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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hahahaahaaha 🤣 that's perfect 😊

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mere comment pe reply toh kr madam
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and mere PR bhi
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so soon dear
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

mere comment pe reply toh kr madam

hey maine kiya hai mamu dekh😕
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<div></div>so soon dear

really 😛
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Originally posted by: swriter

hey maine kiya hai mamu dekh😕

i dont think so baaki m check krke batoongi
btw MERRY CHRISTMAS JANKI😃
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d update was emotional one...felt bad fr jodha... hopefully Abdul and atgah r able to find jodha...update soon... 😊
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Note-> now I am giving 24th chapter of this
ff...this is Christmas gift to all my lovely
readers I
hope you all will be enjoy it...MARRY
CHRISTMAS BUDDIES
Happy reading 😳

Chapter-24

{ jalal's room}

{ jalal was impatiently waking here and there in his room. His heart was impatiently waiting for a good news. It wanted to hearing something , which could sooth his wounded and weak heart ...

Sudden a Mugal soldier enter in room...

Mugal soldier (bending down his head)-> "shahensha ka iqubaal buland ho..." Shahensha "begum-a Khas" want to meet you ...?

Jalal( firmly)-> " tell her...I will be see her at evening in her hojara(room)...now I am hell busy in important work...ok go now..."

{but his deny was enough to hurt deeply her already wounded ego...listen gate keeper's massage now rukaiya's anger reached on its top...without caring what jalal's order was...she directly entered in Jalal's room...gate keeper tried his best to stop her but...he had not much power to stopped "begum-a-kash"...}

"Jalal...jalal...jalal" yelling rukaiya with her entry in jalal's room.

{Other side jalal was standing nearby window with losing deep down in his beloved's thoughts...but rukaiay's loud voice broke his dreamland which made him more irritate...he tightly closed his eyes to control his irritation and uncomfortness now rukaiya was standing behind of jalal...seeing not any response from jalal's side...her anger broke all limits of its...she shouted on jalal with her full power and anger which she stored since morning...}

Rukaiya(in loud voice)-> "Jalalll"

" how can you do this with...your childhood friend...your first wife...begum-a-khas...and mother of your unborn child...it's enough jalal...it's enough...first you did not show your interest in me and also in this jasn(celebration)...but I thought that you are came from war after long time so you felt some tiredness or you have worry about some politic issue... you dishonored me front of Adgha sahab...but I was silent because it's your matter which related your rules and avaam so you did not like my interfere but...you again insulted me front of that lady...who did not hold any place nearby me...you...you not only insulted me but also insulted your child front of that lady...whom position was not more than a maid of palace..."

Jalal(in angry loud voice)-> " stopped Rukaiya...careful with your words...you have not any rights to having bad mouth about other lady...so don't dare this again because it is not suit you and your position..."

{ thinking that jalal again had cared about unknown woman than her...she felt more insulted or humiliated...what she know that after saying next words...she would regret her fate for whole life...}

Rukaiya(in angry loud voice)-> " why I do not say it...i will say it...because you are still worried for that lady not me... that cheap...bloody who...r..."

{ Rukaiya did not know that she made biggest mistake of her life with uttering those low words for jodha...now those words had broken the last barrier which could save Rukaiya from jalal's wrath...but now no one could do anything because damage already happened and now rukaiya had to faced biggest humiliation of her life...

Hearing her words for his Chanda now jalal's anger reached on its peak and wanted to burned that person who dared to spoke this nonsense to his beloved...}

{ jalal turned swiftly and without wasting any moment his fingerprint had printed on Rukaiya's soft cheek mercilessly...

Rukaiya could not understand what happened in few seconds...darkness had spread front of her eyes for some seconds...when her mind registered what jalal did with her before few seconds...her eyes filled up with hot tears...its first time in her whole life when jalal was slapped her...she looked toward jalal with tearful eyes but what she saw...its enough to took away breath from her body...jalal was looking her with full of disgust and anger...his eyes became red because of anger...his lips was shivering with anger and hate ...he was looking like a made tiger who wanted to kill or eat his prey...and now his prey was rukaiya...before rukaiya utter something else...jalal roared loudly...

