~Akdha Oneshots - Requested by fans~ #OS 8 in pg 22

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awsome updates dear

Update nxt asap...

Plz pm me

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meera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Superb os dear😳

Thnks for the pm

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

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awesum os.
both r superb.fabulous they were.
jo was a girl of attitude becoz of lot of pampering .
she always make fun of guyz nd crush their hearts bt when she met ja it was she who give her attention him.
she wondered why he didn't fell for her beauty .
she get jeaolus seeing ja n ruks together.
ja angered on her for hurting ruks .
nd when she came to know that ruk is his sister she take a sigh of relief.
she realizes that she loves him nd vows to change her attitude .

nd second part was amazing.
for once i really thought it was reality bt reading nxt i felt sad that it was just ja imagination.
bt his fantasy was really hot n erotic .
really so sensual nd even jo having same desire.
bt he come out of his dream land nd left from there before noticed by jo.
bt he don't know that jo saw him nd hv same fantasy n desires as like him
really love it.

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

nice os... ayiooo it was jalals imagination. ...
thanks for pm...

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: savindi.db
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hey sweet heart..🤗you made me like this☺️uff i was flying in akdhalandbut came out from it when i read the next part..hehe😆omg both of them busy in their fantasies☺️superb os drupdate an other os soon and eagerly waiting for it..thank u soo much for the pm dr🤗

Glad you enjoyed it dear, this thought has been bothering me since that morning so I had to write it down 😆

Thank you very much dear. 🤗

Will update another OS soon. 😉

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
It was nice dear..so the concept was also yours 😊
It was sensuous and the choice of ur words were decent.
I am generally not comfortable.commenting on these kind of updates(though I read them)😆but u made it easy for me.
So it remained a fantasy,Jalal's concentration was only on her back and not face..so he missed it 😉 😆
Thnx for the pm.

Bindu darling thank you 🤗

Yeah sometime you don't know what to write in the comment after reading a hot chapter.

Yes it remains a fantasy ... Had to torture them they made us wait so long for the SR. 😈 🤣

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
NICE OS ...😊

Thank you Ashvneet 😊

Originally posted by: Geetbaala
It was a beautiful read Vincy.. Nice OS dear.
It was sensuous..ending was good both were fantasizing about each other.

Geeta dear thank you.

Glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: natashathakur
Lovely os dear n plz continue n update

Thank you Natasha 😊

Originally posted by: avika444
Lovely os vincy
So this was from ur side
I liked it
Thanks for pm :-) :-)

Thank you Avika darling 🤗

Glad that you liked it dear. 😃

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja
Nice os

Thank you Aswin 😊

Originally posted by: mamtasingla
nice shot
jalal didnt see the expression of jodha
both r busy in their fantasies😳

Thank you dear, 🤗

both JJ to engrossed in their fantasies to realise they could make it come true if only they looked at each other. 😳

Originally posted by: lovespari
hii dear..
read both os in one go
both r nice n lovely dear
the vow is really diffrnt nvr read tht a girl is vry rude n whn she fall in love she try to change hrself normally its happen with boys u hav wriiten vry beautyfully dear
n fantancies was superb lovly os dear
so this was fr ur side nice concept .liked it
pless pm me also whn u updt nxt os.

Thanks dear, I am glad you enjoyed both the OS. 😃

Will pm you dear.😉

Originally posted by: 155pari
Nice os dear... Both in their fantasies.. It was great.. Thanx for the pm...

Thank you Namita dear. 😳

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
awesome perfect title... both missed good chance.. let it full filled in next os😉

Thanks dear, they both were too into their fantasies to realise that .

Is that a request dear? 😆

Originally posted by: swetiii
awsum

Thanks dear.😊

Originally posted by: swriter
Awesome buddy plz continue dear

Thank you. Sorry I got to ask, is that a request? 😆

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
FIRST OS SOULMATE'S VOW
Very nice OS Vincy
Jodha's characterisation was well described ek dam. hunterwaali behaviour 😆
Jalal came in her life ..may be his indifference hurt her.. his ignorance n retort resulted a changed Jodha.. very well written ..Enjoyed reading it .. Pls keep writing more .. Thanks vincy for pm😃
A big round of applause to U dear for putting others ideas in to beautiful words 👏👏👏
U r doing a great job dearie 🤗
Thank u savindi for the OS req😛

Shruthi darling !!!
Thank you so much dear. Lots of hugs and love for you !!! 🤗❤️❤️

OS No 2
VINCY 🤗
Girl U write amazingly 👏⭐️
That was a lovely read😳 Good concept 😳
That was Passionately sweet one beautifully penned down by U
The words U choose to weave the hot scenes r soo 😎😉 given the uniqueness to this OS⭐️
And the ending was just SUPERB ... Awaiting for the next one
Thank u so much for pm dear😃

Thank you darling,

Yeah didn't want to use too uhm detailed words as I know many here are very young 😆

Thank you once again dear. 😳

Originally posted by: cuty1997
nice idea
superbly written
thanks for pm me

Thank you dear, your welcome.😉

second os also superb
i truly loved it
and this thread idea is nice

Thank you Krina dear

Glad you liked the idea. 😳

Originally posted by: anu012
awsome updates dear

Update nxt asap...

