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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Awww loved ur story that girl must be Jodha right
U r awesome in writing dear please update your next chapter plenty plwj
Hey can we be friends?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Is this ur first piece of writing? If yes ur work is truly appreciable dear..
Update soon.
Thnx for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Superb update dear
u r doing good!!
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awesome chappy dear.eagerly waiting to read more.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
nice update
that gorgeous girl must be jodha
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Thank you paridhiloveu - Yes ofcourse we can be friends 😊
Thanks nhbr - Yes this is my first attempt. I am honoured with your words 😳

Thanks Shefa, mamtasingla, Taklema 😊

I am really happy that you all are finding the story interesting. 😃

Replies to Part 5 (I am unable to make more posts 😭)

Mamtasingla : Thanks Mamta. You're too sweet 😊 Thanks for the continuous support. And hehe, I can manage one more today lets see 😉
And keep reading to know more 😛
Edited by Mouni. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

As soon as she reached backstage, she heaved a sigh of relief. "Jodha! You were nothing short of angelic. Wow. You rocked it woman", a sweet fellow model complimented her.

"Thanks.", Jodha was relieved and happy hearing that. Though the haunting eyes of his were still fresh in her mind.

"I don't think so our show-stopper will make it to the grant. Given the beauty who just graced the stage", another fellow model joined in, winking at Jodha.

"Yeah I agree.", the earlier one said.

Jodha just kept looking at both of them in amusement. She was definetely excited yet she didn't expect anything much.

"Brace yourselves Ladies and Gentlemen. Here walks our stunning show-stopper. Miss Avani.", the melodious announcement echoed.

The tall and gorgeous lady stylishly walked the ramp and she looked really eye-pleasing.

Halting at the front of the ramp, she smiled wide to the audience and front-seaters, displaying her style and confidence. Jalal smiled back at her when she flown a french-kiss to him.

And as soon as she turned back to walk back, the man mildly chuckled to himself. "Over-excitement has taken over her.", he thought.

A few seconds later, all the models walked the ramp one after another with Avani walking at the last with the famous Fashion Designer.

Avani looked at Jalal with a side-glance to express her happiness but to her dismay, he wasn't looking at her. When she traced her gaze along his, she found that he was looking at the lady who had slapped her not long ago.

An instant angry glare formed on her face but when she noticed a smirk on Jalal's face, she concluded that he was definitely upto something.

"Probably he's planning to take revenge from her on behalf of me.", she happily thought.

"Why is he staring at me like that? His lady is at front right?", Jodha irriatedly thought.

Immediately understanding that Jodha had caught him looking at her, Jalal drifted his gaze instantly. He was not here to embarrass anyone, not even a lady who offended him in some or the other way.

"We hope the esteemed dignitaries liked our show. We request our chief guest to please honour the stage and also bless the lucky woman who impressed you all the most.", the host invited the chief-guest.

Jalal walked over to the stage. "Thanks so much Mr.Khan for honouring us all with your presence.", the charming host thanked Jalal before handing over the mic to him.

He received the mic with a smile on his face and then turned to the audience and other dignitaries.


Utilising a lazy sunday afternoon to entertain you all and myself 😉 😆 Hence two updates today.

Edited by Mouni. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Yeppie post it soon waiting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
thankew for two post but dear abhi toh sunday start hua h,we can expect more update for today and a long one😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
coming to update,i just loved it
jodha may win the prize money
continue soon
thanks for pm

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