#2 LOVE: THE GAME OFLOSS N GAIN last chap 23/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will update soon, have patience guys and thanks for waiting
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Chapter 5
credit: SHAGUN
JALAL was looking at his son who was playing with his little sister sitting on his bed . JALAL was in saleem's room, he brought Mehak also there because JODHA was not in a mood to talk anyone so he thought to give some time to his wife .
Saleem: daddy Mehak is naughty, look at hel (her)
JALAL: hmm... just like her elder brother na!! 😆😆😆
Saleem: eldel (elder) blothel (brother)! Who ij (is) thish dad...😕
JALAL smiled at his son's innocency 😆😊 then replied
Jalal: Elder brother is the one mmm... like big brother, Mehak is small na 😊 and you are big so...
Saleem: interrupted, but m alsho (also) shmall (small) mamma alwayz say that m shmall .
JALAL: huh🤢 ni ni ... you r big boy ... 😛
Saleem: ni... ni... m shmall not big boy 😭😭😭
JALAL: 😕🤢
JALAL to himself: ya khuda, how did JODHA handle this kid kid, he asked so many questions .
Then he feel two hands on his cheeks, its none other than his little ... no no big son😆
Saleem: Dad, whose u ale taking? ( talking) 😕
JALAL: huhwhose? What is whose? 😕.then he heard crying of his daughter, he picked her up and started to pacifying her by making weird weird faces but instead of stopping she cried very much and saleem also started crying by seeing weird faces that his dad making . JALAL was shocked he didn't understand why saleem is crying . He asked him
JALAL: saleem what happened? 😕 Why r you crying now😕😭😭 he sounds little irritated by listening his sound, saleem started crying very hardly .
JALAL: 😲😭 what did I did now? Is it that much difficult to handle these kids, they r unpredictable . Then he looked at saleem and said this boy he asked so many questions, before this he was in good mood but now he also started crying .
Whereas at JODHA and jalal's room, JODHA was thinking about jalal's word his condition how much he tortured her but after that he make himself self tortured too . His condition was worsen when he was talking to her pleading her for second chance, he want second chance to repent for his deeds and she also want to give him chance but she don't know that is she ready for that now or she need time . She was so emmersed in her thought but came out when she heard her kids crying . She ran to saleem's room .
She passed all room and then saleem's room came in view she stand at the door of his room . The view which she spotted made her chuckled and guilty too, guilty because she didn't pay attention to her kids so much busy in her thoughts of JALAL and her life and chuckled because she saw JALAL making his kids to stop crying but they were not listening to him instead of that they were crying severely.
JALAL heard giggling voice from his back, he turned and saw JODHA standing and giggling . He said
JALAL: jodhaaa... don't laugh, please make them quiet they are not listening to me ... please... JODHA.
JODHA came to kids, when saleem saw his mumma he immediately hide himself in her lap whereas Mehak too want to come to her mom from her dad's lap, she was extending and throwing her hands in air asking JODHA to take her also .
JODHA picked her also but then she felt pain in her abdomen . JALAL startled seeing her condition he suddenly snatched mehal from jodha's hand and ask her to lye down . But JODHA didn't listen to him, she took Mehak from him and started pacifying her
JODHA to Mehak: ni... ni... beta my princess stop crying, u r good girl na then she took feeder that was on night stand and started feeding Mehak . In a minute Mehak stopped crying and started drinking milk but ssleem was still scared of his father and kept on weeping for his mom .
In a nick of time Mehak asleep and JODHA make her lye on bed . Then she took Saleem in her lap ignoring her pain and asked him why he is crying
Saleem while crying: dad...da...dad... feal [fear] me ... and started crying again, while jalal make confused face but JODHA said
JODHA: dad fear you! How beta? You know he is your dad na ... than why you feared of him
Saleem: he make faces, then he try to copy the way JALAL make faces to pacify his crying kids which male JODHA laugh but she controlled and look at JALAL who was ready to burst any time in laugh but JODHA signals him not to laugh JALAL stopped
Jodha: ni... beta dad was pacifying you baby, he was not making you feared beta
Saleem: like this mumma ...
JODHA: dad always get busy in his work na... he didn't get time to spend with his son so he don't know how to make crying kid smile . OK beta
Saleem: wiping his tears and smiled at JODHA and JALAL said OK ... I lobe you mumma and DADDA
JODHA and JALAL together we love you too.

Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
SomeoneloveJA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm and update ..Mavaddat
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice chappy di
hehe jalal made funny faces which made the kids cry.
thanks for pm di

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yipee third
its really an amazing chappi
ja kids time wow
poor ja can't pacify his child's instead of that he terrify them
jo is really a super mom calm down them
thanks for pm
do continue soon
Edited by sho123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mehak and Salim so cute...they tortured his father
Jalal can't handle his kids...so funny...
awesome update Sherry...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CindyTruong


<font size="3">Mehak and Salim so cute...</font><font size="3"><font size="3">they tortured his father
Jalal can't handle his kids...so funny...
awesome update Sherry...
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its not sherry, its mavi dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mavaddat

its not sherry, its mavi dear

😆 cindy got confused.
Afterall two best writers clashed. So she should get confused right.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update mavi
jalal try to console kids😆
continue soon
thnks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After long gap one wonderful chapter update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm

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