~Revenge~ Thread-5 (THREAD CLOSED)

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

superb chappy monu.
it was really amazing update .jo ja closeness..hmmm...
ja jo getting close day by day.
now ja hv some one to share happiness n sorrow too.nd waiting for jo's constent to complete their marriage.
bt u again end the peak point .really wonder what he had saw.
hope its not arth n jo together otherwise he will surely kill them.
u r ending this story 😭
i will really miss it.
plz don't end in hatred or mu .

nd now update soon it as u end at point where curiousity is at peak

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Hii neetu 😊
its awesome superb updt 👏 👏
thnk god jalal stop on last momnt.
wow thy r coming closure slowly n
now thy luv n trust echothr
😳
but wht was in end 😲 is evrthng alright
is she fine n pless dear no misundrstng pless.
the chap was amazing dear jst loved it
🤗
n dear if possible try to make it happy ending
this is jst my opinion
😊
eagrly waiting fr nxt chap
updt soon n do pm me 😃
n thnk fr pm.

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Christy

@....Anabella...

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

awsm blossom chappy as always neetu but u ended d chappy with a cliffhanger so bad cont soon

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

awsum
ja stopped for ja

u left at cliffhanging
update sooon

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

sorry neetu yaar i m hell busy these days and unable to comment on the story but surely reply in night😊

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Krina

@cuty1997

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

awesome update monu

jalal start understanding jodha

but what he see??

thanks for pm me

update soon

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vjctpt378

@vjctpt378

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Arey yaar Wat a endin ...so excited pls update soon

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

hey cutie ur ending this ff😭...y tragic end ma both suffered alot in their past pls unite them...jo loved him unconditionally he is her first love ... same with jalal he wanted to take revenge so married her but his feelings nd emotions changed hom gor good so dont separate jj ... life we cant see relationship lets atleast deam about it with beloved jj name ... its a request...

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

you very well written their pain, feeling, possessiveness, pure and unconditional love of jo and jalal 's love as his life depend on her its your decision about end but I thought of some happy surprise and whole life they gone through pain only so they may deserve togetherness alive.