Akdha new FF~~~I don't love you~~~Chapter 2 updated on pg 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

AWESOME PROLOUGE AND CS...😉👏👏

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Updating... Give me some ideas na
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Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Anyone wants update????

yup .. Update ur all stories dear
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

yup .. Update ur all stories dear

Updating but koi mujhe ideas nahi de raha hai
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Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Updating but koi mujhe ideas nahi de raha hai

idea for which story ..
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

idea for which story ..

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are baap re .. Sbke liye ideas ...
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

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CHAPTER 1
A handsome hunk reaches Mumbai airport as usual seeking his fortune... Mumbai the city which gives many a career... But this city had a valuable gem which was lost but don't know why, as this man entered the city seemed like this was the person who would find the gem back...

5th June, 2015

Jalal" Abdul main pahunch gaya... Ammi ko bol de...
( abdul I reached.. Tell ammi)
Abdul" ok btw kaisa lag raha hai Mumbai? "
( ok btw how is mumbai?)
Jalal" yaar it's awesome... I mean a person will dream to set his house here... I hope main ek din ek bahut bada superstar banke ammi ko bhi yahan bula laun...
( it's awesome... It's a dream world... I hope I become a superstar and call ammi over here)
Abdul" aur mujhe????
( and me??)
Jalal" are haan mere bhai tujhe bhi"
( yes my bro.. You too)
The duo were busy conversing when Jalal spotted a girl in her early twenties wearing a light blue frock having white flowers in her hands and an angry frown on her face...
http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=http://imbbpullzone.laedukreationpvt.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/light-blue-frock.jpg&imgrefurl=http://makeupandbeauty.com/ootd-going-blue/&h=640&w=480&tbnid=DY-0QmyjQEmUJM:&docid=6LRVxk0cJmfXCM&ei=F0sZVqaIBdaPuATXmaiYCg&tbm=isch&client=ms-android-panasonic&ved=0CFIQMygtMC1qFQoTCObvo5C3uMgCFdYHjgod1wwKow
He was simply mesmerized by her... As he was totally a flirtatious guy he went near her and acted as if he were waiting for someone... But what he couldn't notice was that she was really angry...

**FLASHBACK**
Maina " beta aaj tere narendra taau aa rahe hain.. As ham sab busy hain tu pls unhe pick up kar le..."
( dear today your narendra taau is coming.. So as we all are busy pls go and pick him up from the airport)
Jodha " what?? Magar kyun??? Ek to kuch karne nahi dete upar se bin bulaye mehmaan jaise hamesha tapak padte hain..."
( why?? First of all he doesn't give us freedom and second always comes here without we inviting him...)
Maina" beta"
Jodha" nahin maa"
( no maa)
Bharmal " jodha beta"
Jodha " ok papa.. I am going "

**FLASHBACK ENDS**

Jalal " heyy..."
Jodha just looks rolls her eyes and turns back...
Jalal " ok so let me start.. My name is Jalal...
Jodha" so??"
Jalal " what so... Tell me your name "
Jodha" why??"
Jalal " ok fine don't "

Just then Narendra taau enter...
As he is really orthodox, he hated seeing jodha near a guy that also wearing a frock..

He said " hey young man.. Who are you... Go away "
Jodha " narendra taau.."
Narendra taau " ruko jodha"
(Wait jodha)
Jalal" jodha... Hmmm"
Jalal" but"
Narendra taau" no buts gooo.."
That's when Jodha says
" taau woh mera dost hai"
( he is my friend..)
Narendra taau is shocked and jalal is smirking...
Jodha drags Narendra taau but looks back to find Jalal smirking and giving her a flying kiss...
She rolls her eyes while jalal looks at her retreating figure...

Precap:- akdha meet again at a restaurant..

Phewww...
Guyzz pls tell me your views... I don't know if this story is going well so pls pls share your views...
I would dedicate this to everybody who are my buddies because they have been a constant support throughout...
Thanks guyzzz..
Love yaa

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