Akdha ff **//Ek vivaah aisa bhi //** THREAD 1( closed )

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
DI UPDATE CHAHIYE!!.🤣

Dhyan se dekho akku ,update aaj Hi kiya hai 😆

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Nice uodate dear...

Not boring atall..

Jo looks stunning in d bridal attire and Jalal being late...

Waiting to read the next chappy...

Update soon..

And thanx for the pm...

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

diii!!!!
update is still short :((((
but beautiful :)
happy family :))
ohh!! Jalal is a relative :)))
interesting di :)))
update soon :)) thanks for pm :))

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Both chaptrs are awsome...

loved it

plz pm me

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Unresed in pg 12 already... 😉

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

First off, Avika darling , don't say your story is boring !!! 😡😡😡

Now that that's over 😆😆

So again great chapter dear,

loved Bharmal - Maina, Suku - Jodha, Hamida - Humayun - Jodha parts respectively. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Now coming to the main point ,

Jodha knows Jalal ?! 😲

I mean I'm glad they know each other just that was totally unexpected. 😳

Now, I'm really curious as to how JJ are going to tie the knot and what is going to happen and all that stuffs .😆😆😆

Won't ask you to update soon since I don't give you guys an early update. 🤣

Sorry for the late comment dear.. 😛

Edited by VincyAnne - 10 years ago

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Amazing update akka👏

loved jo and their parents interaction

jo was having the same fear where every girl hav before marriage

waiting for my hero's entry😉

and plz plz update soon😊

thanks for the pm akka

love u🤗

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: VincyAnne
Brilliant start Avika darling !!!👏👏👏
I loved the way your describe the accident and also the wedding atmosphere dear.😳
Maina and Bharmal's behaviour is totally how a parent would be on their child's wedding day.
Bharmal had a feeling something was wrong...
Poor man I hope he will be fine after hearing the news.😕
Overall great start dear... Bravo👏👏👏

Keep up the good work dear.👍🏼

Vincy 🤗🤗
Thank u so much dear :-) :-)
Glad u liked it
Hmm I tried my best to show it close to reality.
Hope so .
Thanks again vincy
Will try my best dear 😃
Thanks for ur lovely comment 😳

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

wow awesome update avika akka...
u have written jodha's feeling very well akkk ...
nice to knw jodha's family knw jalal's family ...
nd jodha jalal have a good bond. . ..
update next part soon akka...
waiting for jalal entry. ...
thanks for pm... akka...