2 OSES AS A BIRTHDAY GIFT FOR PAYAL-HAPPY BDAY PAYU

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harshal

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hola frnds m bk with my spl thread ya but not retro thread its my 2nd os for my sweet frnd payal hey payu hope u will love dis os and wish u a v happy bday...and ya there is one more surprise even geetu has written an os for u so both of us r going to present it to as ur bday gift...I will b posting her os in my thread so njoy ur double gifts and frnds do like and comment on both of us oses I mean my os and geeta's os...would luv to read ur comments... 🤗 😉

Jodha was welcomed in Agra in a grand pomp by her sweet mother in law Hamida and sister in law Bakshi Bano by making d hindu dasis to sing d welcome song making jodha feel homely and overwhelmed in a place where she had thought that she will never ever will b able to get adjusted to its environment and d people with totally different background...

Jodha was slowly and steadily getting adjusted to her new home in agra and y not she had a great moral support of her mother in law hamida sister in law bakshi and last but not d least salima begum and d cute lil rahim who slowly was playing d role of a cupid between jalal and jodha unknowingly bringing them together...

Dayz passed weeks and so do d months too it had been almost a year and by now jodha was v well adjusted and attached to husband's place and to be more specific to jalal too...both started spending time with each other and liked each other's company too ...she had really started understanding him and realized that whatever she had heard about him before her marriage wasn't true he did had a kind heart and had faced so many betrayals from his loved ones so he made a concrete wall around his heart to save from further receiving heartbreaks from d betrayals of his loved ones...and she was getting success in breaking that concrete wall protecting his heart and by doing this she was unknowingly falling for him and dint really understand her new feelings towards her emperor husband

same was d condition with jalal he had slowly falling for her got to know her likes dislikes he knew that jodha wasn't like his other begums who only loved him for his outer appearance for d power and materialistic things...she was indeed a princess with golden heart...he also came to know about her talent in each and every field she had her presence of mind intelligence and always got to know her new hunars whenever he met her giving him a feeling as if he is meeting her for d 1st time...he used to always be eager to know more about her...

Hamida was d one who meticulously observed all d on goings between jodha and jalal and y not being a mother she was v happy to see them together as she knew her son v well that he was truly feeling lonely from inside inspite of having so many wives and people around him she could feel his craving for true selfless pure and unconditional love and she was v much confident that she was none other than jodha who would truly complete him and be his soul mate...hamida prayed daily for their happiness and togetherness...

Jalal was in his room just admiring at d painting which he had got it painted after he had been to amer(remember d one he got it painted in my 1st os) and he finally came to a decision that he had to confess his feelings to his lady love but how when where and what will she think will she reject him or accept him..so many questions were going in his mind but he shrugged it all...looking into those big doe shaped xpressive eyes of jodha's painting he confessed...

hum aap se betinhaa mohabbat karte hai jodha (m not interested to put d suffix begum as I alwayz felt it formal)aur hum aapke bina reh nahi paayenge hum aa rahe hai aapse humari dil ki baat karne aapse mohabbat ka izhaar karne ...(english transaltion:I love u v much and I cant live without u...m coming to confess my feelings my love for u...)

Morning sun rays was falling on d beautiful face of angelic sleeping beauty which made her get up from her peaceful and dream slumber as usual after her daily chores and her puja she went to offer Prasad to jalal who used to practice with his sword alone or with his soldiers...but today something was missing rather jodha was missing jalal as she got up late and he had already finished his practicing as he had some important work to discuss with his ministers in DWK and had finished with his daily routines early

jodha's face which was blooming like a morning glory had fallen sad which was clearly visible from her xpressive eyes which dint go unnoticed by her best friend moti who was observing her every move from jodha's room and when jodha had returned back she asked her

kya hua jodha tumhara mukh murjhaye ful jaisa kyun hua hai...? ...?(english translation: what happened jodha y ur face looks like a dried flower) ) hearing this jodha with her sad tone kuch nahi hua shenshah aaj nahi deekhe une Prasad dena tha (English : nothing moti today shenshah wasn't seen and couldn't give him d Prasad) moti somehow controlled her smile and said toh aapko iss baat ka bura laga ki aapko unka darshan nahi mila ya fir une Prasad dene nahi mila...?( ...?(English: so u r upset cz u dint get a chance to meet him or to give him Prasad)