Jalal(in anger)-> " how dare you...how dare you to telling something like this about her...how dare you rukaiya..."

{ telling it jalal was started take his first step toward rukaiya...seeing his act rukaiya was started to taking her feet backward...first time in her life...jalal's steps were giving her fear...and because this feeling first time she wanted that they should stopped before reaching to her...but if god would fulfill her wish...that time god also himself seems helpless front of a lover or a husband who wanted to kill that person who used that shameless words for his love or wife}

Jalal(with greeting his teeth in anger)-> " how dare you rukaiya...how dare you..."

{ within few seconds rukaiya's soft back hit with cold and hard wall...she was about to go for escaping from jalal's wrath but poor soul failed in her effort...jalal put his both hand on wall to caging her in his cage...}

" tell me rukaiya... how dare you to uttering those shameful and low words for her...now I want to ask you...who are you...tell me rukaiya...who are you... as you used those shameful words for her... You are nothing front of her and me ok... Before my anger will crossed its limits and I will be forget that you would be mother of my unborn child... So get out from my eyes and don't show your face again to me ok...(in loud voice) get out..."

{ hearing his hateful words for her...rukaiya froze on her place...but his loud voice broke her stupor... It gave a cold shiver down on her spine...without wasting any more seconds she was run away from there as like a prey was escaping from jaw of tiger...seeing rukaiya as running with tearful eyes...firstly abdul and Adgha was shocked...because they saw rukaiya in such bad condition first time in their life...but seeing her coming out from jalal's room with this condition...not taking more time they sensed very well that jalal was not in good mood...but they have to give him this news... so after taking deep breath...they decided to enter in jaw of made tiger for making him more made with their bad new...

Mugal soldier(with bending down his head)-> " Shahensha ka iqubaal buland ho... Shahensha Abdul and adgha sahab want to meet you..."

{ hearing their name, now jalal's eyes filled up with happiness and hope...hope to hearing something about his beloved...

So without wasting any more time...}

Jalal( in cheerful voice)-> " send them..."

{ hearing jalal's permission abdul and Adgha sahab entered in room...jalal was standing nearby window...

abdul and adgha sahab ( both) -> " Salaam shahensha"

{ hearing their voice, jalal turned toward them with hopefully eyes...}

Jalal( in pleading tone)-> " tell me adgha sahab and abdul...where is my Chanda...you found her na..."

{ listening him, abdul and adgha sahab bended his head down without saying anything...seeing their head jalal's heart beat stopped for a second... within it his happiness turned in to biggest sorrow... because he knew what mean of their bending head... he swiftly turned from them to hiding his unshed tears...}

Jalal( firmly)-> " now you can go..."

Abdul( swiftly in regret tone)-> " jalal...vo..."

{ but before he could try to do understand him about all things... jalal cut him in middle of way...}

Jalal( in loud voice with full of anger) -> " I say both of you now can go...so get out from there otherwise..."

{ but abdul was not ready to leave his friend in that condition... He was about to say something to jalal but adgha sahab stopped him with putting his hand on his shoulder...adgha sahab signaled him to leave jalal alone for some time...because his heart badly needed time to understanding situation. Abdul nodded his head and leaved jalal with disappointment... Adgha sahab also joined him...}

{ after taking their departure , jalal felled down on his knee helplessly...he felt like someone snatched his soul away from him... his heart felt like it had lost its heart beat...his eyes filled up with tears...his throat was chocked...he felt like his could not taking breath properly...when his pain had out of his control then he yelled with his full power...

