Akdha FF - ISHQ IBADAT updated teaser ch.22 on page123(01/04/2017) - Page 55

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update dear...
Jodha crowning went on so good...
Nd d speech given by jodha jalal was awesome. ...
I loved jodhas idea for food...
Nd last part was lovely. ...
Update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very beautiful story.the way you changed a womanizer jalal into a patnivrata jalal for me it is true and pure love,because if some one in love how can he intimate with others what if they are his wives.u have justified the love by changing jalal.i appreciate u for this effort.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update jiyu..
Woww jalal called baba salim chisti for jodha's crowning...
Baba predicted the danger on them..but assured that everything will be fine if they would be together...
Jodha was angry with jalal for sending her to amer but jalal very smartly refused to maina for sending jo...
Precap is fabulous
Thanku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates jiya...jalal nt only freed his kannez nd unwilling begums...but he also handled ruqu tactfully
Hehehe ruqs ne apna bhanda khud hi fod diya
Wow jo as malika-e-hind
This ruqs can never change...still she is showing attitude
Now what new prblms akdha will have to face???
Hope they don't have to suffer much
Continue soon dear nd thnks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
With each passing update, this fiction is getting more and more interesting... 😊
I just Love this LOVEY-DOVEY Jalal and CUTE and ADORABLE Jodha... ❤️
Haye... Itne ache lagte hai dono ek saath...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ch. 14 HOLI SPECIAL...

Jodha n Jalal start their journey 4 days earlier coz of jodha's wish to celebrate holi with her khanha in Mathura Vrinda Van. There was very big holi celebration held every year in Mathura by krishan devotees n this year as they going to Amer n Mathura comes in between jodha decided to celebrate holi with khanha n hw can Jalal say no to his jaan wish. They reached mathura one night before holi n set their camp near yamuna river n they decided to join holi celebration as commoners coz they want to enjoy their holi freely without any code of conduct of shenshah n mallika. In morning jodha n jalal changed into their favorite Badal n Kajari getup n visited main krishan temple of mathura they did pooja there though they strictly ordered no security for them but adgha arranged soldiers in commoners getup in their security without their knowledge. After finishing pooja jalal n jodha decided to buy colours n other necessary things for holi celebration n holi poojan in the night. While wandering in market holding eachother hand suddenly jodha stopped infront of one shop n she called Jalal in excited tone...

JODHA - shenshah woh dekhiye kitni sunder chudiya hai, hume woh chudiya chahiye she looked Jalal like small child who want toy from his parents Jalal smiled at her childish behaviour n said...

JALAL - jo hukum mallika, humari jaan ko yeh chudiya itni pasand aayi hai toh hum sari dukaan hi kharid lete hai jodha looked him in surprise n said...
JODHA - shenshah aap bhul rahe hai abhi aap shenshah nahi ek aam insaan badal ho aur koi aam insaan iss tarah se sari ki sari dukaan nahi kharidta hai hume bus woh chudiya chahiye jo hume sabse jyada pasand aayengi bus ab chaliye she hold his hand n dragged him towards bangle shop. Shopkeeper show them different different types costly bangles but jodha choose simple plain green n red colour bangles n Jalal helped her to wear them in her both hands. After completing their shopping they returned in their camp n after lunch they took rest till evening. In evening they went krishan temple for holika dehan pooja n to fullfill jodha's wish Jalal already informed pandit yoganand their plan to celebrate holi as commoners n he already planned everything that hw without reveal their identity they perform all special pooja n when Jalal and jodha entered in temple they heard pandit yoganand's announcement...

PANDIT YOGANAND - holi ke iss shubh avsar pe aap sab bhakhto ka yanha aakar iss holi samharoh mai bhag lene ki liye dhanaywaad, jaisa ki aap sab jaante hi he ki hum har baras nand lala ke saath holi manate hai parntu iss baras hum sab pandito ne kuch naya karne ka nirnaye liya hai iss baras hum na sirf khanha aur radha rani ke saat holi manayenge balki ek jode ko radha rani aur giridhar gopal ka roop dekar aap sabko yeh anubhav karane ka paryaas karenge ki kis tarah shyaam radha rani sang holi manate the aur iss baras jiss jode ko humne chuna he woh wanha mandir ke dwaar pe khade hai main unn se nivedan karta hu woh yanha humare pass aaye all people turned their heads to see lucky couple who get chance to celebrate holi like radha krishan n jodha looked Jalal in surprise n shocked who looking pandit yoganand with gratitude smile on his face n she understood everything n feel proud to hv husband like him who always fullfill her every small n big wish...
JODHA n Jalal changed into radha n krishan getup they looking heavenly beautiful n their pure love for eachother gv them a divine aura around them n all devotees feel like that radha krishan themselves came frm heaven in between them. JODHA n Jalal performed maha aarati of krishan n after that they all came out in open ground for holika dahan, jodha n jalal again did pooja near holika n after that they burned holika n take rounds around burning holika n while taking rounds they hold eachother hands n recalled their marriage vows again n after completing holika dahan pooja they thanked pandit yoganand for special pooja n came back in their camp..

