Akdha OS series- Welcome to temptation Note on page 115 (18/9/2017)

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#671

Wow awesome update n thnxx for pm

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Awesome dear

Continue os like this

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rameshwari11

@rameshwari11

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#673

really wounderful hot and emotions very beautiful last jj get married. thank you for pm and good story

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Hey Payal

I liked your evolved style of writing bold and crispy👍🏼

This OS was awesome, the way Ja commanded space and Jo finally could put up how involved she was with him. He could then understand his feelings for her. Finally he proposed..

Nice end with a naughty punishment 😉

Do continue with your ff journey... Will await your next update👍🏼

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#675

superb os
waiting for your next update

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Ruthshalini

@Devilicious_ME

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Future best erioct writer 👏

U pen it down very fabulous

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#677

Its amazing yar..
soo hot passionate..
jalal finally agree for the marriage..oh its just perfect..
u r really a vry good writer..
tnxx dear for the pm..

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#678

Fabulous...fantastic...super se bhi uper os...just love a new writing style...please continue with this new style

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#679

It's damn hot n sensuous. ..

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#680

Okk , first of all , most importantly , my Heartiest apology !

M really very sorry for the dealy I caused ! N another sorry , coz I don't know wethr u'll like my cmmnt or not 😛 !

Anyways , I being under 18 read ur this MARVELOUS , SIZZLING n The most ROMANTIC OS ; so another Sorry for that too 😛 !

This Os was not only Hot n Sexy but truly a Wonderful Story too , I really loved both the characters , their Persona , which you portrayed so very well , n the way they ended up expressing their feelings for each other ⭐️ !

Your This Jalal too , was just tooo Hot to handle 😉 ! N our dearest Jodha wasn't less here , 😉 !

Well , i've always hated tht Ruks 🤢 ! Thank God , she is out here 😆 or else Jalal...😡 😆 !

You always choose the best song for the situation ⭐️ , n here too this one fitted perfectly 😉 !

Uff ! Their anger along with desire always create fire just the way they did here 😳 ! Uff ! I guess need a bucket full of ice ! It was really soo damn hot !

Ahha ! He is punishing her 😆 but for making him wait just a few seconds 😲🥱 ! Actually , all these men are same , totaly impatient 🥱 !

But I liked his punishment 😉 !

N I loved Jo's tht dialogue to..."I too know your weakness sweetheart " 🤣 ! (Don't use ur brain much here , this was just JUST ONLY fr the dialogue)

But , what was the reason coz of which he , initially was denying to marry her ?

But at last he too realized his true feelings for her ! N she found him there waiting for her to open up her eyes n the instant she did , he proposed , her Happiness knew no bounds n so mine too !😆

I really loved this change in your writing style ! I would really love to read the nxt OS from Jalal'z pov if u could ...please n n n ...if u allow me to read tht as well , or else m Happy if Lakhmi dii wanna read tht on my behalf 🤣 !

Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago