AKDHA FF -My stolen dreams part 16 updated pg 196, June 30 - Page 85

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. So many developments between JaJo and their families.
I'm so glad that we r going to get d next chappy soon.
No need to change yr way of writing. The story is amazing. Everybody has thier own style of writing and u must have already chalked out d story outline. Just stick to it.

Luv u Prema

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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz update epilogues of A Spontaneous desire and My Baby's daddy.
Just to remind u; in case u've forgotten yr story.
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Originally posted by: mama17

Plz update epilogues of A Spontaneous desire and My Baby's daddy.

Just to remind u; in case u've forgotten yr story.


Hey spontaneous desire epilouge has been already posted plz have a look once
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...i love ur all stories.they are all passion laded ..i love ur jalal,his passion his yearning,his aggressive love making.in each ur stories he compleltely changed after meeting jodha and becomes one woman man and this virtue of his makes him adorable..my God ...the sensation u create in his craziness for her is unbearable a sweat torture...this is TRP of ur writing and some people want to alter it the very soul of ur writing skill.please Prema do not change ur way of writing. my baby'daddy epilogue is due prema please update if time permits.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mickeymini


Hey spontaneous desire epilouge has been already posted plz have a look once

Hey! I know it. I follow this story.
That epilogue was updated a long ago. At that time she had told, epilogue 2 will follow.
So, I'm asking for epilogue 2.
Thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago


Part 16



Jalal came back home in a pissy mood ...without even saying hi, walked over, picked her up and carried her to bed, begins stripping off her clothes and did not stop till he had his way with her ...rough wild angry frustrated purely animalistic sex ??? Jo's mind was blown ...he over powered her ...finally slumped "urgh..." he grunted ...

"the things you do to me Jodha ...I'm never going to have enough of you" he hovered above her "what are you doing to me?" he whispered gasping for air, rolls off her

"I was just about to ask you that" Jo angrily hissed feeling used, sit up... "what's this about? Hate, ...Hate sex? ... You hate me now Jalal?"

Without saying a word gets out of bed pulls up his pants, tucks his shirt in, raising an eyebrow stares at her and walks away towards the wet bar, pour himself a drink, picks up his phone

Looking over the pillows, she glances back at him, how could he be so cold ..she cursed her body for eventually responding to his touch, for giving in and meeting his wants ... she did not like what just happened ...he came and took what he wanted without saying a word ...not even a kiss

Walks back towards the bed drink in one hand, phone on the other, "so, who is the guy that came to visit you when I was not home?" Jo stares at him dumbfounded wondering how he knew, was he having her watched ...her face suddenly paled

"are you spying on me Jalal?, having doubts, you don't trust me?" giving him a pointed suspicious glare, he avoided looking at her

"Yes, I have you someone following you 24/7 ... Safety reasons ...I don't have to explain why ...you did not want to meet my family because you had arranged to meet him? ...did you give him the security code?" he looked cold and collected with no emotion ... calmly checking his phone ... "how did he have access to come up" he sounded cold ... very different from the person that was moments ago touching her intimately ... sits at the edge of the bed begins typing on his phone ...

"oh, so you don't trust me?"

"That's not an answer Jodha"

"I will answer any questions you have, just look at me when you talk, stop playing with your phone Jalal"

"I asked you a question first Jodha" he says again without looking at her. She does not answer, scoots off the bed, begins picking up her clothes off the floor

He pauses his typing and looks up at her, quirks his eyebrow "are you or are you not going to answer me" leans and leaves his drink on the night stand, gets up and walks to her, grips her shoulder...

Jo stops, looks up at him "did you have a fun time in bed just now?" she questions as anger was building in her

His eyes flashed anger "another question, Jo, just answer me" he snickered

"No, I will not, ... not until you explain to me why you being so rude and cold all of a sudden ,,, Jalal"

Then it strikes her ... he did not trust her ...without saying it in words he had accused her ... "what happened to honesty and trust?" she was disgusted "I can't believe you, he is my brother Sujamal, he came with my father, you saw him ...I did not know he was coming back later ... That's beside the point Jalal ... So that's why you made feel like a tramp, messing with my mind after I willingly threw all my inhibitions for you?"