JALAL n jodha was sitting on the shore of yamuna river under fool moon n Jalal watching moon while side hugging jodha n jodha leaned on his shoulder n drawing patterns on his chest with close eyes they just enjoying nature n their intimacy silently, after sometime Jalal broke silence n in very soft tone he called jodha...

JALAL - jaan...Jodha in same position said..

JODHA - hmmm...

JALAL - jaan aap khush toh hai na..jodha raised her head n looked him n with sweet smile she said...

JODHA - shenshah jisska jeevan sathi aapke jaisa ho woh khush kaise nahi ho sakta aap jaante hai hum issliye khush nahi hai ki humari khanha ke saat holi mananey ki iccha puri ho rahi hai balki hum issliye khush hai kyunki aapne humari yeh iccha puri ki hai shenshah aap saath hai toh har khushi dugani ho jaati he n she cupped his face n looked into in his eyes with lots of love n Jalal looked her with same love n passion n in next moment their lips touched n they kissed passionately under moon even moon blushed looking their passionate kiss...


Next morning Jalal wear white dress n jodha wear pink n white ghaghra choli they again went to krishan temple for playing holi with khanha n other devotees...in krishan temple first they did pooja n aarati n after that all played holi in temple with flowers after that they came out n in open ground all people gathered with different types of colours(gulal) in plates n colourful water in big tanks n in pichkaris...children already start playing holi with pichkaris n jodha n Jalal goes near colours plates n jodha lifts red gulal n did Jalal's tilak n after that she put some gulal on his feets n touch his feets Jalal raised her from her shoulders n with big smile he take some gulal n fill her maang jodha closed her eyes in happiness n Jalal smirk n said...

JALAL - jaan aankhe kholiye nahi toh baad mai aap kahengi ke humne dhokhe se aapko rang laga diya n jodha opened her eyes n with mischievous smile she said...

JODHA - rang lagane se pehale hume pakad ke toh dhikhayiye aap n she giggles n start running n Jalal runs behind n in background people start singing...

bhaghi re bhaghi re bhaghi brij bala brij bala...

n after some running jalal catch her from arms n put gulal on both her cheeks n all men n Jalal start singing...

bhaghi re bhaghi re bhagih brij bala brij bala...

khanha ne pakadaa rang dala...Jodha blushed n she raised her hand for colouring him but this time he run n jodha runs behind him n sing...

bhagha re bhagha re bhagha nandlala nandlala..

Radha n pakadaa rang dala...she catch him n colored his full face..

all sing...

bhaghi re bhaghi re bhaghi brij bala brij bala...

khanha ne pakadaa rang dala...

Bhagha re bhagha bhagha nandlala nandlala..

Radha ne pakadaa rang dala...
Now Jalal again coloured jodha completely with colour water n different colours gulal n circled his arms around her neck n sing..

Aadha hai rang aadha pyaar mera..

Oh aadha hai rang aadha pyaar mera...

Khil jaayega gori roop tera...

Jodha cupped his face n sing...

Becch bajariya rashte mai roka...

Beech bajariya rashte mai roka...

Baahiyo ke pehna di mala... she smirk naughty n pushed him n again run...

bhaghi re bhaghi re bhaghi brij bala brij bala...

khanha ne pakadaa rang dala...

Bhagha re bhagha bhagha nandlala nandlala..

Radha ne pakadaa rang dala...

All start flying gulal on eachother n in air in between colour rain Jalal catch jodha n sing...

behainay lagi rang go ki ganga, rango ki ganga...

Jodha trying to come out frm his grip n sing...

chedo na humko chodo yeh danga chodo danga...

Jalal hold her again with waist n sing...

behainay lagi rang go ki ganga, rango ki ganga

dekho yeh mukhdaa rango see ranga..

neela hara peela kala...

All start singing together n danced...

bhaghi re bhaghi re bhaghi brij bala brij bala...

khanha ne pakadaa rang dala...

Bhagha re bhagha bhagha nandlala nandlala..

Radha ne pakadaa rang dala...

