Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 38

Beautiful chapter sherry

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Btw how many parts are left??</font>

unrest soon
2-3 parts r left payal

sherry 🤗
it was WOW update dear...beautyful..lovely❤️😳
really enjoyed this one...it brought smile but again feel sad fr thm seeing Ja pain😒
Ja cm to Jo frm her balcony to wish Valentine😳 soo cute...
n tht marriage prt...both is doing every possible thing to gv happiness to echother😃 thy r truely deeply mad in Love tht thy gv echother happiness bfr asking or telling😳😃
u r awesome sherry u pennd beautyfully n wrote all emotion with equal balnc🤗
thank u fr this beautyful update...😃

Sherry what an awesome update ... loved the flashbacks, their doubts, their cute romance, the way they care for each other, love the way this story is progressing ... 😊

Beautiful updates sherry...sad that jo died nd jalal has to live in her memories only...

All parts are super update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm

I thought i read this dear but i missed it

You know sherry, whenever I start reading your this os, whatever maybe my mood, after reading the first line I feel like crying!😭 the concept and the plot itself is so much emotional that I can't help.😭

Recap-both jodha and jalal sits on their respective places behind curtains and completes their muslim wedding with saying Qubool hai and with an unspoken PROMISE of always being together
Flashback ends
Jalal:why Jo why we PROMISE we will Always together but see here I am all alone ;saying this he continued reading