Frowning, cracks his jaw, shrugs and throws his hands up in the air "Jo"

She grabs her robe and wraps herself enraged, stutters ... "I hate you Jalal, my father, ...he said in front of you ... your uncle, your mother and your wife told him that we were sleeping together .they could have, I don't know and I don't care how my father found this place, I am glad he my brother came and visited me, atleast they trust me"

"What?" he snapped ... then pauses, throws his head back and laughs ... "Rukiaya talked to your father, she signed a non disclosure agreement which she broke the moment she picked up the phone ..." Begins dialing "and if I can work this out right ...if my lawyers can work it out right ..." pauses, looks at her smirks, "this is who I am Jodha, no one double crosses me, I rule myself, take it or leave it, either way I can't change who I am" nods and walks out laughing while talking on his cell phone "Abdul bhai, I have a new lead"

Jo stood watching him, his voice faded as he walked into his office and shut the door...was pissed, completely pissed ... frustrated at his audacity, his lack of concern for his actions ... feeling dirty takes a shower, standing under warm water, closes her eyes recalling what happened less than an hour ago ... his actions, his attitude echoed in her head...tears rolled down her ... realizing she had messed up big time by getting involved with Jalal ...doing what he wanted ...agreeing to his terms, to his conditions, her brain worked overtime trying to understand his behavior ...all her life she dreamed of a simple yet perfect relationship, a tinge of regret laces with her thoughts ... she wanted to hit him where it would hurt the most ...what kind of punishment could she give one who thinks he is above his own rules? She would have to hurt him emotionally ... recalls him telling her "it will kill me not hearing your voice everyday" her logic felt reasonable to her...

She quickly got dressed and packed up her bags, sat in the middle of the bed staring at her packed bags waiting for Jalal ... she went to tell him she was leaving but he was busy on a conference call, did not notice her ...she rehearsed, and re rehearsed what she would tell him in her head over and over again ...the door finally opened an hour later, Jalal walks in looking tired and sweaty ...he stares at the packed bags for a moment before sitting down, tries to reach for her, she scoots away ... he had pushed her too far... he sits near her feet, his hands trembles as he takes her hands into his giving them a tight squeeze, lifting them to his lips

"You're leaving" he whispers, his cold lips graze the back of her hands, looking deep into her eyes, Jo nods pulling her hands away "You're leaving" he repeats again


"Yes" she whispered "we both need time alone, away from each other to think ...sex is the only way you communicate with me" she moves away "you are a grown man acting like a teenager going through puberty Jalal and after all that you don't trust me ...it hurts ... I will not put up with it any longer ... I may have agreed to your whims and fallen prey to your charms ...but guess what? It is not an excuse to treat me the way you did this morning ..." he frowns, opens his mouth to say something, his face dropped as her eyes welled up

Jalal had seen many women cry because of him and it did not bother him at all, but her tears bothered him ... she made him feel things he never felt before, made him see things ... he himself could not understand why he went berserk when the doorman reported "she came down and took him upstairs, then 3 hours later he left" her bodyguard had not reported this visit ...anger clouded his judgement

"We need to talk about this Jo, give me a chance to explain" he pulls her into his arms "I'm sorry baby, I can't let you go, you can't run away when things get complicated, that's not how I do things"

"You are a hypocrite Jalal, you took it upon yourself to judge me, did not give me a chance to explain before you treated me like your wh**re... No, its too late, I have decided I don't want your explanation anymore Jalal, I can't stay, I need to go" tears poured down her cheeks as she pulled away

"And you know me so well?" he snaps

"No, Jalal, I don't, I don't know you at all, all I know is you deepest and darkest sexual desires, every time we are together, it is only about meeting your sexual appetite ...every conversation we have ends with me being under you or on you naked in bed ... I would like to know you for you , your likes, dislikes hates, loves, but emotionally you have build a wall around you ...

He stood quietly looking at her, feeling hopeless, he always was in control of his emotions, but with Jo it was different, he felt like he was loosing ... control of himself ...the fact that he was willing to throw everything away just for her ...

"Please Jo, just hear me out" his voice filled with remorse begged

"I have to go Jalal, please, I'll keep in touch, I have already arranged to be picked up" with that she walked way dragging her bags. Stops at the door, turns and looks at him, their eyes lock, her lips quiver

He wanted to grab her, stop her, but he just stood quietly watching her leave, he texted his bodyguard Ali ...his pride would not allow him to follow her ...if she needed time and space away from him, then by all means he would give her that ... he needed time of his own to deal with family, his sister's marriage and his divorce ...he also had business to take care of, he wanted to explain, he wanted her to know that he needed her, but since she walked away, he would walk away too ... Relationships were complicated ... when his phone binged, text from Ali his bodyguard "pickup by father and the guy" he reads the text over and over again ...she had already planned to leave

It had been a week since she walked out of Jalal's penthouse, a whole week of not seeing him, talking to him, ... she did not follow him on twitter ...it was pure torture ...but it had to be done, her subconscious mind kept telling her ...he did not call, text or email ...

The day she walked out and got into the car her father told her "His wife Rukiaya is pregnant, beti, she is waiting to surprise him with the good news at this NY office inauguration celebration, I don't want my beti to get baduas from a pregnant woman and her family" her father had told her when she got into the car that day ... went on to tell how Mr Sultan contacted him 2 weeks ago giving him details of his daughters affair with his son in law ... "I ignored him but when Jalal's mother and wife called me I could not ignore it, I asked Sujamal to investigate, yesterday I met Mr Sultan at the airport and he begged me to help his pregnant daughter ...so I came to see for myself, knowing his crooked ways I did not trust him I asked him for proof and about an hour ago, I got these" he hands an envelop to Jodha, she opens and sees Rukiaya's blood tests, paternity tests, ultrasound results, blinded by tears she continues to read the doctor's notes Jalal's wife was 9 weeks pregnant ...he slept with his wife a month after she moved in with him ... She blinks quickly in an attempt to keep the sudden tears from escaping her eyes ...

Her mind wandered, wondering how long he had been double timing her with his wife ...sleep did not come that night, she tossed and turned ...did her best to muffle her sobs, heard her father outside her door several times throughout the night

Later that day ...

"He lied to me Moti" she sobbed "he told me he had no physical relations with his wife, promise me you tell him anything about me" her initial reaction was to confront him but decided against it, his wife wanted to surprise him with the news and she did not want to spoil Ruks plan.

"Jodha, beti, you knew and accepted him the way he was ... life is as simple or as complicated as you make it to be ...you cannot blame others for the happiness or sadness in your life, do what your heart wants, " her dadimma made her problems sound so simple

"But dadi, my heart disagrees" Jo wondered how her life got so complicated

Her father stayed back in NY arranging for her to transition back home to India "you need to start afresh, ...you just made some bad choices beti, but don't think about your past anymore, I can find much better alliances for you in India and you'll forget Jalal, soon, he will be history" She spent the following day moping around the penthouse wondering if she'd made the right decision, he heart disagreed ...Jo wondered if he still had his security team monitoring her, she hoped they still did, in a twisted kind of way it felt comforting to know he cared ...

Jo ran into Salima at the shopping mall "I liked you with Jalal, I don't know how to explain it, but you two just seem to click together, I know he is overbearing at times, not like normal people, I guess that's why he is so successful because he really does not care ...but he is very different around you Jodha, .. even though I don't the details of why you two ended it, I hope it was for the right reasons and not because someone scared you"

Jo wished she could tell Salima the sorted details but legally she could not, she had also signed the NDA and knowing Jalal's vengeful nature she gives up the idea but instead tells her "we had different view on things and I could not handle his lifestyle, soon he'll be divorced and free, he can go back to his old lifestyle"