After singing n dancing they played holi some more time n after playing they went to thandayi n sweet stall, first they eat some sweet gujiya n ladoo n after that Jalal asked two glass thandayi for jodha plain one n for himself with little bhaang but for his bad luck their glass exchanged witn eachother n jodha drinks thandayi with bhaang , after drinking thandayi they goes towards their camp n when they reached camp bhaang start showing its effect on jodha n she start laughing no stop n when Jalal asked her what happened she looked him n paused for few seconds n said kuch nahi n again start laughing n asked him she want jalebi n start crying like child for jalebi Jalal understood jodha drink his bhaang thandayi n as she never drink bhaang or alcohol its effect more on her n he thought its become very difficult for him to handle drunk jodha now n jodha start pulling his hair n hit her feets on ground n start crying loudly for jalebi n Jalal hold her hand n in panic tone he said...

JALAL - jodha chup khuda ke liye chup ho jaao rona band karo hum abhi aapke liye jalebi lekar aate hai par pehale aap chup ho jaao n jodha stop crying n said...

JODHA - hume jalebi chahiye abhi laao n start crying again , Jalal put his hand on his forehead n said...

JALAL - bus do pal ruko abhi laate hai n he came out running frm their tent n called haakima n cook..

JALAL - sabse pehale jaladi se jalebi lekar aao he ordered to cook n after that looked towards hakima n said...

JALAL - hakima shahiba jodha begum ne galti se bhaang peeli hai aap jaldi se bhaang ka asar kam karne ai intezaam kijiye n hakima node n said...

HAAKIMA - ji huzoor hum abhi ark lekar aate hai aap woh Mallika-e-Hind ko de dijiyega usse peekar unnhe neend aa jaayegi or jab woh uthengi toh bilkul thik ho jaayengi...JALAL took deep breath in relief but poor soul he dnt knw what waiting for him inside tent...after few minutes Jalal entered again in their tent with jalebi n find jodha sitting on couch near window looking outside n he smiled n thought she will be fine now n he came near her n called her n jodha turned her face n looked him with teary eyes n shw him her both hands fingers interwind with eachother n in sad tone said...


JODHA - shenshah yeh dekhiye na humari ungliya ek dusare se judh gayi hai aur alag bhi nahi ho rahi ab hum kya karenge humare toh haat bekaar ho gaye n she looked jalebi in jalal's hand n start crying loudly n said...

JODHA - humari jalebiya ab hum jalebi kaise khayenge Jalal kneeled down in front of her n put hand on her right cheek n in very calm tone said...

JALAL - hum hai na hum khilayenge apni jaan ko n he start feeding jalebi in her mouth n jodha with happy start eating jalebi from his hand like small girl n Jalal smiled on her cuteness n want to hug her but jodha again start sobbing n said...

JODHA - humari ungliya judh gayi humare haat bekaar ho gaye n Jalal trying hard to make her understand nothing happened but she continued her ranting ''humari ungliya judh gayi humare haat bekaar ho gaye"..JALAL thought...

JALAL - yeh haakima shahiba kab ark lekar aayngi iss tarah ro rokar jodha apni tabiyat kharab kar lengi ya khuda hum kya kare n one idea came in his mind n he hold jodha's face n start kissing her to stop her ranting n crying n though jodha was not in her senses but she also start participate n kissed him back n after few minutes they broke their kiss for breath n jodha start her ranting again..

JODHA - humari ungliya judh gayi humare haat bekaar ho gaye n Jalal slapped his forehead in frustration n looked her with helpless face...

After some time hakima came witth medicine n gv it to Jalal n told him drink it to jodha with water n Jalal node n ordered her to leave n after haakima leave with lots of difficulty he make jodha ready to drink medicine n after drinking medicine jodha sleep like baby in his lap n after few minutes Jalal also sleep in sitting position while caressing her hair...

NOTE :-

So friends this is my small holi gift for all of you hope you like this holi celebration with our lovely Akdha...

From my side n our shenshah-e-hind n Mallika-e-Hind of Ishq ibadat side HAPPY HOLI TO U ALL N UR FAMILY may god fill ur lives with colourful happiness like colourful abeer n gulal and with sweetness of love like sweet gujiya...

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Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
can't wait for next update
please update soon
happy holi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a lovely treat for us jiya
Loved it yaar
Jajo in mathura celebrating holi thats like a wish come true.
The song its so beautiful jiya
Enjoyed jalal and jodhas holi
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
HAPPY HOLI JIYA.
Mind blowing update .
So sweet ja always fulfil jo's every wish. Nice they did pooja as common man in Mathura.
Awesome their shopping n their holi.
So cute n adorable is drunken jo n ja so good hubby , he handled jo so peacefully without any anger.

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