Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi // TH - 3 closed :-) :-) . - Page 106

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

DI... 🤗Akku 🤗
YOUR FOURTH GIFT... 😆 How sweet yaar, but u know this is the best out of four , I didnt expect this one really
IS THAT I HAVE READ TILL CHAPTER 8... 🤣 Wow like really u read till chap 8 😊👏

SO I'M STARTING NOW... I'm reading 😉

FIRST OF ALL I WANT TO SAY THAT ALL CHAPTERS ARE AWESOME DI...shukriya 😃
JALAL AND JODHA R CHILDHOOD FRIENDS...

Yup they r child hood friends
BECHARI JO... SURYA DIED...poor him
JO IS PREGNENT...😲 Don't get shock 😆
JALAL'S VIRGIN... 😆 How was that ??😉a
OMG ... AWESOME CONCEPT DI...😆 I know ,😉
JALAL ACCEPTED JODHA... 🥳Ab woh nahi karega toh koun karega 😳
SO CUTE... 😳 Yess 😊
JODHA'S BUA... 😡 Aah forget her
I WANT TO KILL HER...😡 U can ,poori choot hai
HUMAYUN ND HAMIDA R ALSO VERY GUD...
JALAL SLEPT ON COUCH... BECHARA... 😆
SO SAD... 😆 Why bechara ?? Can't he sleep on couch for jo??
JODHA KO THODA JAGAH DENA CHAHIYE THA NA... 🤣 Diya na ,next day 😉
I THINK I'M MISSING SOMETHING... BUT I CANT REMEMBER IT NOW...no problem
WHEN I WILL REMEMBER I'LL COMMENT...
AND HAAN HAAN I WILL READ THE REMAINING 3 CHAPTERS SOON...akku I'm happy that u read till chap 8
TAB TAK..
UPDATE SOON...updated next part too

AND SORRY FOR SO CHOTU COMMENT...
AND MORE SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT...😉

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

CHAPTER 10

Lovely Update Mauli 👏 hey bangaram thanks a lot dear

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it 😛 hapy to know this ra

The way Jo's parents were anxiously waiting fr their daughters first visit after marriage was so realistic.. u portrayed the situation as if its happening naturally..yess bangaram I tried my best to show it as realistic as possible

Finally Maham left 😆 she will come soon 😉 don't be so happy

Loved the mute convo of our beautiful couple😉 bidaayi with eye locks 😉 kya Karen everyone is present there na so they have to learn a new language which only they can understand 😉

Office part was nice.. Jalal handles event management business.. interesting !! Business tycoons and all was routine so thought of this idea , its good na ,we can organise so many events 😉

Surprise of EVAB was Hoshiar khan !! Thanks to Nishu 😊

Yess no one included hoshiyaar till now 😆 credit goes to nishu of course

Couldn't stop rofl at Jallu's siatuation 🤣 u had a good laugh that means I'm successful ,u know this part was not so easy for me

Maina's eagerness to know Jo's sasural ki khabren..😆 loved maa beti ki gupshup 😊naa mummy kuda adigindi so thought every mother gets worried about her daughter like this and so I included .

Jo praised her hubby n lost in his thoughts.. confession se pehle yeh haal toh baad me kya hogaa 😉 even I don't know ,hope banda pagal na ho jaye 😉

Jalal got busy with his work so much .. poor him forgot to call his wifejaan 😕 first day of office na ,so he got totally involved in the project and all

And gabbar begum got angry .. her anger so cute.. bechara Jalal😆

Sukanya's endless teasings .. lovely.. Gabbar has to get angry na becoz he was the one who talked about missing and all

Overall nice chapter avi 😊I'm so glad that u liked the chap dear

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter yet emotional too hehehe tha ks dear ,these emotions will make their bond more and more strong

JJ mute convo started again...poor Jalal how tensed he was ..trying to clarify his condition to sasurjee😆 Its not easy for him get forgiveness from his stubborn wife. Mute convo is to show how well they understand their unsaid words bangaram ,jalal has to e tensed ,he know his gabbar well na 😉

And Mirza adding fuel to fire.. Suku no less to mirza started teasing Jalal... Mirza and sukku always in a teasing mode

Bechaara ... 100 percent 🤢...😆 >>> 😆😆

Jo's mrchi treatment 😆 hayee... too much avika.. U😡 made JO bring tears to Jallu..Sherrif banda he was didn't even complain to Maina😲 After seeing his tears Jo pacified😡 Loved the whole scene.. U brought it out Very well👏finally petty MU created by Mirza was cleared ... And also the big issue of their lives . unborn child..He poured out his heart to JO...made her sppechless once again.. Hehehe sorry for being rude with jalal but he deserves that punishment 😉 aww Jo can't see him in pain ,yess the big issue of the child Finally it sorted out, I want Jo be full confident about jalal's love for that unborn child, I don't want her keep any kind of guilt in her mind

Emotional part .. . brilliantly written👏

Your Jalal is the bestest friend nd best husband of the world😊😊

..yess my virgin jalal is the best 😆😆

Originally posted by: Susan.Dsouza

as i said yesterday i start reading this ff seriously u written it really well

but avika thoda se romantic scene b hum dekhna chahte hai

Originally posted by: avika444

Hehehe I know Susan and u will get them too

But their love journey will go on a slow pace

They have to get over with their best friends tag and realise that now they r husband and wife

Then u will will get romantic scenes 😉

Originally posted by: Susan.Dsouza

ek baat bolo yaar ye surya ke baby mujhe kata lag raha hai joja ke bich sorry for this😆

kya uss ke safaya nahi ho sakta i hope what i mean🤣

Originally posted by: avika444

Yaar Susan u too 😆😆 khair I know yaar Surya ka baby hai toh sabko kaata lag raha hai

But don't see them as jodha and jalal of our serial ,ek normal ladki ki tarah Jo ko imagine karo and socho ki uski kya situation hai ,yeh society mein kisi ke saath bhi ho sakta hai and beleive me there r people who choose to go with the child despite of the problems they r facing .

Mere liye Jo ek normal ladki hai ,muz jodha ya shehnshan jalal nahi.

So no safaya of baby dear . SORRY