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harsh

@sirat.kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

nice ch
jodha lives alone or she has parents????jalal was so shocked after seeing jodha lying with closed eyes n pale face...he should now take revenge for hurting Jo...
update soon eagerly waiting...

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

It's painful to read her condition..felt really sad for her.. Just one slap turned her life upside down..

How a person can go to this extent in their jealousy risking other's life..that Avani deserves dreadly punishment..😡 And now I want Jalal to bring justice to Jo.

I felt his pain when he saw her in that situation... Lying pale on the bed just slight moment in her chest while breathing.

My eyes were moist while reading this update.. 😭

U truly deserves an up lauds for penning his 👏

Continue soon dear.. And thanks for the pm.

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Mouni🤗

This update left me speechless dear.

Your description of Jalal's turmoil is brilliant..👏

The way he reacted explains the shock he was subjected to seeing the person he admired on deathbed.

Such a huge contrast in Jodha's physical state is difficult to digest😭 for him.Well written Mouni.

Bakshi thinks Avani has done this unintentionally.But I feel Jalal is smart enough to understand her evil intentions as he is aware of all the incidents that took place b/w them.

Avani was blinded by anger and jealousy..she has to face the punishment now.Her condition is not serious right?So she will gain consciousness soon and donno what drama she plays again😡

Jodha..get well soon😭 at least to teach Avani a lesson.

You are a fabulous writer darling⭐️Your writing is getting finer with the updates😊.

Thanx for an early update and pm too😃.I thought I need to wait till evening for this one.

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Superb update n
update soon eagerly waiting

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AngelDara

@AngelDara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

as usual awesome update mouni

waiting for the next part

update soon dear

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

😭 ohhh this is so terrible to read for me 😭

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

it was sad n emotional chappy😭
loved ur description about jalal he was so sad looking jodha in this condition
jalal will find Avni's evil deeds n punish her for trying to kill😡 my beautiful jodha😭
plz make jodhha fine cant see her like this lifeless😭😭
update soon