"Chandddaaa...(sob)Chanda... (sob)... ch...chanda...(sob)ch...nda...(sob)chanda"

{slowly- slowly his pain converted in sobs...in loud sobs...his room was listening his pain full sobs till deep slumber did not take away his sense.}

{ other side abdul was moving in his room here and there with frustration...he was feeling like he cheated his best buddy to hiding very important news of his life... he slowly-slowly moved toward window and looked toward moon... innocent face of his little sister was starting to move front of his eyes...sudden his mind was started to remember...what that old lady told when he reached to her for searching his little one...}

{Flash-Back}

{Abdul and adhga sahab was madly searching jodha in crowed... but they could not getting success sudden abdul's eyes stuck on a old figure...his mind told him that he had seen that lady before...but when and where...? Sudden his mind gave him hint...}

Abdul( telling himself with rubbing his chin with his fingers of right hand )-> " I have seen this lady in this celebration some time before...hmmm ( sudden his heart screamed loudly)... with my Chabili..."

{Thinking that this lady could tell him about his little one... his eyes shined with little hope and Abdul run fast toward her without wasting any second...

Abdul(swiftly with controlling his breath)-> " Mayi...Mayi..."

{ hearing his voice old lady turned toward him with shocking and confusing expressions...}

Old lady (in soft tone)-> " what happened beta...?

Abdul ( trying to calm down his curiosity and desperation)-> " Mayi... my name is Abdul khan... I am brother of 17 years old girl name Chanda...who was with you before some time...( singling toward stage) when you was going toward stage..."

{ hearing jodha's name from abdul's mouth old lady looked toward him with sympathy full eyes...

Old lady ( in soft voice)-> " beta...your sister is very cute and innocent...I meet with her in journey of agra...she is also kind heart person... "

{ hearing his little one s praise from old lady's mouth, abdul felt like a proud brother and small smile appeared on his face...}

Old lady ( continue)-> " she was very desperate to meet his husband... why not after hearing this type of big news no one can hold himself... but ( in sad tone) but I think her husband cheated her or doing something bad with her...because when she returned after her meeting with him...she was badly crying and told me that... "Her first love was remained incomplete...and her child will be not get affection and love of his father..."

{ words of old lady gave deep and high sock to abdul. He shockingly looked toward her...}

Abdul (in shivering voice ) -> " Child...?"

Old lady ( confusingly)-> " your sister did not tell you that...she is pregnant with child of her husband... ( in sad and sympathy full tone) but poor soul...her husband cheated her...and also her child..."

{ hearing this news abdul felt like nub...his eyes filled up with tears...he could not understanding...what he should do... If he Feel happy for that his little one made him "MAMA( material uncle) and she would be giving him a little princess or prince or he feel bad for his little one for that on this stage she faced hard truth of her life...his heart started to cry loudly...}

Seeing his venerable condition old lady felt bad for this young man... she put her motherly hand on his shoulder...her touch brought abdul in realty...}

Old lady ( in calm and soft tone)-> " I can understand your pain beta...but for shake of your younger sister and her child, you have to do control on your emotions... Because after it, now she badly needs your care and pampering beta..."

{ abdul nodded his head with wiping his painful tears...}

Abdul ( in pleading tone)-> " Mayi...can you told me that... where is my little sister ?...I want to meet her..."

Old lady ( in sorry tone)-> " I am sorry beta...I do not know where she went away...because seeing her condition I requested to her for coming with me but she refused me and told that... "it is her way and she have to walk on it alone"...

After saying it she walked out from celebration..."

{ saying thank you for old lady Abdul sadly walked away from there...}

{Flash - Back End}

Abdul (with teary eyes) -> " I am sorry...i am sorry Chabili...Please forgive your Brother for biggest sin of his life...please forgive your brother Chabili...( in sobs) ple...please forgive your brother little one...m...my innocent little sister...your brother l...love you baby...y...yo..your brother love you...pl...please forgive me...pl...please forgive me..."
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Edited by swriter - 9 years ago

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