Akdha OS series- Welcome to temptation Note on page 115 (18/9/2017) - Page 74

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Even I read that novel...😳

One of my favorite novel Payal...😉

If everyone is praising that novel so much, then I will also give it a try .But only after my exams. 😉

Originally posted by: futus

If everyone is praising that novel so much, then I will also give it a try .But only after my exams. 😉

Wow jj hot passionate moments...loved jo confession nd ja decision. .

totally hot payu... 😳 d atmosphere was hot indeed... 😉 and loved joja confession's jo loved him but he couldn't marry her and was to get marry to ruks but d ending brought smile on my face wow so jalal proposed jo and then again their hot moments... 😉 lovely os dear loved ur wiring v beautifully u have penned down emotions d passionate moments btw d duo... 😳 sorry fr late reply...

Devil boss and bold employee set the screen on fire😉 with your writing. song was apt and lovely.well written jo's feeling,ja's fear ,non acceptance of his feeling turns into rejection to promising relationship. unknowing love can't bear her tear and led him to the promising wish. beautifully write their confession.

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Unres...

Oh my god Payal...

My cheeks are really blushing...

It was so sensuous & hot..😳

The lyrics are perfectly opt for the situation...😉

I liked this type of writing also...

i am bowled with ur description Payal.🤪

It was sooo beautiful... 👏

>>> Thanks a lot dear🤗 glad u liked the song and my writing too😃

Starting I hate Jalal only he was cared for himself but the way he waiting for jo was so beautiful..

When we wake up after a long cry if we saw our loved one face we will be on cloud nine...

That to with apology...😳

>>> Yep😊 he cared for her so much❤️

I loved the way his expressing his feelings...

I don't know I love u but I can't see with u another..

Hahaha... Poor Jalal really scared to say it further...I was blushing like a teenage girl...

I felt I was at jo place...

>>> Oh really??😆😆 Actually he was clear before that he had to marry Ruks and he was with jo only for S** and she was ok with it initially😉

My hubby literally looked at me like have u gone mad or what???

U know I went away with my iPad.,, to avoid my hubby questioning looks 😳

>>> 🤣

It was sooo beautiful & lovely & more hot update...

Thanks for the pm Payal...

I liked this writing also Payal...

Waiting for more os from u...😳

Totally good job payal👏👏

Love u dear...

Sorry for late comment...❤️

>>>> Thanks a ton dearie🤗 I will write one more in this series😉

Love you so much❤️ and don't say sorry😡

Love to read your stories. Pls do keep on writing.

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Love to read your stories. Pls do keep on writing.

superb dear
totally hot or romantic
loved it... keep writting dear

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: anu012

superb dear
totally hot or romantic
loved it... keep writting dear

thnks for pm