MY INNOCENT ANGEL - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Awesome cs... šŸ‘
Jalal hate girls... šŸ˜†
Update soon... 😃
And thanks for the pm... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Congo for new story
Nice character sketch
Continue soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
congo for new story
plz update soon
dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
very nice and new concept plz continue and again sorry for late reply soon i comment in ch
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
prologue



Jalal "ammi what r u doing,dont take my phone.hamida"enough jalal its ur wedding and u came now ,u have only 1 hr ,go get ready.jalal's phone rings,hamida doesnt goive him phone.jalal"ammi i promise this is the last call,let me talk.hamida agrees and gives him the phone,jalal comes to the backyard and talks in the phone while suddenly he sees a girl in a heavy lehenga coming down from the first floor window with a rope,she slips and is abt to fall but jalal catches her on time,the girl closes her eyes in fear but as she didnot fall down she opens her eyes and sees jalal.jalal is already lost in her beauty.the girl looks at him and says"excuse me put me down but jalal just stares her,the girl shakes him bringing him out of his dream land.jalal puts her down and looks at her surprised.jalal"may i know y did jump out of the window.girl keeps her hand on his mouth and says"dont shout iam running away from this marriage.jalal gets shocked"r u the bride.Girl"yes,my name is jodha.jalal"u love anyone.jo"yes.jalal gets another shock"ofcourse my mom,dad,hamida aunty,puppy my dog.jalal laughs at her answer.jo"why ru laughing.jalal"why r u running away.jo"why should i tell u.jalal"i saved u right.jo"promise me u will not allow anyone to marry me then i will tell u.jalal thinks how can i when u r my bride and says'ok promise. jo"i dont want to leave my papa and mamma.jalal"that's it,only that reason.jo thinks for sometime and says"u know the person iam getting married is 70 yrs old.jalal just looks at her amazed.jo continues"he is fat with white hair,now how can i marry a old man she pouts saying this.jalal was just lost in her expressions.jo calls him but he doesnot listen she pinches him.jalal"aah...jo"now tell me will u help me to run away.jalal thinks wow what an irony the great jalaluddin mohammad's would be wife is asking his help to run away from his own wedding and chuckles .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
superb prologue
jodha is very innocent and cute
jalal get mesmerised by her beauty
jodha asking for jalal's help to run away from marriagešŸ˜†šŸ˜†
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
awsome , superb prologue ...
update chaptr asap...
thnks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
beautiful prologe... am sitting in office nd loughing like mad... pls update chapi asap eagerly waiting for the pm...

Last but not least this is the effect jj... name is enough to take u dreamland
Edited by RSlovesJA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Wow really beautiful and funny prologue
plz update 1st chappy soon dear
eagerly waiting thnks 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nice prologue dear..
Interesting too.
Jalal is helping his would be bride to run away from their own marriagešŸ˜†
Continue soon.. Waiting for update.

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