Plz pm me

Thank you Anamika😊

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
Superb os dear😳
Thnks for the pm

Thank you Meera darling🤗

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan
awesum os.
both r superb.fabulous they were.
jo was a girl of attitude becoz of lot of pampering .
she always make fun of guyz nd crush their hearts bt when she met ja it was she who give her attention him.
she wondered why he didn't fell for her beauty .
she get jeaolus seeing ja n ruks together.
ja angered on her for hurting ruks .
nd when she came to know that ruk is his sister she take a sigh of relief.
she realizes that she loves him nd vows to change her attitude .

Deepa darling,
Thank you for reading and enjoying this OS. 🤗

nd second part was amazing.
for once i really thought it was reality bt reading nxt i felt sad that it was just ja imagination.
bt his fantasy was really hot n erotic .
really so sensual nd even jo having same desire.
bt he come out of his dream land nd left from there before noticed by jo.
bt he don't know that jo saw him nd hv same fantasy n desires as like him
really love it.

Many thought it really happened dear.

Yeah if only they had looked at each other.. 😆

Thank you once again dear. 😳

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
nice os... ayiooo it was jalals imagination. ...
thanks for pm...

Thank you Raksha dear. Yes he was imagining it hence the title Fantasy 😆

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
Awesome os... 👏 😳

Thank you dear. 😃

Edited by VincyAnne - 10 years ago

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Index in pg 1 below #OS 1 - Soulmate's Vow

For any request just post it on my Index thread.

**ll ~ Vincy Anne's Index ~ ll**

For PMs kindly click the link below. (Her First Love PM List)

Important note / PM Lists

So this OS was a request from Bindu darling. A JJ and Salim OS and cute nok jhoks between them.

First off I would like to apologise for I am not good with nok jhoks and stuff. Bindu, sorry if this is nowhere near what you had in mind. But promise I will try to write something similar to what you wanted in the future.

Sorry again, hope you find this OS okay. Title was by me.

Once Upon An Essay

My day always starts the same way, which is receiving a kiss on my forehead from mama and hearing her call out my name with her sweet voice. Mama is always the first one to wake up followed by me and lastly papa. I'm not sure about my baby sibling though, for he or she is in mama's tummy but mama once told me that my baby sibling spends most of the time asleep so I guess it's good to say that they are asleep too.

Papa always wakes up late because he works till late hours. But papa's late isn't really late for he is always in the dining hall when I am all dressed up. Papa always makes sure he spends time with me no matter how busy he may be. Papa always attends my school functions and takes me to the park and plays football with me.

Coming back to my normal days, every morning at breakfast, papa would tease mama either by saying how her cooking isn't nice or that her dress makes her look fat causing mama to be angry at papa. The first time I understood what was happening I pulled papa to a side and asked him why he was bullying mama when her food was nice and her dress made her look pretty.

Papa just laughed said that he was not bullying mama but he was actually teasing her. I asked papa isn't teasing and bullying the same? Papa replied that bullying is when someone says something very mean to another person to hurt them and that it is a very bad thing to do to someone and teasing is an attempt to pro... What's that word? Pro... provoke someone in a playful way. Then you like it when mama is angry at you papa I asked him and papa said that he likes it when mama gets angry because after a while mama would have this small smile on her face.

Since then I just enjoy watching papa tease mama because mama's reaction to papa's teasing is so fun to watch. My papa and mama are just so... What's that word again? A... Ado... Adorable. Many don't believe papa and mama when they say that their marriage was an arranged marriage, because papa and mama love each other so much. Actually they said something else too but I was too young to understand them.

I really love listening to stories about both papa and mama and how they met me, they make me so happy. I am thankful to have such a great papa and mama who love me and take good care of me. I couldn't have chosen anyone better to be my papa and mama.

I ended my essay by saying thank you to my papa and mama and that I love them so much. As I went back to my sit, I looked over to where papa and mama were seated and waved at them. Mama was crying and kissing flying kisses to me while papa had a proud look on his face with eyes filled with unshed tears.

And I knew then that papa and mama would never be as proud as they are at their adopted son.

Edited by VincyAnne - 10 years ago

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

hey darling🤗 what a beautiful os well written dear👍🏼 its a very emotional one😭 my heart melted when i read the last part nice idea bindu dr..thank u soo much for this lovely idea. vincy dr thank u soo much the pm and waiting for another lovely os

Edited by savindi.db - 10 years ago

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Yayyy me second...😆Awesome os vincy... The cute boy...😳 And his love from his parents.❤️.. A good one...👏 Thanx for the pm...😃 Keep writing such fabulous stories...

Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago