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Sorry for late update guys...
Ch.8 part1
After ruqaiyya leave jalal sit on his knees n with teary eyes n pain on his face he looked jodha n jodha runs towards him n she also sit infront of him n cupped his face n said..
JODHA - shenshah hum bus aapko issi peedha se bachana chahte the isiliye humne aapko ruqaiyya begum ko dandh dene aur unnko kuch bhi kehne se mana kiya tha kyunki hume pata tha aapko apni mitra ko khone se bhut peedha hogi hume maaf kar dijiye shenshah humare karan aaj aapki sabse acchi mitra aapse alag ho gayi...jalal put his hand on jodha mouth n looked into her eyes n said..
JALAL - nahi jodha aisa mat kahiye aapne kuch nahi kiya kuch bhi aapki vajah se nahi huya he aap hoti chahe na hoti yeh aaj nahi toh kal jarur hota kyunki ruqaiyya ke liye hum kabhi usske dost isiliye nahi the ki woh hume dost maanti thi balki hum aur humari dosti sirf usske liye taqat aur auhada paane ka jariya thi yeh ek khokla rishta tha jisse aaj nahi toh kal tootna hi tha toh aap aapne aapko kabhi bhi isske liye jimmedar mat maaniyega samjhi aap n jodha node her head n said..
JODHA - parantu shenshah aapko peedha toh ho rahi hai apne mitra ko khone ki aur humse aapki peedha nahi dekhi ja rahi hai n jalal hold her hand n gv weak smile n said...
JALAL - nahi jodha hume dard nahi ho raha hai balki aaj hum bhut halka mehshus kar rahe hai jaise humare dil se koi bhut bada bhoj uttar gaya ho jaanti hai aap aaj hum jab bhi picche mudhkar dekhte hai toh paate hai ki humara aur ruqaiyya ka rishta kabhi bhi waisa nahi tha jo do dosto ya itne saalo se shadi ke rishte me rehne wale do logo ke beech me hota tha usske liye humesha se apne auhade aur apni khushi apni chahato se badhkar kuch nahi tha aur hume bhi kabhi iss se koi pareshani nahi thi woh iss sabse khush thi aur hum iss baat se ki hum apne waalid ko diya wada nibha rahe he par kyunki humare pass dil nahi tha aur hum bhi usski begamo aur baandiyo pe ki gayi badsulukiyo ka maza lete the par jab humari zindagi me aapaayi aur hume dil diya mohabbat karna shikhaya toh hume aihshas huya hum kitna galat the aur humne ruqaiyya ko bhi uski galatiyo ka aihshas dilaane ki koshish ki par woh nahi samajhi aur woh sab kiya jissne iss khokle rishte ko jo humare dil pe ek bhojh ban chuka tha puri tarah todh diya toh hum dukhi nahi yeh jodha n he looked in jodha's eyes n smile but jodha gv him sad smile n said...
JODHA - hum aapko aapse jyada jaante hai shenshah humse apna dukh apni peedha chupane ki koshish mat kijiye hum saaf saaf aapki aankho me jo dard hai na ussko dekh sakte hai aur aapke dil me jo peedha ho rahi hai woh n she put her hand on her heart n said yanha humare dil ko dhukha rahi hai n now jalal cnt hold it more n he huged jodha n start crying n jodha let him crying n after some time he stopped n said ...
JALAL - humein ruqaiyya ya uski dosti khone ka dukh nahi hai jodha par ab hum thak chuke hai ab humse aur saha nahi jata hai kyun humesha humare apne hi jinnhe humne apni zindagi me khaas jagah di kyun woh hi humare saat dhokha karte hai kyu wohi humesha humse humari khusiyo ko cheen ne ki koshish karte hai pehale khan baba jinnhe hum apna waalid samjhte the ne humse bagawat ki phir badi ammi jinnhe humne apni ammijaan se badhkar mana hume aapse alag karne ki koshish ki aur ab ruqaiyya ne hume itna bada dhokha diya kyu jodha kyu kya hum itne bure insaan hai jo humesha humare apne log humare saat aisa karte hai kya hume khush hone ka mohabbat karne ka haq nahi hai jo har koi hume aapse alag karne ki aur humari khusiya cheene ki koshish karta hai n jodha brakes their hug n cupped his face kissed his forehead n said..