to which jodha with anger pouted and said said aisa kuch bhi toh nahi hai ...(English: nothing like that I was just) hum toh bus and stopped further not knowing what to say...moti understood her restlessness d uneasiness and convinced her to accept her feelings for jalal as it was of no use to hide it since all d begums, including her mother in law hamida gulbadan begum bakshi all in harem in palace etc could clearly see that both loved each other immensely accept the duo...jodha could feel her heartbeats raising just at d site of confessing her feelings to jalal making her blush like kashmiri apples... Finally jodha had to give into moti's request and finally decides to confess her feelings to jalal but she was restless as to how and where and when will she get a chance as she cant speak her feelings in front of everyone...but fate was on her side to bring both d love birds together ...and d day of confession was soon to arrive...

Today was a special day as d loved birds were supposed to confess their luv for each other and jalal had planned to give jodha something special which she loves a lot as a token of confession. jalal had finished his work quickly so that he can get ample of time to get ready to meet his lady luv he had decided to spend whole evening and if possible whole night with her and at that moment a beautiful face came in front of his eyes making his handsome face adorned with a killer smirk... he got ready and picked up d gift which he got for his beautiful begum and left to meet her but before checking himself in d mirror

Jodha on d other hand was waiting eagerly to meet jalal as one guard had already given her jalal's message in d morning that he wanted to meet her alone on d terrace...she had got ready before time only with green colored dress as she knew it was jalal's fav color and simple make up with kohl in her large beautiful doe shaped eyes made her look like angel descended from d heaven...

In an excitement to meet him she had reached before jalal and waited for him to arrive...she wasn't aware y did he wanted to meet her on terrace of her palace alone and this was making her more nervous raising her heart beats all d more at d same time she had planned to confess her love to him...finally jalal arrived seeing her in green colored dress and that too in his fav color he was mesmerized by her beauty...and got lost in her till he was brought back by jodha's sweet voice... ...pranam shenshah...adab jodha... ...(English: hello shenshah hello jodha...) for sometime there was silent in d atmosphereas it was late evening a cold breeze was blowing giving both a chilled effects on their body heart and mind too increasing their nervousness to d core...to break d ice jodha spoke up

aapne achanak yaha humare mahal ke chath pe hume kyun bulaya aap kuch humse akele me baat karna chahte the ...?(English: u did u suddenly call me to meet me alone on my terrace...what do u want to talk to me...) Jalal dint knew what to say woh... hum... Haan... hume aapse kuch kehna tha hume aapse humari dil ki baat kehnthi aapse... jodha...ji matlab jalal nahi matlab wo hume bus hume aapko kuch dena tha (English: jalal: I was like ya I wanted to speak up my feelings to u...jodha: pardon me... jalal:nothing I mean I was just wanted to give u something...)

and told her to close her eyes she was really xcited to see her what gift he had got for her...he picked up an anklet from a red silk pouch and made it wear on her ankles...the noise the cold feeling of d metal made her realize what it was and with d excitement in her beautiful doe shaped eyes she opened and felt as if she was on cloud nine...thou she was hesitant and had an awkward feeling too as her hubby had made her wear d anklet...as she had never allowed him to touch her feet... but this time d feeling was totally different and d reasons too ...IT IS SAID THAT D EYES CAN SPEAK A LOT WITHOUT D PERSON SPEAKING ANYTHING THEY CAN NEVER DECIEVE U...here d case was same jalal could easily see her happiness in her large doe shaped eyes this made his heartbeats rise and finally not waiting for more time or else his heart would burst thru his ribs he decided to confess it no matter what happens...he kneeled down and declared his feelings to her...