Salima looks at her thoughtfully "I'm sorry to hear that, I don't want to see you hurt" she squeezes her hand "I know he is in love with you, he's bummed since you left him, he's thrown himself 100% into work, he has been in some remote part of Russia and has shut everyone, even Abdul"

Jo did not want to hear anymore ...she did not want to break her resolve ... "I don't want to know anything about him Salima, please"

Jalal returned back to NY, walks into the penthouse, wipes his eyes as memories flood his vision, enters his bedroom, heads straight to the wet bar and grabs a shot, kicks the bed post again and again in frustration, uses his hand tugs and pulls off the sheets ...chokes and stumbles backwards ...pulls off his jacket, shirt, unbuckles and his belt free from its loops, kicks off his shoes ...and slumps against the wall closes his eyes, mentally undresses Jo, recalls her writhing under him, enjoying his touch ... yells, screams ...his chest heaved as something with him crumbles ... wished he could turn the clock back ...wished he had run behind her and begged her to stay, wished he had buried his pride he looks at his stubbornly silent phone, she had not called, had not texted, his pride still would not allow him to seek her out personally but decides to email her

He opens his laptop and begins ...does not know how to proceed ... recalls his conversation with Surya "Moti tells me she does not need you Jalal, she is leaving next week back to India, her father has convinced her to leave you and forced her to agree to his plans ...to marry the person his choice "

His conversation with Surya bothered him ...would she really get into a relationship with another man, he calls her, she does not pick up, texts her and waits, she does not respond ... decides to call her dadimma her grandmother was his biggest supporter, she always told him Jodha and he were destined to be together... "Jalal beta, if you really care about her you will know what is bothering her the most, think beta, give her time, she is going through a lot, she is a wreck and is falling apart, she too is hurting Jalal, her heart is torn two ways, everything her father her said made sense to her already confused mind... I can't give you the details but try to look at life from her point of view" and assured him "patience will get you both through because you both have that once in a lifetime kind of relationship"

Jalal could not figure out what her father could have said but he knew deep down in his heart what bothered her the most ... his married status ...being the other woman in his life ...how could a simple misunderstanding bring such a big divide? ... but he agreed with her grandmother "she needs to find you on her own, in her own time without you putting any pressure" He needed to give her time, but a small voice in his head told him the more time he gave her ... the more time she had, to walk away from him.

He decided right then to come clean, calls and talks to Rukiaya and tells her everything about his relationship with Jodha ending with "I want to be free of lies and start over ... our marriage was a mistake from the get go, every time I see you, I think of your father and how he cornered me into marrying you ... I don't see you as one of my choosing, Rukaiya, ... you are attractive, you will walk away with more money than you can imagine when our divorce is through"

"You are an ASS Jalal" Ruks screamed before the sound of stattering glass echoed in his ears ..he chuckles knowing her anger at being double crossed

"I will destroy you Jalal, I will tell every magazine, newspaper and blog, infact to any one willing to listen on how you are treating me! I will make sure your public image is so deep in the mud that no will want to invest in your company and make you lose billions ..."

"It does not bother me Rukiaya, damaged image or not, I will still have the billions so be the better person and accept it with dignity, we can part as friends ..."

After he hangs up on Rukiaya he begins writing to Jo

Dear Jo,

I am not sure how to say what I want to say to you, I have given you the time you requested away from me, I also had a whole week of trying to escape you, but you followed in my mind and in my every breath, you have taken over my every sense to the point of leaving me powerless, you don't even know it, how much power you hold over me, from the first moment I met you, I wanted you to be part of my life anyway I could, you captured me, I will forever regret the way I behaved, jealousy and anger ...not a good excuse for my behavior but that's the truth ...knowing I hurt you causes me grief, I have called Rukiaya and told her everything about us, I want to make things right ... I miss you ..I will try to be better for you, always for you, don't give up on me Jo baby ..." yours Jalal

