Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi //** thread 2 closed - Page 23

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Avika akka... Rakshu 😊 how r u??
loved this update a lot...thanks ra 😳
wow haha maham becom phuphi... in this story nice... only relation change but like they say v can't make dogs tail straight like that only maham is but like other part of her which she came up on her own maham is not that bad ra,she has her own set of values and she follows them,no matter what others think ,but slowly we will change her too 😉
wow so jalal is feeling something something for jodha nw... u knw akka I remember that song after reading that part... Which song ra?? Something Something 2 andaru lonu undi something ?😉
as all was jalal was awesome with his mind blowing answer to his phuphi make jodha knw new side of jalal I salute you akka for that part... love it a lot...happy that u liked that part bangaram 😳
last part was lovely jodha stubborn nt to cry as she had told jalal she didn't want to hurt her bestie 😳
update next part soon akka...will update soon ra
sorry for late reply akka had exam today...no problem, I understand 😳
thanks for pm akka...
love u for this update. ...

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Mouli darloo 😊 geetu 🤗🤗

Awesome blossom update dearie thank u so much dearie

I enjoyed thoroughly reading whole chappy.😃 Really really happy to know this ra

U are an awesome writer Mouli..😊 That's really a huge word for me, I don't even consider myself as a writer 😆 awesome writer is something beyond my imagination ,thanks ra

Awe our handsome Jalal was spellbound by beauty of his better half ☺️ making her uncomfortable by his gazes..and he himself was confused why he couldn't take his eyes off from Jo... Jalal completely bowled by her charm 😳 Apni jodha hai Hi itni beautiful , anyone will be mesmerised by her beauty and jalal is no exception ,haina??😉

They got blessings from every one and Walima ceremony took place nicely with Maham's presence with her darting glare to his family...she could not ignore her bhatija..

>> jalal is everyone's laadla 😆

After ceremony she took left and right of Jalal's parents for marrying Jalal to a girl from diff religion...at some point she might have accepted her but carrying other khoon...she didn't bear...making Hamida and Humayun quiet...with her questions.

How can she say to terminate the prenancy and abort the child..maham is maham 😆

But the way Jalal handled the situation is outstanding.

He accepted Jo's child as his, shocking Maham.poor maham 😆

He maturely said that child is his now..she is his Sherikehayat.

He cleared her that it wasn't the mistake of Jo..

What was the fault of the innocent child in that...?

Jo was amazed by this side of Jalal which she had never noticed in him..jalal this matured aide is totally alien for her and she will fall for this jalal only 😉

She felt secured by this gesture of his..and asked him to sleep on the same bed

>> she trust him 😉

Outstanding piece of writing.. Slowly their love train left the station and waiting to gear the speed.. Yes geetu their love train left from station, hope it reaches the destination soon 😉

Continue soon will continue bangaram 😳

Thanks for the pm dear. 😳

Originally posted by: bhargavikrishna

awesome

Originally posted by: Monucute

Avi di 🤗monu 🤗
Lovely chapter 👏 thanks dearie 😳
My jaan kitna sweet likte ho aap!! Kya karoon monu ,I'm not good in other geners
Jalal has started developing feelings for jo.. Yess 😉
And I hope jo doesn't take much time to recognize her'...hope so 😉
The way Jalal made maham understand is commendable glad u liked it dear 😳
Love it didu thanthanks dear

Love you❤️

Originally posted by: AnnSoosan

Nice chappy di

Originally posted by: shreyalovesja20

Lovely update dii thank u so much shreya 😊

Really enjoyed reading it glad u liked the update

Continue soon will continue soon

Thanks fr pm

Originally posted by: melovesja

congo for new thread dear.🤗 loved the update. valima ceremony in full swing and ja too can't stop looking at jo and praise her twice new fillings take place but most praises thing is what the shock he gave to maham that his child was superb he respect and love buwa but he very well ans. for jo's purity and dignity and forever he shuts the badmouthing from any one. for future of the child . hats off to him and applause for save that unborn child who is not at fault and that stress which jo go through. excellent. writing.thxs for pm.

Originally posted by: mushat

Reswaaa😉
unres 😊
dii superb update as asual.. Thanks nishu 😊
I told you before too
I really felt bad for Maham 🤣 my maham is also innocent here 🤣
and her struggle... Poor maham 😆
really liked that jalal humayun hamida everyone loves Jo sooo much..ab Jo hai Hi aisi 😉
Jo is so lucky and blesses that she got this family... That's true 😊
Maham to mahman h 😆 aur kya 😆
hayee in this chapter we got to see so many things.
Jalal's support .his stand for Jo and Their unborn ..and also maintained his respect.. hayee surely m gonna fall for him 🤣 I'm waiting for that day too 😉
and the last scene was so beautiful.. playful jalal 😳 hehehe hope u found that part interesting yaar 😉
continue soon dii ..will continue soon
and Congo too 75 likes 👏
love you dii 🤗

Originally posted by: mushat

yes I
found u beautiful today. Happy
now .waise bhi I didn't do
anything wrong , MAIN APNI
SHARIKEHAYAAT KO DEKH
RAHA THA KISI DUSRE KI BIWI
KO NAHI he smirked
😳😳

>>> he was right HAINA ??? Ab Jo is his wife so has every right on her 😉
she is my wife now phuphi and
the life inside her is my child ,he
uttered stressing on the word
ufff that MY👏👏
muaaahhh .

Ab when he married Jo ,toh uska baccha bhi jalal ka hua HAINA ??😳
Again a playful smirk spread on
his face ,he asked ,r u sure
jodha ?? Hope u don't regret it
later ,he winked😉
dii what to say...

Hehehe jalal is back to his palyfull mode 😆

I loved every shade of this Jalal 😳 ab yeh mat kehna ki mujhe apne ff ki title badalni padegi

DIFFERENT SHADES OF JALAL 😆😆

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Congrats for the new thread... Avi...

Thanks a lot becoz Jalal didn't asked to abort the child of Jodha... Instead of that he supported Jodha... Only few men has that ability... In ur story Jodha didn't do any mistake... But still she is facing all the worries..

Thanks a lot again,.. Nice chapter... Wonderful... Heart touching...