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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vtui


shut-up the mostest masum girl🤣🤣🤣, after half an hr

I don't think I'll be able to read it before night!
off to study! Bye di!😔
good night!😊 tomorrow morning u'll see my comment :))
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

I don't think I'll be able to read it before night!
off to study! Bye di!😔
good night!😊 tomorrow morning u'll see my comment :))

I m not reading either 2night sonu, too late, wud read 2moro night, but posting now, kal se job per jana hai😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing chappy dii
both are loving each other company ..Jalal is feeling like he is in home wow. .
can't wait to see Jalal 's reaction when he ll see Jo / his dream girl
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry dear, but will be saturday
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mushat

amazing chappy dii
both are loving each other company ..Jalal is feeling like he is in home wow. .
can't wait to see Jalal 's reaction when he ll see Jo / his dream girl
continue soon


Mishu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vtui


Sorry dear, but will be saturday

Ok no problem ... Take ur time... But just keep on giving awesome updates ha..
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Posted: 10 years ago

For easy maneuvering click the following links

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 5


CHAPTER 6


CHAPTER 7


::::::::::::::::::::::::::CHAPTER 4::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

"Jodha tum itni Udhas kyun ho?" suddenly holding her both hands Jalal asked Jodha

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Before Jodha cud realise what's happening, she heard a voice from door. She withdrew her hands from Jalal's hands with a jerk. Jalal suddenly came back to his senses, Dr Meeta ki awaz thii. Jalal, u have to be taken to ECG room, as ur final tests before surgery wud be carried out 2day, as ur operation day has been fixed for 2moro" Dr Meeta said entering the door. Two attendents in blue have brought a stretcher; they made Jalal lie down on stretcher to take him to ECG room. Doctor put her hands on Jodha's shoulder sypathetically before following jalal.

Jodha was left in room with her thoughts.

The boy with brown eyes, had just left a pin drop silence at his speech on Exploring Sceinece in India. He was luking dashing in jet maroon suit over a cream shirt. Jodha's heart had started beating fast , the moment he entered stage to deliver his speech. She was not able to concentrate to what he was saying despite her all efforts. All it sounded to her as he was singing a beautiful romantic song for her. Jodha was a silent listener at that event being organised at N. Delhi from Scientific and technical development Institue for 10th class students. The most intelligent students in science field, have been invited to participate as audience or to deliver speeches

The auditorium was full with loud clappings . The boy had finished his speech and has moved to his group to the other corner of auditorium. At the end of symposium , the boy was called again to be presented a gold trophy from Chief Guest . As everyone went out, she hurriedly went out so she atleast can have another look of him, but her bad-luck, already a big Que of girls were encircling him. Her group leader was instructing to them to gather soon and sit in hired van quickly, as that was a long way to go back to Manali, and she didn't want any type of delays. A flashback passed thorugh Jodha's eyes. After returning back from that trip, Jodha was never able to wipe off those small moments of memories of that boy. He remained imprinted in her mind for-ever. He remained to be his first and last crush, until of course, when she met Jalal.

Her memories now took her to her first meeting with Jalal. She was instructed to receive Jalal at hospital gate as her new patient at his arrival. As she saw that handsome guy coming out of car, with help of his driver, she suddenly felt herself getting attracted 2wards him. That was the second time, she ever felt a sudden magnetic attraction 2wards some-one. Jalal was a very handsome guy, medium built, dashing personality.He was in orange jacket, and blue jeans. He was wearing the dark glasses probably because of his lost vision. His features luked a bit familiar to her. Being so rich, may be she has seen some of pics in newspapers, she thought. But one thing was sure, she never expected him to be such sober luking full of kindness and honesty written on his face. She was totally stumbled. She has never seen such an attractive man in her life b4. Her heart had started beating profoundly." Is it Love at First Sight,"she had asked her-self.

Later she realised that Jalal was the same guy whom she has seen as a teenager boy. It just so happened that one day when Jalal talked about DG, at same time he asked about any-ones presence in her life. She told her about her first-ever secret crush at one Science symposium held some 5 yrs back. Which seminar, the one organised by at N delhi. OhI had also gone to attend that seminar, in fact I actually delivered one speech" He ended his sentence. "Oh really, did someone try to hear u?" She had asked him teasingly.

"Probably not, thats why they handed me the golden trophy. If they wud have listened , they wud have never done that." The comment strike her immediately, oh so that boy has grew up in this handsome young man. Thats why he luked familiar to her, his features always try reminding her of someone she knew. She cud not listen to his name on that day because of clapping sounds, and more because of she was lost in him rather than anything else.

Even after knowing the truth, she kept mum. She did not disclose that he was the one, her secret crush. No she shud not xpress such feelings 2wards him. Though She cud not resist loving him secretly. Though she knew, she luved him immensely , she never disclose her feelings 2wards him. She does not want to be source of more troubles to his secret LUV.Moreover there is huge status-difference between these two. If she wud have met him before, she may have done that, not now. It cud be thought, that she tried to take advantage of his condition.

Sun was travelling back to its home after burning itself for the whole day, so that earth and earth dwellers can get its energy in form of light and heat to live through their life. If sun wud not have been that big donor, there wud have no life on earth, she thought while dropping the window- curtain . Dubte suraj ki rays ne aasman ko bloody-red kar diya tha. The clock cukooed six times. Jalal was taken back to his room only few minutes back. Heaps tests were done on his functioning systems all day long. Jodha came to his bed-side to read his reports to him, about his ECG, The doctors have declared all the tests fine. All his body functions were checked to be working all fine. Jalal tired tha, and upset bhi. Jodha cud feel Jalal's condition

"Sardi bad gayi hai, sir aap blanket le liziye" saying she pulled the blanket to cover jalal's legs. Yeh room jo pichle days se became so chirpy, suddenly became so quiet 2day. Un donon ki nok-jok se, unki khilkhilati hansi se kuch dinon k liye fill ho utha room , aaj jaise deep shock me tha usiki tarah. Those few not so happy but still undonon k ek saath k days seem to be drifting away soon.

Suraj jaldi hi asat ho gya tha, aur peeche chod gaya tha gehra andhera. Aaj amavas thi, so there was no moon even ,ki chaand hi suraj ki light reflect kart deta and logon ko energy ki false hope de deta.

Jalal ko to waise hi kuch dikhyai nahi deta tha, itni darkness me Jodha ko bhi kuch najar aana band ho gya tha. Scared, she switched on all of the high watts bulbs, but bulbs ki roshni jaise room me faile andhere ko beet nahi kur pa rahi thi. Jodha uss andhere aur uss khamoshi se bahut durr gayi thi, as if this darkness has crept inside her


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Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
done, wud like to have honest comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
please do some comments honestly
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update di...
so jodha's first crush was jalal only that superb di nd she love him too... that's even more lovely...
nd jalal's all tests r good that's nice nd d last part on d nature was superb... waiting for next update di... nd thank u for pm...

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