JODHA - nahi shenshah aap iss sansaar ke sabse acche aur sacche insaan hai aapke dil me sabke liye bhut prem hai aapne apna har sambhandhh puri imaandari se nibhaya hai yeh toh unn logo ka durbhagaya tha jo unnhone aap jaise insaan aur aapse unnke sambhandh ko kho diya hai aur rahi hume aapse dur aur alag karne ki baat toh humara sambhandh ishwar ne joda hai chahe koi kuch bhi karle hume koi alag nahi kar sakta aur na hum kisi ko aisa karne denge hume aapse aur aapko humse koi bhi alag nahi kar sakta hai aur naahi ab hum kisi ko aapko dukh pahuchane denge aaj se har gum ko har dukh ko aap tak pahuchne se pehale humara saamna karna padega n she wiped his tear stand him up n said...
JODHA - chaliye ab bhojan kar lijiye aur phir vishraam kijiyega bhut thake huye lag rahe hai n she pull him but jalal stops her n jodha turns n looked him n Jalal with tired n sad face said..
JALAL - nahi jaan hume bhuk nahi hai hum bus sona chahte hai aapki aagosh mai sukoon ki neend lena chahte aur apne saat huye har dhokhe ko har buri yaad ko bhula dena chahte hai taki kal jab hum aapke saat apni zindagi ki ek nayi shuruyaat kare toh ateet ki koi bhi buri yaad ateet ka koi bhi bura saya humare saat na ho n jodha cut him n said..
JODHA - thik hai shenshah par humari khatir thoda sa kha lijiye aapko humari saughandh hai n jalal smile n without saying a word he follow her till dining table n jodha feed him with her hand like mother feed her child n jalal too feed her n after that jodha hold his hand take him to bed n make him sit on one corner of bed n now she goes other side of bed n laying on bed n open her arms n signal jalal to come into her arms n jalal with sweet smile on his face lay besides her n he rest his head on her chest n jodha circle her hands over his neck n dippen his head more on her chest n both close their eyes n sound of Jodha's heartbeats gv immense relief n peace to jala's heart while feeling eachother warmth both falling asleep dreaming about their new life with eachother n sametime in ruqaiyya's chembrer she is busy in her routine work of screaming,screeching,slapping hoshiyaar n making jalal poor by breaking everything in her chembrer again n again hihi...on serious note she swear to god that she will take revenge of her insult from jalal n jodha n destroy every heppiness of jodha n jalal n seperate them...
Next morning every n each person of haram n palace was present in diwan-e-khaas as per shenshah order n they all eagerly waiting for his arrival coz all want to know why he called them in diwan-e-khaas today n they all gossiping eachother about why he called them when they heard announcement of his arrival n they all standup n look the direction of his arrival n find jalal enter in diwan-e-khaas with jodha holdng her hand n all r shocked coz it was a first time when shenshah come diwan-e-khaas with his begum n that also holding her hand soon they come into there senses n all great both jodha n jalal n jalal smile looking their shocked faces n he went towards his throne n sit there n jodha went to her seat behind curtain n jalal watching jodha n said to himself..
JALAL - bus aaj aur jaan aaj ke baad aapki jagah wanha nahi humare pass yanha hogi n they share intense eyelock n jodha give him assuring smile that she will be with him in all his decisions n with that smile jalal looked around him n asked adgha that everyone is there as per his order n adgha nods his head n said..
ADGHA - ji shenshah sab kuch aspke hukum ke mutabik ho gaya hai aur aap elaan kar sakte hai n jalal give him smile n now he took long breath n said..
JALAL - aap sab jaan na chahte honge aakhir aaj humne aap sabko yanha kyu bulaya hai aur hum aaj aisa konsa elaan karne wale hai toh uss elaan se pehale hum aapse kuch baat karna chahte hai n he looked ruqaiyya who start fearing that jalal going to tell everyone about her fake pregnancy n but jalal give her his mischievous smirk n again said..
JALAL - toh jaisa ki aap sab jaante hai ki begum-e-khas ruqaiyya begum aur humne abhi kuch waqt pehale apni aulaad ko paida hone se pehale kho diya tha n listing this ruqaiyya start sweating in fear n jodha looked jalal in confusion that why he talking about ruqaiyya's pregnancy n jalal give her sweet smile n with his eyes he tell her wait n watch n he again start looked other people n said...