Jo was heartbroken after she read the email, she read it over and over again, wiping her face, she wanted to reply, he had broken his promise and slept with his wife, that did matter anymore, ... but it mattered that his wife was pregnant, she had seen the paternity test results, that little baby will need 100% of both parents, Jalal would make a great father ... she had to walk away but she just could not bring herself to walk away without giving an explanation

Jalal,

Life is hard, dream don't always come true, love sometimes is not forever, friends come and friends go, and you know what it is funny how common sense is not as common anymore, looking back on my life, I am confused by the choices I have made but those decisions gave me my life experiences with you, which I will treasure, I will never regret them but I do realize love sometimes is not forever, you have a great future ahead of you of which I am not destined to be a part of. The difference between love and fate is that you can fall in love with anyone but fate will decide who you'll love in the end ...I fell in love, but fate has other plans ...I have accepted that my life with you is not meant to be ... Jo

Her fingers hover over the mouse over and over, wondering if she should click send, and finally just sends it ...

Jalal reads and rereads her email over and over again, he never been so confused his entire life ...he was happy she replied him ... she was stubborn in certain ways, she had tried to come off independent ... there was hope ...he smiles and replies

Jo,

Talking logic? Love, life, dreams, fate ...Take all the time you want away from me, I will give you that much. If you are honest with your feelings and believe in fate, you will not run away from me, you will face me openly, show me that I don't matter anymore... I will not bother you ... don't forget we have a ratified contract, I don't want to take you to court ... I expect you to honor it and will see you at work on a professional level. I will not allow my personal feelings to affect my professional relationship

Jalal

He felt relieved after sending her the email, knowing Jo's ego, she would come to work he had planned on ignoring her but his plan did not work out... a whole week passed, she did not come ...he had assigned a retired FBI detective to follow he, he did not want any harm to come to her, and knew she was still in NY ...

Later that day he received good news from his lawyers, the divorce papers were successfully filed in court "things moved quicker than expected, now you just have to wait 10 more weeks for it to be final" he spends the next several days commanding workforce, guiding analysts, courting investor and entertaining financiers in an attempt to wipe Jo off his memory preparing for the NY office inauguration, he threw himself into work mode completely ... When he got a call from Salima

"Jalal, she will come back to work but she wants to work on another floor" Jalal smirks, a sly smile plays on his face "that is fine, please arrange it, and" he pauses "and yeah, send her to the 30th floor, I never bother to go there, that is Adham's division"

The following day he was busy with meetings working on potential mergers when Adham walks in, Jalal looks up "What can I do for you Adham, I was getting ready to leave, I have to attend a board meeting, so make it short"

"Always the one to get to the point Jalal, it's one of your best qualities" he laughs and continues "you are an illusionist, you make things appear the way you want them to appear" leaning against the chair "like how you made it appear "how do you do it?" then leans forward and whispers "Jalal, you failed to mention how stunning your girl is, her hands ummm so soft"

Jalal heart began racing, excitement catches him off guard for a brief moment, she had come to work ...first step ...slow baby step ... but he didn't like Adham's sudden interest in her, there would be no way he would allow anyone to taint his relationship with Jo ... but then she wasn't his at this moment, decides to reschedule the board meeting, feels it was time to pay Jo floor a visit ...

"Stay away Adham" Jalal warned ... how dare he, he only just met her ...

"Does it bother you Jalal, are you jealous?" he was goading him ... "see you are being a illusionist, making it appear like you both broke off your relationship" Jalal ignores him, quickly sends and texts and begins walking "let's go to your office and chat" Adham follows him, they take the elevator to the 30th floor ..he calmly walks out, scans the room sees Jo and begins walking towards her eyeing her ...and walks right past her like he did not care, like she did not matter to the girl sitting in the cubicle behind Jo, they stood there laughing and talking Jo watched Jalal from the corner of her eye as they made their way to Adham's office, completely ignoring Jo, they stand outside the door laughing, joking, occasionally Jalal's eye would catch Jo's and he'd look away

