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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#981

"oh shit..!! Today m so
late" and she ran towards
the house after bid adieu
to arth...

Arth was staring
at her retreating figure
with a hope but somewhere deep down
he know that she can
never be his...

*****

It had been 2 hours, since
he had been home and she is nowhere to be
seen...

He had tried to call
her but she had recieved
none... She have to
explain about morning
happenings...

With each passing second the anger
and worry moreover his
fear which he was
suppressing from
morning is now bubbling
to come out...

And empty appetite has taken a toll
over his senses...

Soon the
door bell rang... He
literally ran towards door
and engulf he in a tight
hug...

His insecurities were shouting in his mind... his
heart was thumping
loudly... Jodha was baffled
by his action but hugged
him back...

He immediately
scooped up her in his arms, and headed
towards his room...

His
eyes darker than night
scaring her... "ja..lal
wh..what are you
do...doing??" she shuddered and wriggled
to come out of his grasp...

But unknowingly
infuriated him more...
Resulting him in
tightening his grip on her... "stop it..." jalal hissed
in a dangerous low tone...

Hearing his angry voice,
she stopped her
struggle... Both pair of
eyes are wet... "jalal please leave me... Please"
jodha said in a low tone,
helplessnes swept across
her features...

Next
moment she got pinned to
the wall "then why jodha, why?? Why you cause me
pain?? Why don't you
understand that i can't
loose you??" with this he
inched closer to her... His eyes wet, and lips closer to her...

*****

Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#982

me first 🥳nice chappy..wht will hapnd to next 😕 poor jalal.. 😭 update ASAP neetu..lub u baby❤️

Edited by savindi.db - 10 years ago

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#983

thats all... short update... i expected lllooonnnggg one... this arth ufff.. if i get a chane will kill punching on his eyes... wat this monster wil do with jodha... continue soon eagerly waiting for next chapi nd pm

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Riya jha

@riya.jha7

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#984

Loved it Neetu! Awesome update!

U have written it beautifully!

Thanks for the update😛

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#985

superb ch
excited to read next ch n a big one next time
update soon
pls don't be late
eagerly waiting

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#986

Nice chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter dont be late make it fast

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#987

splendid update.
seeing jo n arth together ja jealous to core.
his past nd fear of loose his love ones take a toll over him.
his insecurites increased seeing jo away from him.
while that jerk arth literally drool n stick with jo knowing that she can never b his .
while jo totally unaware about both the men's inner turmoil enjoyed her first day on job.
it was so relaxing n soothing for her.
she really excited to share her day on work with ja.
reaching home ja engulf her in his tight embrace.
jo shocked with his sudden gesture.
ja took her in his arms nd went to bedroom.
while jo wriggling to come out from his hold causing his hold more tight.
finally he left her nd trapped her between wall n him.
jo asked what happened to him that he is behaving like this nd ja poured out all his pain n fear.
the fear to loose her which he can't afford.
really well penned down.

neetu nxt update sooon haa...
waiting eagerly for it.