Jodha hum aapse beintehaa mohabbat karte hai..aap humari dil ki mallika hai...woh aap hi hai jinone humare seene me bhi dil hai iska ehsaas dilaya...hum aapke bina nahi reh sakte hum ye baat aapse kehne wale the per andhar hi andhar hume darr lag raha tha ki kahi aap hume thukra na de kyunki hum aapse naa sune ki taqat nahi hai hume me..

hearing this heartfelt confession from him tears started pouring from her beautiful eyesand hugged him saying hum aapse bahut prem karte hai shenshah... aapse bahut prem karte hai shenshah... for both time stood still their hug had transferred them to heavenly feeling which they dint wanted to break it...after sometime jodha breaking d hug admired his gift and jalal was busy admiring her face which glowed all d way more making his heart stay at peace and asked her

kya aapko ye payal pasand aaya jodha...jodha haan shenshah aapne di hui hare k cheez humare hridhay ke karib hai aur isilye hume bahut pasand aayi jodha haan shenshah aapne di hui hare k cheez humare hridhay ke karib hai aur isilye hume bahut pasand aayi... saying this she rested her head on his shoulder to stay in her lil heaven forever......(ENGLISH:Jalal: I love u v much and u r queen of my heart...u are d one who made me realize that I do have a heart...I cant live without u...i wanted to confess this to u since a long time but had fear from inside that u will reject me and ur rejection would have broken me from inside...Jodha:I too love u shenshah...jalal: did u like my anklet? Jodha: yes shenshah all d gifts which u gave are closer to my heart and so I loved it v much...

SO GUYS HERE IS MY BORING OS PLZ DO LET ME KNW HOW IT IS... 😆

HEY FRNDS I WOULD LIKE TO THANK KRINA FOR HELPING ME OUT RATHER D CREDIT OF MAKING BANNER GOES TO HER...THNX KRINU FOR MAKING SUCH A WONDERFUL BANNER... 🤗

Edited by harshu27 - 10 years ago

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HERE M POSTING A WONDERFUL OS ON BEHALF OF MY SWEET FREND GEETU... 😉 GEETU AWSUM OS KEEP WRITING MORE... 😉

Faithfullness ultimately brings its own rewards.

In a beautiful palace there lived a king called Humayun who fell sick one day. He had many servants; among them was a trust worthy young servant Abdul khan... who won the heart of the king by his dutiful nature... The king was on his death bed ...so he said, "let faithful Abdul come to me.''

Abdul was his affectionate servant and was called so because he had been true to him all his lifetime. As soon as Abdul came to the bedside, the king said "Abdul khan, I feel that my end approaches me soon...and I am worried about my son who is still so young and nave that he cannot guide himself always right... I will be not there for him in future and I want u to be his guardian, as u are elder to him and he is friend of you, if u does not promise to instruct him in everything he ought to know and be his guardian, I cannot close my eyes in peace."

Abdul answered, "Your Highness, I will never leave him. I will always serve him truly, even if it costs my own life." "So the king was very happy and said; now I can die in peace. After my death, you show him all the chambers, halls, and vaults in the castle and all the treasures which are in them, he is unaware of all that being away from the palace since his childhood, living his life as a soldier in battle field. But the last room in the corridor, beside the stairway which leads to terrace you must not show him. Because in it hangs a beautiful portrait of the daughter of the king of Amer... She is his fiance. I and King Bharmal have fixed their alliance when they were kids...Now I don't want him to marry her as she brings bad omen on my son as per our royal priests if they get married. As per the priests words.. If he sees her picture, he will fall in love with her head over heels and will swoon on her account will undergo great troubles in future. Therefore you must keep him away."

Abdul pressed his master's hand in token of promise and a little later the king took his last breath... after the King's death his Son JALAL KHAN arrived from the battle field to complete last rights of the funeral. After few days of his dad's funeral he was crowned as an Emperor of Mughal Dynasty... Days, months, years passed and Jalal adjusted himself to the new responsibility and learnt many things from his friend/guardian/ brother...When Jalal celebrated twentieth birthday Abdul thought now it's the right time for the prince who had now become Shehenshah to know his inheritance. And he took him to show his ancestral castle.

So he took the prince all over castle...it's upstairs and downstairs and showed him all the richness and all the splendid chambers filled with treasures. Only one room he didn't open containing the portrait of Amer princess... The king asked him, "Why didn't u open that one?"

