MY INNOCENT ANGEL - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
v funny chappy... 😆 jo running away and asking her wuld b hubby 2 help her 😆 2 gd...jo is v cute...so finaly jalal is happy and ready 2 gt marry wid jo aftr his encounter wid her... 😉 precap is interesting...eager 2 knw hw d stry unfolds... plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
woow yaar very nice ch jodha trying to run away 👏 very funny nice concept keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb start ananya;)
Loved it!❤️
Plz do update soon!
And thank you for the pm...!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ff...
Interesting concept...
Waiting for the next update...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update this story ananya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Is this story is discontinued or cloSed??
Plz tell me
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 3
jo was getting ready and maina was always with her.after sometime jo came dressed in a beautiful green lehenga,jalal was again mesmerised by her beauty but jo was shooting daggers at the groom behind the sehra.jalal chuckled while jo was continuously looking at him to see his face but his face was covered with flowers .all the rituals complete and they go for a muslim wedding.jo is taken to her room for suhaag raat.
jalal comes up to his room dressing himself as a oldman to tease jo.he enters the room and sees jo sitting in the middle of the bed waiting for her groom whom she didnt even see.jalal goes near her and lifts her ghunghat jo slowly looks at him and gets shocked seeing an oldman,tears fall down from her eyes ,jalal gets tensed and says"iam sorry ,i will leave.but before he goes away jo hits him with her tiny fist and shouts"cant u say u were the groom.jalal gets surprised as he thought she was crying seeing oldman as her groom .jalal immediately hugs her to console her,jo too cries hugging him.jalal"enough jo iam sorry.she snaps at him "i will not come to delhi leaving everyone and again cries.jalal holds her hand ,she looks at him"ok jo if u dont want to come i will leave u and go.jo hits him,jalal gets shocked.jo shouts"how can u leave me ,iam ur wife dont u know wife and husband live together,mumma told me i should listen to ur every word ,so u cant leave me and pouts.jalal falls more for her innocence he cups her face"jo will u not do higher studies,jo nods yes ,jalal continues"i promise tomorrow we will go from here but soon i will bring ur parents also to delhi then u can stay with them.jo gets excited and says"u will bring them also.jalal nods .jo hugs him and says"did u bring a chocolate for me.jalal looks at her confused ,she continues "i asked mumma she told u will give .jalal just adores her and says"now its late night,tomorrow i will get it.jo nods like a good girl.jalal removes her heavy jewellery and makes her lie down.jo"i want my teddy or else i cant sleep.jalal smiles and takes her in his embrace and says"from today u hug me instead of ur teddy.jo"why.jalal"because iam ur husband.jo silently nods and hugs him and drifts to sleep because of tiredness.jalal keeps on looking at her and thinks"how innocent she is ,she believed me easily as her mother told to do,he kisses her forehead and says"i will never allow a tear in ur eyes and sleeps with her.next day morning they leave to delhi after jo cries a lot,jalal feels bad but determines to give her every happiness.they reach mohammad mansion,jalal directly goes to outhouse,jo also comes after all the rituals to outhouse and sees jalal working on his laptop and sits beside him.jalal smiles at her and gives a chocolate to her,jo smiles as if its some biggest gift,jalal smiles at her antics,she eats the chocolate putting it all over her face.jalal after some time llooks at her and smiles ,he gets a tissue and cleans her face neatly.he calls someone and a girl comes after sometime wearing a formal pants and shirt.jalal signals her to come in,jo looks at her.jalal"jo she is moti,from today she will be with u ,taking care of u.jo smiles looking at her.jalal asks jo to go to mansion.jo smiles at him and goes from there.jalal to moti"so i appointed u to take care of jo ,my wife ,u should not reveal it tkat jo is my wife outside as i dont want any threat to her,she is very innocent and sensitive.she is just like a kidand u know u got this job because of ur dad who worked for us from past 30 yrs so i think u wont dissapoint me.moti nods .jalal says"after sometime bring jo from mansion.moti leaves.jo in mansion "ammijaan why jalal didnot come to mansion.hamida thinks"u came into his life and i saw him changing ,now i hope u will only get him back to mansion.jo not getting answer shakes her.hamida smiles at her"he likes to stay alone but she knew her kiddo daughter in law will shoot more questions ,so she just said "now go and freshen up i will give u ur favourite lunch .jo goes to outhouse to call jalalfor lunch not knowing her hubby will not like her this idea
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update.
Jo is really an innocent angel😆
Why does Jalal live in outhouse😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear.ur jo is rwally very innocent...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update pls continue soon thanks for pm
And please continue love make life beautiful

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