Chapter-5
Flashback continues

The newly wedded bride standing near the window of their decorative room is none other than our Jodha who was so engrossed in watching the stars that did realized when the dashing groom enters in the room,she only realized his presence when he slids his hand on her curvy waist
Jalal:Watching mom and dad ; said while placing his chin on her shoulder
Jodha:Yes;said with closed eyes Leaning herself back on his broad chest
Jalal:Missing them?;asked while turning Jodha towards himself
Jodha:A lot
Why they left us Jalal
Jalal:They left us bcoz they were so good that this world doesn't deserve them
Jodha:But r we so bad that they even left us
I wish they were present there when I found a friend like u, I wish they were there when I got graduated from high school with u,I wish they both were present there when i entered in CLG with u and most importantly I wish they were here today in the beginning of the most important phase of our life,said with tears
Jalal:They were present there when u find me and I find u,they were present there when we both got graduated from high school,they were their when we entered in our CLG life and they were present here Jo when we bonded in the sacred bond of marriage;said while weeping her precious tears affectionately which were flowing from her beautiful doe shape eyes
Jodha:They must be happy na Jalal;asked while leaning her head on her shoulder and staring at stars
Jalal:Of course they Jo after all mom dad ammi abbu always pray for our happiness from above
And this is there prayers result that we r together
Right?
On this
Jodha:Hmm Right;said while sliding her arm around his arm
Jodha:won't u give me the gift;asked Removing her head from his shoulder
Jalal:Gift?
Jodha:Ya atgah uncle told me that its a custom that the groom gives some gift to her bride on their wedding night
Jalal:Really!
Now I have yo give a gift;said with a fake disappointment
Jodha:Jalal! ;said while hitting his arm lightly
Jalal:Just kidding I have brought u gift
Jodha:Oh u already brought;said with a sad face
Jalal:Why u suddenly got sad jo
Jodha:Can I ask the gift of my choice;asked a pleading look
Jalal:Ya of course I have brought a gift but still u can ask ur gift first then I will give u mine
On this
Jodha:Can I ask a PROMISE from u as a gift
Jalal:Yes whatever PROMISE u want
Jodha: PROMISE me Jalal our kids will not live an orphans life like us they will have parents to pamper and protect them
Jalal:Why u asked such a PROMISE suddenly Jo
Jodha:Bcoz I don't want a painful childhood for them
Jalal:There is no need of PROMISE Jo we will be there with them in each step of their life
Jodha:yes but still I don't know why but I want this PROMISE
Can u give me this PROMISE; asked while forwarding her hand with pleading eyes
Without giving any second thought jalal placed his hand on her
Jalal:I PROMISE
With this Jodha hugs jalal tightly
Jodha:Thank u Jalal
thank u
this PROMISE means a lot to me
Jalal:Anything for ur happiness Jo
Flashback ends
Jalal:I wish Jo I didn't gave u that PROMISE then I must be with u now ,I know I am sounding selfish but what I can do I can't live without u or should I say I don't know how to live without u jo;said between his tears
With this Jalal continue the diary
The diary
Jodha:U know baby I could never estimate how much ur abbu love me he always want to complete my all wishes but always named them PROMISE u know what ur abbu gave me on our first night the gift which I wished when I was 15 years old
Flashback
Jalal:Anything for ur happiness Jo
To lighten up the mood
Jalal:Now don't u want to know what gift I am giving u
Jodha:Of course I want
just give me my gift ;asked while breaking the hug
Jalal:For that u have to close ur eyes and come with me
Jodha:But where
Jalal:Just come
Jodha:k fine
With this Jalal tied a cloth around eyes and start moving their destiny
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In the car
Jodha:Did we reach
Jalal:Nope just five minutes more
Jodha:Jalal!;argdd
Jalal:plz
Jodha:Fine
finally they reached their destiny
Jalal Taking Jodha out of the car
Jalal:Now see;said while removing the cloth from her eyes
It takes Jodha few seconds to adjust her vision after sudden darkness
But seeing the place tears starts flowing from jodhas eyes
Jalal:Jo;said while placing his hand on her shoulder
Without saying anything Jodha hugs Jalal tightly
Jodha: Why Jalal why u love me this much why u want to complete my all wishes
Jalal:The answer is same Jo bcoz i PROMISED u
Won't u like to go inside;asked while weeping her tears
Jodha:Can I
Jalal:Of course u can
Lets go
Saying this Jalal took Jodha inside the house
Seeing her house Jodha can't believe her own eyes the house where she spend little but most precious time with her parents nothing change here not a thing except from one thing the whole walls r covered with photos of Jodha and her parents
Jodha:But when did u buy it
Jalal:Five years ago
Jodha:What!
how did u buy it
Jalal:Remember in our 10th class u were crying profoundly
Jodha:Yes bcoz
Jalal:Bcoz ur mama mami was selling ur house
Jodha:Yes but if I am not wrong that house was bought by some foreigner
Jalal:That was me who buy ur house
Jodha:What it was u but how
Jalal:I told atgah uncle to buy that house through someone as I know very well that ur Mama mami will not sold it to me
Jodha:But why
Jalal:Bcoz i PROMISE u that I will take u in this house one day
I still remember when I asked u "Why r u crying Jo"
You said,"My mama mami is selling my house l,I really want to go there but instead of taking me there they r deciding to sell it,u know Jalal that is the only place where I can feel my mom and dads presence"
Remember what I said to u after that
Jodha:Yes I remember
U said,"Dont get sad Jo they r with u and u don't need a house to feel their presence as they live in ur heart" and in reply I said,"But still I want to go there" and u said
Jalal:i said,"K if this is what u want I will take u in that house one day" and u said,"PROMISE?"
Jodha:And u said,"PROMISE"
But why u not brought me here before
Jalal:I want to bring u here on a special occasion but i never find a suitable one but the day I realized my feelings for u I want to bring u here on ur birthday for the proposal but as u know the circumstances I am sor
Putting her fingers on his lips
Jodha:U don't need to say sorry today is the most special and suitable day for ur this surprise and Jodha:u brought me in the most special place
Thank u
I don't know how will I pay back to ur unconditional love
Jalal:Dont u ever say this again Jo
I have done nothing about ur paying me back u have already done
On this Jodha gave him a confused look
Continuing
Jalal:By PROMISING me that u will always be with me never leave me
Right?
Jodha: Right
flashback ends
Jalal:Where is ur that PROMISE jo of never leaving me alone;he thought while holding their wedding photo tightly
Continuing the diary
Jodha:U know baby apart from caring ur father was really naughty from the first day of our marriage
Reading this a sly smile appears on jalals face and he again drown into past
Flashback
After stepping out of bathroom in saree Jodha headed towards the dressing room to comb her wet hairs in this act some water droplets fall on jalals face which results in disturbing his peaceful sleep but the moment he open his eyes he forgets to breathe like always seeing his gorgeous and breath taking best friend sorry now wife who was not looking less than a nymph in that peach coloured saree with water dropping on her milky arms and tempting bare back as her blouses knot is not tied yet
seeing this how can our Jalal leave the chance of romancing with jodha
Jodha who was completely unaware of the waking of his devil bf cum husband was only busy in combing her long black wet hair but the sudden touch on her bare back make her aware about it and sudden touch forced her to turn which results in smashing her wet hair on jalals face
Jodha:u waked?;asked While setting her wet hair
Jalal:I have to wake na as someone needs my help
Jodha:What help
Jalal:Oh u dont know let me show u;saying this he turns Jodha towards mirror now again her back was facing him
Jalal:In this;said huskly while sensually trailing his fingers from the lower part to the upper part of her back
Jodha:N..No I C..an ma..na..ge
I know in return of help u will demand something
Jalal:Ya that's true but u too know u need my help so just let me help u
Jodha:K but no naughtiness
On this Jalal again start placing his fingers on her bare back sending shivers in her spine and making her breath heavy and tie her knot a little tight
Jalal:Now my turn to take;said while moving her towards himself through waist
Jodha:What turn
Jalal:I helped u so now I will take something in exchange na
Jodha:But I don't want to give u anything its ur free will to help me;said while lowering her eyes
Jodha:Now leave me I have to go
Jalal:No not so soon at least not before giving me my morning kiss
Jodha:Morning kiss!When that got decide
Jalal:Now; saying this he placed his lips on her rosy ones and start sucking life our of her ,Jodha too responds equally ,she places both her hands around his neck and pulls him closer to her
After a passionate kiss Jalal start kissing Jodha on her neck before they both could go far atgahs voice stops them in there tracks
Atgah:Jalal jodha come down breakfast is ready
On this
Jalal:I am not hungry for food
but for u;saying this he got busy in his kissing section
Jodha: Jalal it doesn't look nice uncle is waiting for us on table I am going u too come fast after taking a quick shower;said while freeing herself from her naughty husband
Jalal:No wifey this is not fair
Jodha:Everything is fair in love and war;saying she left the room not before giving I am waiting for u look
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After serving breakfast to both atgah and Jalal ,Jodha too places her besides Jalal
Atgah:So what r ur boths plans now Jalal:what plans uncle
Atgah:Of going on honeymoon
Where r u taking my beti
Hearing the word honeymoon jodhas cheeks turned into crimson red
Jalal:We haven't decided uncle
Atgah:Oh thats great i have plan something for u both
Jalal :what
Atgah:Honeymoon in Paris
Jalal:But how can we leave uncle
Atgah:Why not
Jalal:Ur health it's still not stable fully
Besides whole business responsiblty is upon u now its high time that I took its responsibility and u take rest and plan some trip
Jodha:Jalal is right uncle
U already done a lot for us now plz take rest
Atgah:Thank u beta for thinking so much about me so much but I am completely fine now and about business u can join it after u return from ur honeymoon then I will take a long holiday to relax
Atgah:And what I done it was my duty Jodha so no need to thank me
Jalal:But uncle
Atgah:Plz if u both respect me u will go
Jalal:K fine but when we will return u will only rest
Atgah:PROMISE
Flashback end
Jalal:U kept ur PROMISE uncle but in a different way;said with teary eyes
Done guys
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Res
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