FF Hearts in the ....dark chp 1 pg 1 15/1

IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Twinnie...first of all a biggg hug for updating...🤗

It was such an amazing amazing chapter darling! ⭐️

You have written everything so well..👏..It is hard to tell that the writer is so young! ⭐️

So Bharmal has died...and that too because of Jalal...

And my Jo has set out on revenge...⭐️

It is a really interesting start buddy! 👏

I loved the character of Jodha's God Father... It seems he has a good bonding with Jodha...😳

Looking forward to reading more and more from you darling! 😳⭐️😳

Please update soon! 😃

Thank you for the PM...😃

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Res...me fourth...
You finally updated twinnie...⭐️

ya😳😉😆

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Namita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

amazing update swara!

well written!

jo is a princess living in the forest..

her father is no more

was he killed by the moguls?

update soon!

thanx for the pm...😊

and happy makarsankranti to u as well!

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Hii swaru ... Thank god update kr dia ...😆 .. tujhe pta h m iss story ko bilkul bhul gyi thi ... Prolgue bhi firse pdhna pada ...

Nice update but lots of confusion ... Jodha having same dream ... But how come jodha knows jalal nd y will jalal do something like that ... Bharmal died nd jodha was thinking it is done by jalal .. But from last lines i dont think it is done by jalal ...

Update soon for clearing my confusion😕😆

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sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

finally u updated swara
about chappi its awsm
jodhas journey in fear thinking about some bad happening
then that riddle paper
jodhas father died but why she put blame on jalal
and ya what's that horrified dreams
about last part that was a little bit confusing I mean war but with whom and why
continue soon
and do pm me

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Awesome update swaru..
Ohh so jo was dreaming all that..
Hwww her father died :(
but how come jalal is responsible for that??
Will be waiting for nxt chapter...
Thanku for pm

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Priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

It's awesome yet complex... 😊
Post next part soon...

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divya joshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

vry nice start..
tnx for the PM..

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
congrats swara for ur new story...
nd superb update. ..
update soon. ..
nd thanks for pm. ...

thank you rakshu di😊

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
Its different and interesting Swara 😃
Very well written 👏
Many new names of ppl and places 😛
Thnx for the pm.

Happy Sankranthi dear 😊

thank you so much bindu di

glad you liked it😃

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