2 OSES AS A BIRTHDAY GIFT FOR PAYAL-HAPPY BDAY PAYU

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Monucute

So plan kro naa didus 😆!!! Plssh!!

hmmm sochenge thik hai... 😆 😉

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Rinky Contractor

@Rinky19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Happy Birthday Payal!!

Awsm Thread Guyss!!

Just Loved it!!

Keep it up!!

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Rinky19
Happy Birthday Payal!!
Awsm Thread Guyss!!
Just Loved it!!
Keep it up!!

thnx rinky... 😳

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

The both of OS is tooo Superb Awesome and Beautiful

You both is really great Harshu and Geet 👏

And it's a lovely thread too dear❤️

Happy Birthday once again Payal 🤗 🥳

Sorry for my very late comment dear

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: erning_w
The both of OS is tooo Superb Awesome and Beautiful
You both is really great Harshu and Geet👏
And it's a lovely thread too dear❤️

Happy Birthday once again Payal🤗🥳

Sorry for my very late comment dear

thnx dear...m happy u liked it... 😳

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: harshu27

thnx dear...m happy u liked it... 😳

I'm not like it Harshu

But Love it ❤️ 😳

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: erning_w

I'm not like it Harshu
But Love it❤️😳

ohh sorry loved it... 😆 but its good to get good responses from all d frnds... 😳

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Wonderful thread harshu🤗

Beautiful OS ... I can see lots of improvement from ur first One shot..

Beautifully written...Impressive beginning.Jo's attachment with her MIL,how her relationship with Jalal step by step lead to the confession and Jalal gifted Payal😉 to his beloved wife😃Loved it .. I think Its time to start ur own FF harshu. .We r awaiting...Plz do write more..Sorry for late reply hehe better late than never naa😉

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Wonderful thread harshu🤗
Beautiful OS ... I can see lots of improvement from ur first One shot..
Beautifully written...Impressive beginning.Jo's attachment with her MIL,how her relationship with Jalal step by step lead to the confession and Jalal gifted Payal😉to his beloved wife😃Loved it .. I think Its time to start ur own FF harshu. .We r awaiting...Plz do write more..Sorry for late replyhehe better late than never naa😉

thnx dear 🤗 oh u found more improvement thnx 😉 m happy to knw... 😳 ff 😆 will think dear...its ok u r never late... 😉

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Geetu 🤗

Beautiful OS dearie .. I was in fairy land through out the story..Jodha decked up in ship full of flowers... how beautiful..couldn't help but imagine Jodha in englishthani pink gown...truly fairy tale..Jalal went to search his fiancee.. he found her.. nd taken her to his land..nd again a twist of cranes talking .. Abdul becomes stone nd he talks to Jalal... he sacrifice his kids.. they will become alive at the end...they lived happily ever after ... Loved it .. Thoroughly enjoyed reading..

Flowers are the sweetest things God ever made and forgot to put soul in it-- Henry Bucher.. how true..

Plz do write more often.. keep up the good job geetu👍🏼