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Congo for new story...
Prologue is interesting n hilarious.
Nd all characters hv dark shades except jo n few one.
Aur tune kya itne sare chrctrs gusa iye yahan.sari vvamp ek sath .
Upar se ja ki do wives bhi.
Gf tk to thik tha bt y tune wife bhi dikha di.
Itni sari gf main to confuse ho gayi ki inme sabse buri konsi h 😆 sb ja k paise pichepadi h .aur y ja to mujhs bilkhul pasand ni aaya 😡 iska bhai bhi iske hi jaisa h or frndbhi.
Bas jo hi acchi h
Aur laboni k bhi itne sare bf .
Vo bhi sare jokers lag rhe h.

Awesome prologue

Soru congo for new story dear
And itne saare characters
My head is spinning omg
Soru jajo kafi nahi the kya that u added viren and jeevika Sara's kumud and pata nahi koun koun
But I will give it a try :-) :-)
So update chap soon

omg sora 😲 jalal ki itni sari gfe aur biwis 😆 😆 Btn nice character sketch n congo for ur new stories.. ..n mujhe nai pata tha ki kaju ke bomb phodne se itne cool hair styles bann jate hai 🤣 🤣

Congrats on ur new story😊

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Congrats on ur new story😊

But so many characters are really confusing dear😕

Ur Jalal is too bad,hate him😡

Thnx for the pm.

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

mine ?😆haha dear he's not mine he is jodha's jalal

😳wo mera bhai ha

Bhai 😆 😆
Par soru tunhaa bhai aisa kyun hai 🤢

IMG soo many villanins ... Am scared to imagine Jo life...update soon and do pm

Originally posted by: avika444

Bhai 😆 😆
Par soru tunhaa bhai aisa kyun hai 🤢

Sorru firse pm kyun kia ff ka.