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rameshwari11

@rameshwari11

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

really amamzing dear now jalal feeling for jodha bur he can not unederstand beautiful slowly they move now jodha want to have sucha feeling

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: erning_w
Res :)

Unress ^_^

Awesome update Avikaa

Love the unconditional support of Jalal to Jo

Their new feeling is begin 😳

Continue soon dear

Please don't take a long time 😃

And thank's a lot for the pm 🤗

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Amazing update akka

jalal was really bst husband dat evry girl wishes for

he was vry caring hubby

loved reading it

it was a pleasent update to read akka

plz continue soonish

love u so much akka

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

superb chapter

jalal supporting her very well and sleep on couch for her comfort

jodha get back in old gabbar avtaar 😆

continue soon

thnks fr pm

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

superb chaptr dear...loved it

update nxt chptr asap plz

thnks for pm

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AngelDara

@AngelDara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Super duper wonderful update avika
Love it very much
I want to read more and more so update the next chapter as soon as possible
Jj both are trying to make their new relationship successful
Love you avika for this lovely chapter

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Avika Akka😃

Fantastic update👏👏

With each update of yours,I'm falling in love with Jalal more and more❤️❤️

Though he was hurt with Jo's gesture while feeding sweet,he understood her uneasiness.(By the way I love Kaju Barfi😆)

I loved the way he brought a smile on her face😃..this reminded me of one of the scenes from show where Akbar asks Jodha "kahan gayi woh?" "Aapki muskurahat"😳 during Shah-e-Iran track.This was bit different of course and beautifully written👏

The best part was his gift..superb collage..good job😊

Poor fellow slept on couch but our Jo wants her friend to sleep happily and ordered to sleep on the bed.Gabbar😆

I actually forgot that Jo is pregnant till I read Jalal saying she can't sleep on couch in this condition😳.

Ghajar ka halwa..ummm😆..when did she learn cooking!!😉

Saree part was funny😆😆

Jalal has started feeling something something for Jo finally😉😆..and our Jo is blushing☺️good going.

AB YAHI TUMHARA GHAR HAI JODHA BETA, ISE APNA SAMAJHKAR PYAR KI DORI SE SAARE RISHTON KO BAADHNA..superb dialogue Akka⭐️

Loved Maina,Bharmal,Shivani,Hamida and Humayun😃

JJ are still uncomfortable with their new relation.But Jo is very lucky to get such a loving hubby and in-laws.Hope their love journey progresses soon😃.

Thnx for the pm and update soon.

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Congrats on crossing a century Akka🤗🤗

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

Awesum update.
Finally jo married with all the rituals in both religion.
Ja tried her make her comfortable.
Ja felt bad seeing her crying when leaving her family behind.
Love the part when ja cheer up jo by pretending that he found the precious thing i.e. jo smile.
Jo too smiled .
Hb welcomes both of them in mansion.
Jo ja both shocked to see the decorations nd feel awkard .
Bt ja make her feel comforatable nd asked to behave as she do before her as a friend .
Jo cook gajar ka halwa .
All relished it fully bt ja so much shocked to know that jo make it.
Ja gift jo saree bt poor jo don't know how to wear it.
Ja so much want to laugh her cute complain bt stop himself nd ask maina to help her.

Nd as jo come down the stairs he blow away by jo beauty .
He cant stop himself to compliement her.
Even jo is shocked as he always taunt her for her styling.
She blushed nd both hv a unknown feeling born innsside their heart .
Update nxt part soon ...

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

jj married in both religions...first night scene was cute...lovely gift...as ja wished his gabbar is back...jo in green dress ufff..ja flat hahahaha...lovely continue soon nd do pm