But the young king said, "I have seen rest of the castle and I will know what is in there" and he went and tried to open the door by force. The faithful Abdul pulled him back and said, "I promised your father before he died that you shall not see the contents of that room. It would bring great misfortunes to both you and me."

"Oh, no", replied the king. If I don't see I can't sleep peacefully in the night or in the day. Now I won't leave this place till u unlocks the door."Now it was impossible for Abdul to stop him that it was of no use talking to him so, with heavy heart he took the key and opened the door of the chamber. When he had opened it, he went in first and thought to cover up the portrait that the king should not see it. But it was no use for the king stepped upon tiptoed and saw what he was not supposed to see and as soon as the he saw the portrait of the maiden which was so beautiful and glittered with precious stones, he fell down on the ground insensible.

"That is the daughter of the king of Amer, and your fiance." replied Abdul...

"Oh, really!! Is she my future wife? My fianc?

Why I was unaware about this fact that I'm engaged to the Amer princess...My JODHA.

Oh, Abdul! I am smitten by her beauty; I'm deeply in love with her that I can't imagine my life without her.

Adgah interrupted him, saying "she had bad omen for your future and this kingdom". Hence your father didn't want u to marry her... That's the reason we hid this secret from you.

Jalal turned towards him, having fury in his eyes controlling his rage he said, Abdul! I don't believe in all this... what I want is her now. My life is set upon the search for her. You are my faithful, like my father figure to me. So you have to accompany me.

The trusted servant deliberated for a long whiles how to set about this task for it was very difficult to get into the presence of the king's daughter. At last he found a way and said to the king, "Everything which she has around is of flowers- chairs, tables, dishes, bowls and all household utensils. She is very fond of flowers and I think even she don't know about your engagement with her. It was called off when you were 15 years old, few years back by your father during his last days. Among your 10,000 acres land, many gardens are there which are filled with beautiful flowers of different species which is endemic ... lot of the gardeners and horticulturist of your kingdom will interbreed and cultivate variety of orchids...Then will try with these and try our luck".

Jalal called all the horticulturists to interbreed different varieties of flowers which aren't seen elsewhere...It took months for the researchers to get the result. They came with mesmerising scented flowers which brings bliss to those who smells it. When all had been placed on aboard a ship, Abdul wore the clothes of florist and the king likewise so that they might travel quite unknown. Then they sailed over the wild sea and sailed away until they came to city of the Amer.

Abdul told the king to remain in the ship and wait for him. "Perhaps ", said "I shall bring king's daughter with me... Therefore take care that all is in order and sat out all the flowers and adorn the whole ship."

There upon, Abdul took out some bouquets of rare species of wild orchids which were endemic to Agra and went straight to palace. When he came to castle yard, a beautiful maid stood in the garden plucking lilies after finishing her work when she turned around found a strange man and asked who he was..? Abdul was stunned to see the maid herself decked in floral dress.

Abdul answered, I'm a flower merchant , and opening his box, he showed her its contents of beautiful orchids of purple and rare combination of colourful scented flowers which are hardly seen in that region. Then she exclaimed, "Oh! What a beautiful flowers!" and said our princess must see these." And taking him by the hand, she led him in for she was the Lady's maid.

When the princess saw the bouquet of orchid flowers of purple colour...she liked them all and said, "They are wonderful flowers with mesmerizing fragrance .I will purchase them all."

But Abdul replied, I am only the servant of a rich merchant; "what I have here is nothing compared to what is there in our ship. Nothing, more beautiful and colourful flowers ever seen here in the world."

Then the princess wished to have them all bought... but he said, "It would take many days and so great is the quantity and while bringing here they may lose their charm as they are so delicate".

Then her curiosity and desire to see the beauty of the flowers and feel the fragrance increased and more excited and at last she said, "Take me to the ship. I will go myself and look at your Master's treasure".

Then Abdul took her to the ship with great joy and the King Jalal when he beheld he saw that her beauty still greater than the portrait had represented and thought that his heart would jump out of his mouth. When she stepped on board, wearing floral dress of beautiful pink roses not looking less than a celestial nymph. Jalal took her hands in his giving her support to get in. When their eyes met they lost in each other's eyes...feeling contented seeing his beauty in front of him he escorted the Lady in.

