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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
dear you story is always beautiful you bring jj's love beautifuuy any hurt. So don't think that fans are not like lots of fans are here yaar. pleae write and post soon give some long page. You are updating daily so thank you somuch for you kind to fans. to update daily,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

HII MY ANOTHER SHORT STORY
will resume only on good response coz m also hungry of comments n likes like u all 🤣
So if u want update do comment hit like

"U GIVE ME HIT LIKES N COMMENTS I'LL GIVE U UPDATES "
by A PERSON BIG IN MADNESS MAVI 😃


Congo for new story
Plzzz update the prologue pm me too
Plzzz start soon I can't waitwait ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
nice prologue Mavi ...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54




chapter 1
HOW DARE U TO TOUCH HER? HANN! LEAVE
HER U BAS...D!
said to beautiful girl to a man in full black . this
was all happening on the mid of the road, one
men try to get his hand on a poor girl, that girl
was shouting for help but no one came front,
when this beautiful saw this she didn't control on
herself n jumped in to save the poor girl from
this brute's torture.
CHAAAT!!! SOUND HEARD BY EVERYONE WHO
EVER PRESENT THERE, N THE GUY GETS
SHOCKED, HIS EGO WAS HURT . HE AGAIN TRY
TO DO THIS MISTAKE BUT NOT WITH THAT
POOR GIRL, BUT WITH THE SAVIOUR OF THAT
GIRL . THIS TIME ALSO AGAIN A TIGHT SLAP
FELL ON HIS SAME CHEEK BUT MORE HARD
THEN EARLIER.
DON'T DARE TO LAY UR HANDS ON ME OR ANY
OTHER GIRL! OTHERWISE U WILL PAY FOR IT!
N IT WILL BECOME HARD FOR U TO LIVE IN
THIS WORLD, I WILL MAKE UR LIFE HELL said
the saviour girl
to man in black.
this all was seen by a guy sitting in his BLACK
AUDI he was smirking in his mind at this girl's
courage, coz no one has dare to stand in before
JALAL UD DIN MOHAMMED's body guard but
this girl slapped him .
he laughed at his bodyguards condition
JALAL signal his guard to leave the matter but guard swear that he will destroy this girl.

City hospital
are u OK? don't worry, doctor will check u n I have paid him so no need to pay OK said JODHA to a victim

Jo leave the hospital, on the way to her office

Jo where r u? u know na that today u have to take an ... she can't continue when Jo interrupts yeah yeah moti I know, m on the way will reach soon .
she cut the call

Journalist office

O sorry guys m late, stuck in... interrupt by moti yeah some social work n rolled her eyes Jo chuckled n hug her Beastie

Interview room /studio
every thing was settled n arranged in well mannered cameras lights, screen, desk every thing.
coz today jpdha going to take an interview of great business man JALLAL UD DIN MOHAMMED

precap: akdha face to face n many more thing happened

sorry guys short chap, actually my tab has lost somewhere n I saved the chap in it . I typed it now only sorry, will give long next time
Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Update the chapter soon make it fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Nice chapter update nest chapter soon make it fast eagerly waiting for that
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
nice update mavi...
loved jodha in this story...
update next part soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Superb mavi,i just loved it

Thanks for pm,pls update a bit long next chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome for first chappy Mavi
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Y u don't pm me please pm me nest time plzz please plzz

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