save him fr tht maham...
ohkk so this relation all bcz Ja Jo daddi ...
Finally Ja reach with maham n her family...javida as usual soo sweet n rahim cutee...
aww...All r teasing Ja n he was blushing😆😉
Finally both Ja Jo saw echother😃
waiting fr nxt update...
precap interesting😉

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