She could not take it anymore, frustrated she puts her stuff away, takes her bag and leaves as she was walking out she caught Jalal watching her, she looks at him, his expression was a mix of emotions it was impossible to sort out, but she sees pain, conflict, hesitance and tenderness ...he slowly shook his head and turned away ...Jalal was occupying way too many of her thoughts ..she needed to stop freaking out around him, she begins walking towards the elevator when Adhams calls out "Jodha wait, can I ride with you"

"oh, Okay sure" Jo smiles back at him eyeing Jalal, the look of displeasure on his face was obvious ...they said their goodbyes and left... The next few days went by the same way ... Jalal would stop by Adhams office everyday but never acknowledged Jo ...occasionally she would run into Jalal and he completely ignored her ...surprisingly Rukiaya never contacted her or stopped by to see her ...Jo did her best to go unnoticed she could not figure how Jalal changed so quickly...

His attitude drove her insane on a daily basis but she was happy to admire Jalal from far away, her love from him grew stronger ...he kept his word and did not bother her anymore ... every minute she missed his calls, texts, emails and his touch ... Gossips floated around ...about his divorce.. fights with his wife, him flirting with other women, occasionally she would see Rukiaya come and go with no announcement of the baby ...she wondered if Rukiaya and her father were playing a game ... Mirza and Surya were on travel most of the time ...she suspected Jalal had something to do with as he did not travel much, for the past two weeks she had seen him every day.

Jo had a lot on her mind and was rushing to work on Friday, the past two weeks had been crazy confusing weeks, she was exhausted after sleepless nights and crazy days at work, and felt thoroughly frustrated as everything seemed to go the wrong way ... she got stuck in traffic on her way to the temple ... arrives late to work, there was an envelope on her desk addressed to her CONFIDENTIAL' ... she says a quick prayer and opens it ...a note from Rukiaya? ... Rukiaya had hired her ...

Dear Jodha,

Moghul Dynasty Inc has reviewed you application for early termination of your contract and with pleasure accepts your application and releases you from all obligations and liabilities as of the end of business day.

Thank you for your services, please stop by human resources by 4 pm today.

Sincerely

Rukiaya Sultan

Jo was surprised, she had not put in an application ...someone was playing again ... her father had already gone back to India, never the less she was happy with the outcome ... seeing Jalal everyday was becoming difficult ...she was rushing to HR on her lunch break when she saw Jalal and Rukiaya from a distance, they looked like the perfect couple, Jalal walked with his hand wrapped around her waist, together they got into the elevator, as Jo got closer to them she realized they were arguing ...Jalal looks up and catches her gaze, he looked like a desperate man trying to over compensate ...

Jo walks away as fast as her legs carried her ...as the elevator door shut words filtered out "No amount of money is worth dealing ..." voices faded away ...

Jo reaches HR, signs herself out, Salima was out of office, everything happening that day seemed fishy, but went back up to her desk, was packing her stuff up when Rukiaya walked in "You are really a nice person, I'm sorry I've been so . such a, well, you know, its difficult for me to trust you, but I'm trying my best to help you"

"Forget it" Jo dismissed her with a smile, gives her a light hug, Ruks holds on to her for another second before finally letting her go "

Before leaving musters enough guts to stop by Jalal's office to say goodbye, she had hoped to run into Rukiaya, his secretary told her "Sorry, Jodha, there is a very important meeting going on in his office, all the big wigs are here ...if you want to wait" Jo decides not to wait and leaves ..she hoped Moti was around but she travelled with Surya ...

Jo walks out of the office ...feeling free but with a heavy heart ...she wanted to speak with Jalal before leaving, she texts him finally asking if she could meet him for coffee somewhere ...she does not hear back from him, instead of taking a taxi home walks slowly ...she wanted to call him but did not want to be pushy, she sit at the bus stop and goes over his emails again ... it was like a drug that kept her going every day, suddenly she wanted to hear his voice one last time ... she quickly dials his number, it rings for about 3 seconds and loosing her nerve hangs up.

Jalal calls her right back ... Jo picks up, tries to sound calm "hello" she whispers

"Are you alright?" he questions "you called and hung up" he sounded worried

"Yes, why should that bother you Jalal?"

