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Awesome story sis
Feel so sorry for jo
At first I felt sad for jalal having those aunties after him all the time
I truly thought he loved jo
But how can anyone rape the one they love
Was he always like that or did vasu brainwash him
I had hope for a happy ending but not all stories end happy especially when they're based on real life
My only comfort is that jo in future will have her kid
But has jalal left her completely or will he be back
Hoping u continue soon
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

part 1:-
joja's daughter so sweet Yaar..I guess both Jo n ja suffered alot,Jo coz of ja n ja coz of his mom..mom uff (weird Lady) huhhb..her boyfriend (Hahaha) Rofl seriously man!! she ditched her husband for this person OMG ..yucckk.
at last the story seems to be interesting.. :P Dnt kill me for this comment soru ,Hehehe.

part 2
huhh this lady toh. bad girl. :(
n now atgah took jalal to jodha's house Hehehe ..ohh Jo ja already meet before.. jo felt awkward ..I can understand wen sm relative come n we try to escape but at last end up facing them (Hehehe) .. nice chappy dear

part 3:-
OMG..jo 's mom Maham.. dt too so ehhh.Hahaha bechara jallu ..Kaha phasa diya yaar..cockroach, ehh yuck..phir Woh dance Hahaha ..I'll faint now..soru this was different from all those I read..Hahaha can't stop laughing..

part 4:-
m searching a place to hide now..srly man Maham Ku age difference Bhi Nhi pata kya Jo jallu pr line marr rahi h.apni age Ke oldman se flirt krti toh thoda smjh aata. :P ..hawww ja k room mein Jo ko entry marni thi Yeh Maham kyu aagyi ..huh lagta h Ab "bhaag jalal bhaag" dekhne ko milega.. BTW awesome dear.. can't stop laughing..

part 5
it was hilarious. dear..Omg aisi gift Koi deta h Aur Woh khol Ke dikhane Ki kya zaroorat thi jalal akele apne room mein dekhleta.
Hahaha yoga movie Hehehe.. haww sudden kisss ahem ,jalal left shocked jodha behind..

Chapter 1
wow interesting so Jalal hates women because of his mother but let me tell you one thing honestly I don't like womaniser and let's see how sweet Jodha changes him
Chapter 2
OMG Jalal's Mom is disgusting and Akbar was smitten by Jodha but Jodha's dialogue was very funny

OMG itna jaldi jaldi shaadi kyu karwa di re 😡

Chapter 3
Hahaha this chapter was very funny Jalal bana cockroach and Jodha served him kheer that's nice

Chapter 4
Hahaha Mahamanga is really tharki kaise line maar rahi thi Jalal pe and gave him new name ie golgappa too and He called Jodha Hot