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Posted: 9 years ago
Life without you last update

Part a
HAMIDA ask HUMAYUN n maina for akdha getting married they replied in yes n very soon as date z already fixed but unknown to Jo n JALAL
There convoy heard by Ahmed Mohammed
He planned to ruin Jo JA marriage
JALAL n JODHA came to know about there parents planning of their marriage there happiness has no bounds

Marriage to be held within 5 days only some people are invited
JOS cousins n friends n jalal cousin n friends
Time passes away
5days went in a flip of second now the day of marriage

Jo was getting ready in her room whereas JALAL was next to her room .
Both of them really excited
When Jo heard knocking sound on door she opened it n saw waiter on door having glass of orange juice
JODHA ask him who send it he lied that JALAL send it but it was send by Ahmed he mixed some kind of drug in it

Jo take it close the door n kept olit on table
She again came n sat on bed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Life without you last update

Part a
HAMIDA ask HUMAYUN n maina for akdha getting married they replied in yes n very soon as date z already fixed but unknown to Jo n JALAL
There convoy heard by Ahmed Mohammed
He planned to ruin Jo JA marriage
JALAL n JODHA came to know about there parents planning of their marriage there happiness has no bounds

Marriage to be held within 5 days only some people are invited
JOS cousins n friends n jalal cousin n friends
Time passes away
5days went in a flip of second now the day of marriage

Jo was getting ready in her room whereas JALAL was next to her room .
Both of them really excited
When Jo heard knocking sound on door she opened it n saw waiter on door having glass of orange juice
JODHA ask him who send it he lied that JALAL send it but it was send by Ahmed he mixed some kind of drug in it

Jo take it close the door n kept olit on table
She again came n sat on bed
JALAL was also very excited but somewhere his mind is warning that something bad going yo happened but he ignored it

Maulvi ask HAMIDA n maina to bring groom n bride down
Ahmed smirk when maina went upstairs unknown to him that he will get biggest shock of his life
HAMIDA bring Jo down . Main a JALAL

Both sit in front of each other only one cloth was their barrier
But still Jo n JALAL can see each other through that cloth

Ahmed was in shock how come Jo z OK don't she drank the juice
He cursed his fate
His plan get failed
Maulvi did rituals Jo n JA get married
Ashna was more than happy
As she can sleep between her mom dad ppr soul don't know that her dad will not leave her mom for days and night

Jo JA took blessing of HAMIDA n HUMAYUN
JALAL ask Jo to take blessing from maina but she said that she z nothing to her if he want to take her blessings then he z free to do that
Then Jo heard someone saying that
She z your mother n will your mother
Everyone turned to see the owner of voice n was shocked
JODHA was shocked as maina also JALAL was confused n his friends n cousins too whereas HAMIDA n humyun were also amazed
Ahmed never ever thought this in his life he was scared more than shock
JALAL heard Jo saying dad in soft low voice
He came to his senses n saw the man standing on door, he saw his photo with Jo
Then JODHA run to him n hug her father .
Maina was still in shock until she feel someone hand on her cheek
She saw her love her hubby, she got tears in her eyes .
HUMAYUN came to bharmal n hug him n ask how r you?
Bharmal replied on god mercy I was almost dead if u were not there
Everyone was shocked with this revelation