plz chk next post for reaming part. ...
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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JALAL - toh jab humne dusari baar humari aulaad khoyi jab dusari baar humari umeed tooti tab humne jaana ki umeed tootne ka dard kitna bada hota hai aur ussko sehna utha hi mushkil hota hai tab humne mehshus kiya jaise khuda ne humari umeed ko toda ussi tarah hum bhi toh har roz haram ki sabhi begumo ki umeed todte hai begume jo har roz iss umeed me sajhti sawarti hai ki aaj shenshah unnhe bus ek nazar dekh le taki unnhe aaj shenshah ke saat waqt gujarne ka muaka mil jaye par har roz unki yeh umeed toot ti hai aur har roz woh phir se yeh umeed bandhti hai phir se tootne ke liye n he looked everyone face n finds lots of questions on their faces n with serious voice he said..

JALAL - aap sab ab yeh soch rahe hai hum yeh sab aapse kyu keh rahe hai toh hum aap sab ko yeh sab isiliye keh rahe hai kyunki humara aaj ka elaan issi baat se juda hai n he again looked around him n said...

JALAL - toh aaj hum Shenshah Jalaluddin Mohamad Akbar aap sabke saamne yeh elaan karte hai aaj se humari sirf teen begume hongi jinnse humne kayede aur kanoon ke mutaabik nikaah kiya hai aur woh hai humari teen khass begume ruqaiyya sultan,salima sultan aur jodha begum innke alawa hum iss haram ki har aurat ko azaad karte hai jo kbhi jung me jeet kar kabhi nazraane ke taur pe yanha laayi gayi thi aur chahte huye ya na chahte huye yanha begum ki tarah reh rahi hai iss umeed me kab woh shenshah ka dil jeetengi aur unnhe bhi shenshah ki mohabbat milegi aur unki biwi ka darja haashil hoga toh ab hum kisi ko bhi iss jhooti umeed me ek jhooti zindagi jeene nahi denge after listening this all begum start crying thinking wht going to happen with them now after shenshah leaving them but jalal raise his hand n single them to stop crying n he said...

JALAL - aap sab roiye mat hum sabko iss jhoote rishte aur iss haram ki quid se aazad kar rahe hai par isska matlab yeh nahi ke hum aap sabko iss duniya me akele marne ke liye chod denge hum aisa kuch nahi karne wale n he looked adgha n order him adgha shaab ab aap sabko woh batayiye jisske intezaam karne ke liye humne kaha tha n akdha node his head in yes n said...

ADGHA - ji shenshah jaise intezaam aapne karne ke liye kaha tha waise hi kar diye gaye hai n he looked around n said jaisa ki aap sabhi ne abhi shenshah ka elaan suna toh ab hum aapko yeh batana chahte hai ki shenshah ne haram ki aurato ke baare me kya faishla liya hai shenshah ne inn sab aurato ke saamne teen raaste rakhe hai jinme se yeh apni marzi se jo raasta chun na chahe chun sakti hai aur woh teen raaste kuch iss tarah se...

Pehala - inn me se jo aurate nikaah karke apna ghar basana chahti hai aur jo yanha aane se pehale kisi se mohabbat karti thi aur aaj bhi usske saat apni zindagi bitana chahti hai aur agar woh insaan bhi unnse nikaah ke liye tayyar hoga toh shenshah uss se uss aurat ka nikaah karwa denge ya phir shenshah unn aurato ke rishte alag alag riyaasato me bhejhkar unnke liye makool insaan dhundhkar unka nikaah karwayenge..

Dusara - jo bhi aurate vaapis apne ghar apne logo ke beech lautna chahti hai woh laut sakti hai aur shenshah isska pura intezaam karenge ki unki aage ki zindagi chain aur sukoon se gujare unki har jarurat puri ki jaayegi unnhe kabhi koi kami nahi hogi..

Teesra aur aakhiri raasta - jo aurte yanhi iss haram mai reh kar apni baki ki zindagi gujaarna chahti hai woh yanha reh sakti hai par unnka shenshah se koi rishta nahi hoga na unka shenshah pe koi haq hoga shenshah unki har jarurat ka khayal rakhenge par ek shauhar ke naate nahi balki pariwaar ka mukhiya hone ke naate toh yeh teen raaste hai aap sabke pass toh aap jo bhi raasta chun na chahe chun sakti hai n jalal looked towards all begums n find some happy some sad n some confuse faces looked him n he smile n now he looked his ladylove n finds happy tears in her eyes n without saying a single word they understand each other feelings n emotion in that moment jodha feel relieved with jalal's announcement from this jalal took huge burden from her heart n she feel proud at her husband thinking n give him her beautiful happy smile...

Precap :- diwan-e-khaas continue...

p.s. i knw its boring update phir bhi plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments n sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes..



next chapter link...
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4514582&PID=129805401&#p129805401
Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updatr ... But yar ruku ka toh kuch hua hi nhi .. M kitni excited thi .. Chlo nxt update m dekhnge ... Jalal took decision regarding his begums ... Updatw soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update Jiya😃
This was an unexpected announcement😛
What u wrote abt Ruku was funny,making Jalal poor by breaking things🤣
Loved AkDha part❤️
Thnx for the pm and update soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
yaar amazing bohoth acha he muje achalaga all the para is very nice thank you for pm and please post soon waiting for next chap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow great decision by ja...jj moments emotional their feelings penned so well ...continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chappi
feeling bad for jalal bcoz of rukaiyya he have to face so much pain
but jodha is their for him as always
jalals decision for her all ladies of harem is absolutely right and respectful
last jalal and jodhas unspoken words was wow
thanks for pm
continue soon
great work dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
will read after tomorrow exam😊
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Nice updatr ... But yar ruku ka toh kuch hua hi nhi .. M kitni excited thi .. Chlo nxt update m dekhnge ... Jalal took decision regarding his begums ... Updatw soon



hihi sorry to disappoint you but jaisa jalal ne kaha tum begum-e-khas rahogi hum thumara audha nahi cheenge toh ruq toh rahegi dear n i also keep her in my story coz band jo bajani hai usski... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear...
1st part was lovely... nd emotional...
d way jalal breakdown was so sad... nd jodha handled everything very well...
nd dek part was superb to...
jalal options for other women was superb. ...
update next part soon...
nd thanks for pm. ...

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