Akdha new FF~~~I don't love you~~~Chapter 2 updated on pg 14

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Heyy guyzzz...
Those of you who have seen my writing gallery must be knowing that I have written an uocoming FF called I don't love you... So here I present...
I DON'T LOVE YOU!
PROLOGUE:-
Jodha" just get lost from my life you fu**ing idiot..
" But I love you Jo"
Jodha"But I don't Sam"
" please don't do this to me"
" Who the hell are you to tell me what I should do... Now get lost otherwise I will contact the police...
" you will get this same treatment from someone and that day you will realise that you are always wrong... Think this as a curse..." And he leaves...
" curse my foot... Haa.."

CHARACTER SKETCH:-

Jodha Sharma:- 22 years...daughter of the richest business man of India Bharmal Singh... A spoiled brat... Many people call her heartless especially her ex boyfriends... Changes BFs like clothes and treats them as her servant... Many people think she is lunatic but only she knows the deep secret in her heart that led her to become like this... She loves her family the most..

Bharmal Sharma:- richest business tycoon of India... A very respected person... Loves his daughter the most...and thus never questions her but deep inside he worries about her... Very strict in his principles... Worried because he doesn't have a son to look after his company..

Mainawati Sharma:- loves Jodha a lot... Is really worried for Jodha...

Sukanya Sharma and Shivani Sharma:- younger sisters of Jodha...

Jalaluddin Mohammed:- A struggling actor... Looking for opportunities... Has a golden heart and wishes to find his lady love soon... A comedian and flirty type of a guy..

Hamida Mohammed:- mother of jalal... Very caring... Wishes to find her DIL soon...

Bakshi Mohammed and Mirza Mohammed:- siblings of Jalal

Surya Singh:- Jodha and he share a dark secret of their life...

Sam:- Jodha's last BF

Always Jalal is the heartless person... So this time I made Jodha heartless..

ok... So how was it... Sorry for the late updates... I am having fever so at bed rest...no one is letting me touch my phone or laptop... As every one are busy with their work now and I am getting bored so wrote it... Sorry for the mistakes..
Joota, chappal, tomatoes allowed...
Pls do hit like and comment if you liked this and tell me if I should continue...
Hopefully I will update my FFs and write my new os and ss by Sunday..
P.S. {HOPEFULLY}😆

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Index
Chapter 1-pg 8
Chapter 2-pg 14
Edited by Prachi0409 - 9 years ago
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congrats for the new story dr..nice prolugue..update soon eagerly waiting.. and get well soon..
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congrats for new story dear😊
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interesting prologue.. excited to read first chapi...pls updte soon
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gud prologe Jo heartless
JA struggling actor,
NYC start, Congo fa new ff
thanks fa pm, update soon.
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Congrats for the new story
Continue soon and thnx for the pm.
Take care 😊
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Interesting jo heartless n jl golden heart too gud
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Congrats for new story dear
Nice prologue and CS
Continue soon
Thansk for pm:-) :-)
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congrats fr new ff...
nice prologue n
intersting chrctr sketch
excitd fr 1chap updt soon
n pless add me in ur buddylist n
pm me whn u updt n
take care gt well soon 😊

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