Rajat's Jalal & Paridhi's Jodha:Farewell Edits & Musings - Page 33

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Not more than urs dear..😉

Originally posted by: Deepasub

watched the episode of the ghangaur festival and Jo Ja's first nok jhok.

It was nostalgic and mesmerising at the same time.

It inspired me to write something. Here it is😉

Registhan ke mitti ki khusbhoo kardi hume itni chanchal

Jo hume kichkar Amer laayi bankar badal

Amer ke utsav mein man hogaya pyar mein jhilmil

Jab se dekha hai use, woh jheel si aankhon ne kardi dil ko ghayal

Uski makmali badan aur gulab jaisi jalwoon ne banadi hume paagal

Haseen kwabh mein dektha hoon tujhe roz aur hotha hoon chanchal

Kaise bhool jaaye woh haseen pal, woh aankhein bhari Kaajal

Yaad kardetha hai har roz teri tasver yeh teri payal

Jaathe jaathe yahi kahoonga

tumhe paana aur baho mein seemetna hogi nahi mushkil

kyun ki jeetha mera aadhat hai, tu hogi zarror hasil

Jashn hoga, dono mulk hongi iss vivah mein shamil

Yeh milan tho hoga yakeenan mukamil

[DIV]Tab tak hoga mere paas teri yaad bankar yeh tere paayal.

😉

Main shayar toh nahin magar ai hasseenaa...

TFS purani yadein taaza ho gyi

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Thanks for the concession😊

The school time obsession deserves great appreciation👏

The sweet addiction has increased the admiration🤗

Your poetry is a sweet intoxication😳

Hope u don't consider this an irritation

Answer my question😉

Whats ur profession?😆😆

Bindu 👏
Awesome dear.

Answer I hope to provide to ur question
But as a cryptic deception
It's an age old vocation
I'm always on a mission
To discover all sorts of exceptions
With intention to portray the current state of situation
It's never free of tension.

People's admiration always provide me the persuasion
To try something new with poetic expression
Hope I have given u my perception
To mislead is not my intention
Hope u can now guess my profession



😉 😆

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Not more than urs dear..😉

Somebody is being very modest 😆

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Nah nah..hum kabhi aapke barabari nahi kar sakthe.

Yahan har kissi ke lafz khaas hai
Koi nahi hai kam ya zyaadha.
Behat khaas hai mere liye aapke andaaz.

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Thanks Akka😃all the credit goes to one and only Deepu di🤗

Gals I'm touched by ur effort. 👏
Keep rocking

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Main shayar toh nahin magar ai hasseenaa...[DIV]Jalal's Poetic POV ... Loved your beautiful lines deeps👏⭐️

SHUKRIYAJI for sharing with us😃

Thanks Sudha.
Yeah this was one of my fav episode.
Can't believe it's two years ago.

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

TFS purani yadein taaza ho gyi

U r welcome. His is one of my fav episode

Originally posted by: Deepasub

Bindu 👏
Awesome dear.

Answer I hope to provide to ur question
But as a cryptic deception
It's an age old vocation
I'm always on a mission
To discover all sorts of exceptions
With intention to portray the current state of situation
It's never free of tension.

People's admiration always provide me the persuasion
To try something new with poetic expression
Hope I have given u my perception
To mislead is not my intention
Hope u can now guess my profession

😉 😆