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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#751

It was really one of the cutest updates... 😊

They are so damn lucky to get married to their best frnd... 😃

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Superb update avi 👏 ⭐️
No flaw in ur writing 😃
Best chapter till now
Will comment in detail later...
Enjoyed every bit of it
Keep rocking 👍🏼

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Ananya

@zuytre

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Lovely update

Jo ja romance is going to start i guess

Thanks for pm

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Lovely chapter n update nxt sn n thnxx for pm

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Dorperle

@Dorperle

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

I loved this update 👏👏

Simply Supreb ❤️🤗

They got married by Muslim rituals and after marriage saw each others faces.

Mainz's words to jodha😃 was the highlight for me.Bidai was emotional and well written.

Seeing teh pain around ,The way he brought smile on her face was fascinating to read

I love the way Jalal gifted Jodha photo frame with beautiful collage from their childhood till their marriage... It's really touchy.👏

It was bit awkward for the couples to share the same room...first time and He slept on couch and she slept on bed... 😉 first night.uhhh😆

Wallima gift was beautiful dear.. Saree😃 and he praised her which amazed her and blushed her as well.😳

Jodha asked him to sleep on the same bed..😉 really Jodha ,avika is thinking so much.👏

Love the way gradually this couple started feeling comfort around each other... Hope they find love too soon 😃

Thank u avika for this wonderful update👏

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

superb update avi
Jo JA hesitation but liked caring JA, u picturized JA such a caring n loving guy
thanks fa d pm

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Avi didu awesome chapter
Jalal is really a great buddy
M really glad
Now want to know how their relationship will progress...
Update soon
Thanks for the pm di:))
Love you:))

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Sorry fr d late reply... chapter is vry lovely

Jalal trying hard to keep Jo happy...

Loved it...

Thanx for the pm update soon...

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Really an extra ordinary narration, mind blowing imagination... I really very thankful to you aavika for ur precious pm... love you darling... please aise hi next chapters ko bhi pm karna please...😊

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#760

wow awsum avi...I simply loved d update 👏 😳 splly d collage of parijat was fab 👏 😉 👏 loved joja's cute banter and jalal is truly caring person...jo is really lucky 2 hav him ad a hubby 2 😉 u have penned dwn so beautifully... 👏 😛 waiting fr ur nxt update... 😉