Part b

HUMAYUN said don't say like this I was not the one who save u, its u only whose courage n faith on god help u
Then again hug him . JALAL ask HUMAYUN
Abbu do you know him, n if you know about h then y u didn't tell to anyone of us
HAMIDA also ask the same
Humyun look at confused family members n then he look at Ahmed he was trying to escaping but he held him by his arm n snapped him hard by which he fell on ground everyone get shocked .
JALAL help him to stand n said what z this abbu
HUMAYUN replied he z the one who did this, he kidnap bharmal, he make maina babhi life hell . He make her suffer a lot
Bhatmal also came n held Ahmed through collar n said
When u get unsuccessful in your deeds then u make pawn my daughter n my wife! Han?
How dare u? Then he punch on his face
Jo was shocked she ran to her father n said
Dad what r u doing? He don't cheat anyone its mom who cheat on u on me by sleeping with other men randomly
N shut her eyes started crying
Maina closed her ears by this allegation
But bharmal support her
Bharmal said Jo its not true ur mom loves me only, she z mine only . He create misunderstanding b/w u n ur mom
He black mailed me when u took birth, he z psycho
He kidnapped me n make me n ur mom suffer a lot .
He made ur mother very very sick to live on his condition n she marry him just to rescue you from this devil hands coz he want to ... bharmal kept silent as he can't continue even he cant think like this about his daughter n closed his eyes
But Jo pressurized him to tell what he want to do
Bharmal continue on his daughter insisting that he want to raapp... ra... pe.. rape.. you..
JALAL HAMIDA n JODHA was shocked with this
Jo look at Ahmed with teary eyes n said u did this, n I thought that my mo ... mom.. mom z at fault
Started crying
JALAL can't see Jo like this he immediately hug her n ask her not to cry
Jo look at her mother fold her hand ask forgiveness
But maina held her hands n said no beta u r my princess .
M not angry with u, u were suffering Luke I was so stop crying n hug her both mother n daughter cry till they feel their heart light

HUMAYUN ask police to arrest Ahmed but JALAL interrupt n said abbu no police will arrest him afterwards but I want to return him something which he gave to my jaan then look at Jo
He went to Ahmed lunch him hard on his face n said u gave pain to my angel she cried every night, she spend sleepless nights . Just coz of u again he punch him
Third time he was about to punch but Jo stripped him n said don't make ur hand dirty by beating him
Leave him
JALAL look at Jo n Jo to JALAL both eyes get locked . They were not talking but their eyes were pouring every words to them, then JALAL leave him n police arrest Ahmed

Bharmal maina n Jo hug each other
Bharnal kissed maina on forehead naina cried her heart out

All were happy
At night on dine
Everyone having dinner but Jo JALAL were not having tget were looking at each other
Dinner finished Jo JALAL in their room
They play with ashna n talked with each other about their past 3 years life.
Then lights switched of they make love after 3 years

Morning rukku came to know about JALAL marriage with Jo .
She thought to kill Jo but then jalal's eyes full of love when he stare at Jo flashes in front of her .n little ashna n jajsl giggles flashes in front of her
She creid cried n cried
She lost her uncle n now JALAL also but she saw someone standing in front of her she immediately ran to him n hug him
N said m sorry m really sorry, please forgive me asad please .
As ad careers her hairs n said its OK
He then parted himself from her n kneel down in front of her said
WILL U MARRY ME RUKKIYA
WILL U BE MY BETTER HALF
rukku smiles through tears n nod positively
Both smiles each other n hug each other

After 3 week
HAMIDA n HUMAYUN were paying with ashna n they saw Jo
Jo was feeling dizzy, she somehow manages herself n sat near hsmida
HAMIDA ask her everything z fine she gets shy n said yes
HAMIDA understands n kissed her forehead she told HUMAYUN also
JALAL was looking at his wife standing on stairs he smirks at her n came sat near her
She hug him n said I love you JALAL
JALAL said love too jaan
HUMAYUN said that this time I want junior JALAL
JALAL said sure abbu n Jo blushes

Happy ending.
Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update mavi
Excited for jajo marriage :-) :-)
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely ending
Thank's for the pm Mavi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Vry nice update...
HAPPY ENDING...
tnxx for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow superb ending...
Lovely update..
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update dear...
Wow.. junior jalal... nice ending...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice chapter with so many twist update reunited nest chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow mavii..
super updates both prt was awesome..
ginally evrthing will be fine in last..
n we hav a lovely beautyful Happy Ending..
loved it dear...
thanks fr pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ending and beautiful happy family bharmal also coming and tell the truth wow all are geting together really amamzing dear thank you for giving wounderful story.

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