JA FF 'The Secret Of Hearts' Thread 1 ( Closed ) - Page 12

Originally posted by: lovespari

n dear i really want to say thank u to u for giving the long chaptrs n daily updts. i really love this story or u can say i m madly in love with this story n i love u also fr writting it thank u soo much fr writting it n sharing it with us.
nxt chap updt soon... waiting dear

Originally posted by: Sricharan416

Lovely, emotional update

Finally jo & ja r back together

jodha 's revelation of Surya's behavior is kind of

u know it's something ahem ahem

but any reason he couldn't be hurt her.

time to our hero, what a determination yaar

he is not asking her opinion, he simply said

I want you and I will marry you 😉

what a proposal, mind blowing.

Continue soon and Thank you for the pm.

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

awesomr chapter 2 dear...
jadha had to face so much from surya nd her father also...I feel very bad for her...
jalal came to knw about her past nd hope he will take care of her... nice u have updated chapter 3 also will read nd then comment. ...

Originally posted by: iinfiq

Awesome update...as usual..amazing..waiting for next chapter.

But dear, don't revealed everything just in one shot..make the plot of the story slower, please. Since jodha had a great big amount of suffer so I suggest it need weeks or even months for her to get back her confidence in life. I want you to explore the emotional resistency of jodha, like to bow her head when she speak, her nervousness, shame, etc. I really really want to read in detail the way jalal pampered her, make her to get her confidence again, make her cheer and slowly start to forget the past and cure perfectly.

And I don't even mind to read that in 2 or 3 more chapter before they walk to next step(marriage) 😆

And i am still sure you'll be agreat novelist or even movie script!