"Because you called"

"Umm, yea, it's a mistake, sorry for bothering you" she was about to hang up

"Really Jodha?" he snickered "you didn't accidently call me, I know because you texted me too, I wish you hadn't hung up"

"Yeah, I wanted to say goodbye" she whispered ...her face burning with embarrassment

"Goodbye, why ... you don't want to give me the pleasure of seeing your beautiful face from far too? Where are you going?"

"I am going to India for good"

"But you can't you have a contract ..."

" I was released from the contract today and I have no more reasons to stay back in New York ... I have no more ties to Moghul Dynasty ..."

"What?" he sounded surprised ... "we need to talk, where are you, I'll pick you?"

Jo tells him her location, "Okay, I'll be there in 10 minutes"

He's late, looking at her watch ... ten became twenty, and then an hour became two ... he was not coming ... thinks of calling him but decides against it and goes home, slumps on the couch, it felt as if she had closed her eyes for a moment when her phone rang ...10pm

"Listen Jalal, if you are calling to apologize ...forget it I hate you"

"Jodha, it's Mirza" he sounded strange

"Mirza, that stupid Jalal has not guts, he told you to call me, you are kidding me right?"

"Jodha, you need to get to Mount Sinai Hospital ICU immediately, Bhaijaan had a heart attack"

She could not breathe, the phone dropped from her hands ... "OMG" OMG" she yelled running around feeling guilty for cussing him in her mind ... guilt ridden she rushes to the hospital. It takes her forever to get to the hospital ...it had started raining and the traffic had gotten bad ... by the time she got there, the media was already making their presence known ...

Breathless she runs to the ICU ...
"I'm sorry ma'am, this is a privately secured area, you can't go in" the security stops her from entering the VIP suite, Jo calls Mirza, sees him walking towards her

"It's fine, let her through" Mirza waves her in ... "Bhaijaan has been under a lot of stress lately, today he was in a terrible mood ... after the board meeting he got into a very big fight with his wife and father in law, he was breathless arguing with them suddenly he could not breathe, he clutched his chest and collapsed, the medics did CPR and brought him here, the doctor said bhaijaan is very lucky if they had delayed by another 5 minutes he would have been dead ... they did an angiogram, he had two blockages"

Jo did not want to listen anymore, her feet carried her to the large glass window of his room, pressing her head against the glass she cries at the sight of him ...

Edited by crystalwings - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mama17


Hey! I know it. I follow this story.
That epilogue was updated a long ago. At that time she had told, epilogue 2 will follow.
So, I'm asking for epilogue 2.
Thanks


Ooh epilouge 2
Then I too need that
I ll too ask
Fabulous story right
Deserves a epilouge 2
R u listening prema di !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mickeymini


Ooh epilouge 2
Then I too need that
I ll too ask
Fabulous story right
Deserves a epilouge 2
R u listening prema di !!


I am listening my dear ...just trying to complete My Stolen Dreams .,,, 😛
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Originally posted by: crystalwings



I am listening my dear ...just trying to complete My Stolen Dreams .,,,😛


Haain u ll complete it so soon

But we need more
Give atleast 25 chapters
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG ..Heart attack ..seems like there r many surprises u r hidding away for the next chapters .. I smell something fishy ..the way the divorce of jalal and ruqaya goes smoothely is not normal ..ruqaya will fight back ..i wonder what crisis she had done to make jalal end with heart attack?!
The moment i read the line of Mirza 's call i expected him to say that jalal met with an accident ..didnt expect the heart attack ssue at all :D

Regarding to their seperation i agree with jo ..the way he dealed with her is disgusting whatever the reason he shouldnt have done that ..he literally treated her as wh**e this time ..about the pregnancy of ruqaya I cant belive her ..she is lying and the tests are fake ..it is not a big deal for her ..this is her last card to keep them a part .

Amazing update ..will wait for ur update eagrly ..Hope to read another update at EID :)
Edited by Blacktulip - 9 years ago

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