Dutiful friend remained near the deck by the steersman and told him to unmoor the ship and put on all the sails that it might fly like a bird through the air.

Meanwhile the king showed the princes all the varieties of flowers of Daffodils, Roses, lilies, tulips, Chrysanthemum, bird's paradise, passion flowers, Gazania, Plumeria, Dahlia, Orchids, water lilies,Magnolia...etc.

"Flowers are the sweetest things God ever made, and forgot to put soul in it" - HENRY BUCHER.

Many hours elapsed while she was engrossed in the beauty of the flowers, in her joy she didn't remark that the ship sailed on and on. As soon as she had looked at the last and thanked the merchant, she wished to depart. But when she came on deck, she perceived that they were upon the high sea, far from the shore and were hastening on with all the sails. "Ah", she exclaimed in fright, "I have been betrayed. I am carried off and taken away in the power of a strange merchant I would rather die!"

Jalal took her by the hand and said, "I am not a merchant ... but a king and equal to you in birth. More than that, I am your Fianc. When she hears the word Fianc she exclaimed JALAL! She become dumb for a moment as it was too sudden to digest it. Do you know about our engagement? He asked. She replied, yes! I came to know about it when it got cancelled and my father died due to stroke when he came to know about it. He continues, "It is true that I have carried you off. But that is because of my overwhelming love for you. When I first saw the portrait of yours, I fell down in a swoon before it".

When the princess heard these words, she felt reassured and her heart was inclined towards him and so, she willingly accepted him and took him in her embrace and become his bride.

It was long journey of four days in ship. In that period, they came to know about each other likes and dislikes... and Jalal and Jodha came emotionally together. One day he proposed her taking Red bouquets in his hands and said will u be my side till eternity. She replied, I, do!

We couldn't agree more! Indeed God is an artist and flowers are one of his best creations! Flowers have very short life span but undoubtedly a very significant one.For ages, this wonderful gift of nature has been helping us express our emotions and feelings! And these flowers have brought us together.

While they thus on the their voyage on the high sea , it so happened that faithful Abdul sitting on the deck of the ship, playing music, saw three cranes in the air who come flying towards them,. He stopped playing and listened to what they were saying to one another for he understood their language perfectly.

The first one said, "The king is carrying home the daughter of the king of Amer." "But he is not home yet", replied the second. "But he has her", said the third, "she sitting by him in the ship."

Then the first one began again and said, "What matters that? When they go on shore, a fox coloured horse chariot will spring towards them on which he will mount and as soon as he is on it , it will jump up with him into the air so that he will never again see his bride."

The second one asked, "Is there no escape?"

"Oh yes, if anybody mounts behind quickly and takes out the gun which are in the holster and with it shoot the horse dead then the young king will be saved. But who knows that? And if anyone knows it and tells him, such a person will be turned into stone from the toe to the knee."Then the second spoke again, "I know more.. even if the horse is killed, the young king cannot still retain the bride for, when they come into the castle, a beautiful bridal shirt will lie there upon a dish and seem to be woven of gold and silver, but it is nothing but sulphur and pitch and if he puts it on, it will burn him to his marrow and bones."

Then the third crane asked, "Is there no escape?"

"Oh yes", answered the second. "If someone takes up the shirt with one glove on and throws it into the fire so that it is burnt, the young king will be saved. But what does that signify? Whoever knows it and tells him will be turned into stone from the knees to the heart."

Then the third crane spoke, "I know still more... even if the bridal shirt be consumed, the young king cannot retain his bride. For, after the wedding a dance will be held and when the young queen dances, she will suddenly turn pale and falls down as if dead and if someone does not raise her up and take three drops of blood from her right arm and throw them away, she will die. But the whole body of the one who knows it and tells it will be turned into stone from the toe to the crown."

After the cranes had thus talked with one another, they flew away and faithful Abdul who had perfectly understood all they said was from the time very quiet and sad for, if he concealed from his master what he had heard misfortune would happen to him and if he told him all, he must give up his own life. But at last he thought, "I will save my master, even if I destroy myself".

