~Akdha Oneshots - Requested by fans~ #OS 8 in pg 22

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Lovely os vincy
So this was from ur side
I liked it
Thanks for pm :-) :-)

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

nice shot
jalal didnt see the expression of jodha
both r busy in their fantasies😳

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

hii dear..
read both os in one go
both r nice n lovely dear
the vow is really diffrnt nvr read tht a girl is vry rude n whn she fall in love she try to change hrself normally its happen with boys u hav wriiten vry beautyfully dear
n fantancies was superb lovly os dear
so this was fr ur side nice concept .liked it
pless pm me also whn u updt nxt os.

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nice os dear... Both in their fantasies.. It was great.. Thanx for the pm...

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awesome perfect title... both missed good chance.. let it full filled in next os😉

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome buddy plz continue dear

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

FIRST OS SOULMATE'S VOW

Very nice OS Vincy

Jodha's characterisation was well described ek dam. hunterwaali behaviour 😆

Jalal came in her life ..may be his indifference hurt her.. his ignorance n retort resulted a changed Jodha.. very well written ..Enjoyed reading it .. Pls keep writing more .. Thanks vincy for pm😃

A big round of applause to U dear for putting others ideas in to beautiful words 👏👏👏

U r doing a great job dearie 🤗

Thank u savindi for the OS req😛