Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 30

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Recap-
Jo's dairy
'You u know baby that was worst day of my life when I
informed ur abbu about my marriage he really got
shock I was expecting that he will say those three
magical words but alas I thought he never love me
Reading this jalal felt bad and angry on his own
stupidity in delaying realizing his true feeling
Jalals POV
I still remember when Jo give me that shocking news
my heart got break but only after that I realized my true
feelings for her'
WITH This he continued his reading

Part-3

Jalal flip next page

Jo's diary
' You know baby that day I cried day and night here ur abbu wasn't calling me and there my mama and mami fixed my engagement on my birthday four days passed like that but ur abbu didn't respond'

Jalal-I am sorry Jo I was really an idiot when that day u break that news to me I was completely shocked i dont know i feel like my most important thing my life is leaving me but still I can't realize what happen to me but when i share my feelings, insecurities to atgah uncle it was he who made me realize my true feelings for u and that very time I want to come tto u to express my feelings but suddenly atgah uncle's health got unstable due to which I have to leave for London.When i got back on ur birthday our friends told me about ur engagement
I am so sorry Jo bcoz of me u had to suffered a lot;with this thought he flipped next page

Jo's diary
'You know baby it was my 21st birthday I thought like my every birthday ur abbu will be the first one who will wish me
u know ur abbu PROMISE me when he first time wished me my birthday that he will always be the first one to wish me and he always wish me exactly at 12:00 as he PROMISE
On that birthday too I waited for ur abbus call but it didn't came it pricked my heart more and also confirmed that he never loved i am only his best friend.'

Jalal-I know Jo I broke my PROMISE but I was in flight so can't call u I really want to fulfil my PROMISE;said with tears filled eyes as his Jo have to suffered a lot bcoz of his delay

Jo's diary
' With this new confirmation I made myself ready for my engagement or should I say my death bcoz becoming of someone else apart from ur abbu was not less than a death for me

Flashback

Everyone was waiting for the birthday girl cum bride in the garden and suddenly spot light falls on the door way and here comes Jodha who was looking out of the world in that green and red lehanga but due to her pale face anybody could guess that she is not at all happy
Jodha just reach on the main door when she felt a hold on her smooth wrist and without turning she knew this touch its none other than her Jalal.When she turns around she find her jalal with an assuring smile on his face
Jodha:Jalal U
Jalal:Shh let me speak first jo ;said while Putting his fingers on her rosy red lips
Jalal:First of all happy birthday Jo and
Before he could speak further a tight slap landed on his face from the angry birthday girl
Jodha:So now u got time to wish me ha
Jalal: I am sorry I couldn't wish u early
Cutting him in between
Jodha:I don't want ur explanation and what's the need of coming now
Jalal:For once listen to me Jo
Jodha:When u should speak that time u remain silent and now u want to say something
Jalal:Listen
Jodha:No
Jalal:Jo I
Jodha:What Jo I ha
I don't want to listen to u
With this jalals last string of patience got break and he pulled jodha towards him and captured her rosy red lips with one hand he hold her slim waist while the other hand started caressing her back
this sudden act made everyone more shocked who r already shocked from the moment jalal hold jodhas hand especially jodhas mamaa Mami and her would be fiance Surya
Jodha who also got shocked with sudden kiss slowly slowly starts responding to it and their kiss turned into a passionate one
They both have to break the kiss for getting some air
Jalal:I am sorry Jo I have to do it to make u stop from talking; said in one go and heavy breaths
After hearing this another slap landed on his face making the handsome boy shocked and others satisfied
Jodha:Still u r saying sorry and giving me explanation
Why can't u just said those three magical words which I want to hear
Now its jalals turn of becoming happy and others to become shock
With this jalal kneels before her while holding her hand in his one hand and from the other hand he take out a small box from his coat and after opening it
Jalal:I love u Jo
Will u marry me
Jodha:No
After getting up with sudden rejection
Jalal:Wh...y
What happen jo
Jodha:Bcoz u r late Mister
Jalal:What how
Why suddenly r u
Jodha who was holding her chukle and happy tears finally gives up
Jodha:Stupid I was just revenging on u for making me wait for so long
Hearing this jalal took sign of relief
Jalal:It means its a yes
right?
Jodha:No
This again shocked jalal
Jodha:Of course its a yes
saying this jodha throws herself in her jalals arms

Flashback ends

Jo's diary
'It was my best birthday baby finally we both confessed our feelings to each other
U know baby my mama mami refused to ur ammi and abbus relation but ur abbu stand their like a pillar for me when they were accusing me and after a hot conversation ur abbu declared that he will marry me and he took me with him with a PROMISE that he will always stand like a pillar for me

Jalal:How can I not Jo
I was and I always want to stand like a pillar for u
But its u who not letted me complete my PROMISE

With this diary continues

Done guys I am extending this story hope this news will make u happy
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its jst amazing..n agaain touchy one.
oohh u jst pledge tht will mk me confuse 😆 yes i react weird sum time sad sum time tears n sum time chuckle...its chaptrs r always engrossing i jst flow with it...
the best prt was frm the tim ja cam n kiss n Slap n yess no😉 🤣 well done jo i totally loved it.
thank u soo much fr update...
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update soon😃

Yiepee...we all are happy to know you extending the story...btw superb chappy...muahhh

Awsome sherry
flashbck was lovely
cont soon

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amazing update
thanks for pm
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Beautifully expressed.
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Lovely fb in confession was nice nd jo slapping super. ..nice update continue soon nd do pm

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Beautiful romantic update sherry loved the confession n perposing part hihi jalal got two slap...
thank u to extend this wonderfuld emotional story... 😃