As soon as they came on the shore, it happened just as the crane had foretold and an immense fox- coloured horse sprang up." CHARIOT! Said the king... "This shall carry me to my castle' and he tried to mount ... but the faithful Abdul came straight up and swinging himself quickly on , drew the firearms out of the holster and shot the horse dead. Then the other servants of the king who were not on good terms with the Abdul exclaimed, "How shameful to kill the beautiful creature which might have borne the king to the castle."

But the king replied, "Be silent and let him go. He is my very trustworthy servant. Who knows the good he may have done?"

Now they went into the castle and there stood a dish in the hall and the splendid bridal shirt lay upon it and seemed nothing other than gold and silver. The young king went up to it and wished to take it up. But faithful Abdul pushed him away and taking it up with his gloves on, bore it quickly to the fire and let it burn.

The other servants thereupon began to murmur, "See, how he is burning the king's bridal shirt!" But the young king replied, "Who knows what good he has done? Leave him alone. He is my faithful Friend."

Soon after this, the wedding was celebrated and a great ball was given and the bride began to dance. So, the faithful Friend paid great attention and constantly watched her countenance. All at once she grew pale and fell as if dead to the ground. Then he sprang up hastily raised her and bore her to a chamber, knelt beside her and drawing three drops of blood out of her right arm, threw them away. As soon as she breathed again, she raised herself up...but the young king had witnessed everything and not knowing why Abdul had done this, he was very angry and called out, "Throw him into prison!"

The next morning trusted friend was brought up for trial and led to the gallows and as he stood there and was about to be executed, he said, "Everyone condemned to die may once before his death speak. Shall I also have that privilege?"

"Yes", answered the king, "it shall be granted to you". Then his friend replied, "I have been un righteously judged and have always been true to you," and he narrated the conversation of the cranes which he had heard at sea and how, in order to save his master, he was obliged to do all he had done.

Then the king cried out, "Oh, my most trusted Abdul, pardon, pardon...lead him away!" But Abdul had fallen down at the last word and was turned into stone.

At this event both the king and the queen were in great grief and the king thought, "Ah, how wickedly have I rewarded his great fidelity!" and he had the stone statue raised and placed in his sleeping-chamber near his bed and as often as he looked at it, he wept and said, "Ah, if only I could bring you back to life again, my faithful friend."

After some time, the queen bore twins, two little sons Hasan and Hussain who were her great joy. Once when the queen was in temple and the two children were playing by their father's side, he looked up at the stone statue, full of sorrow and exclaimed with a sigh, "Ah, could I restore you to life, my dear friend Abdul!"

At these words the statue began to speak, saying, "Yes, you can make me alive again, if you bestow on me that which is dearest to you."

The king replied, "All that I have in the world I will give up for you."

The statue spoke again, "If you, with your own hand, cut off the heads of both your children and sprinkle me with their blood, I shall be brought to life again.''

The king was terrified when he heard that he must kill his two dear children. But he remembered his friend's great fidelity and how he had died for him and drawing his sword, he cut off the heads of both of his children with his own hand. And as soon as he sprinkled the statue with the blood, life came back to it and trusted Abdul stood again alive and well before him and said: "Your faith shall not go unrewarded..." and taking the heads of the two children, he set them on again and anointed their wounds with their blood and thereupon they healed again in a moment and the children sprang away and played as if nothing had happened.

Now the king was full of happiness and he saw the queen coming. He hid Abdul and the children in a great closet. He said to her, ' My dear queen, we can restore his life, but it will cost us both our little sons whom we must sacrifice."

The queen was horrified but she said, "We have to sacrifice our sons."

Then he was very glad that she thought as he did and unlocked the closet, brought out Abdul and the children saying, "God be praised! He is saved and we have our little sons", and then he told her what had happened. Afterwards they lived happily together to the end of their life.

This OS is inspired by a Kid story.

Edited by harshu27 - 10 years ago

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Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Payu🤗
Wishing you many more Happy returns of the day...
May your special day bring that all your heart desires.
Happy Birthday dearie!

Blow the candle and make a wish that your heart desires to fulfill😳

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On your B'day,
make your friends go green with envy.
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wishing you 'evergreen' Birthday😃

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Edited by Geetbaala - 10 years ago