~Revenge~ Thread-4 (THREAD CLOSED) - Page 102

Originally posted by: riya.jha7

Loved it Neetu! Awesome update!

U have written it beautifully!

Thanks for the update😛

thankew so much riya 😳

Originally posted by: sirat15

superb ch
excited to read next ch n a big one next time
update soon
pls don't be late
eagerly waiting

thankew sirat !
Will try to update long and asap...
😉

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Nice chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter dont be late make it fast

thanks bro :)

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

splendid update.
seeing jo n arth together ja jealous to core.
his past nd fear of loose his love ones take a toll over him.
his insecurites increased seeing jo away from him.
while that jerk arth literally drool n stick with jo knowing that she can never b his .
while jo totally unaware about both the men's inner turmoil enjoyed her first day on job.
it was so relaxing n soothing for her.
she really excited to share her day on work with ja.
reaching home ja engulf her in his tight embrace.
jo shocked with his sudden gesture.
ja took her in his arms nd went to bedroom.
while jo wriggling to come out from his hold causing his hold more tight.
finally he left her nd trapped her between wall n him.
jo asked what happened to him that he is behaving like this nd ja poured out all his pain n fear.
the fear to loose her which he can't afford.
really well penned down.

neetu nxt update sooon haa...
waiting eagerly for it.

omg😲 deep itna long comment... Thankew thankew Thankew so much deep😳
m in love wid ur cmnt...❤️ 😆
Will try to update asap

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Hey Neetu🤗

How was ur exams .?

Lovely update dear..😊

Jo became RJ..wow!😊

Poor jalal burning in his insecurities..😵

Continue soon.

hi didu🤗
umm pretty good
thankew geet di for the lovely cmnt😊
sure di

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

superb update neetu👏👏
jodha becomes a radio jockey
jalal is very insecured
hate that arth😡😡
update soon

thanks a lot gayu 😃
jo😉
very insecure 😔
arth ki band bja dete hai revenge readers...🤣
will try

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Super duper update neetu👏
thankew di

Jodha darling enjoying her new job.. wow .. she is a RJ now 😃
>>>> 😉

Arth arth arth😡😡😡
god pls save this poor soul from my sweet didu 🤣
coz of his friendship with JO .. Jallu becoming in secured day by day😡

Love the last scene Jalal's helplessness , his love , pain was wth few words u expressed so well 👏
i want to write more but u know naa how lazy ur devil is

Why did u stop here😡
cliffhanger...😎
and when will we get the next update 😭 am worried for JO😭
nxt update i don't know

What will he do with her now😡😳

shh..!! Its a secret di

@Bold

Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Awesome but small

Why did jo go to arth??

Uff... Ye ladka haye allah

Btw update soon

thankew prachi !!
Aree itna long to tha 😲
arth arth arth Tch..tch...tch 😆
will try

Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Time for a new thread

yippee 🥳

Originally posted by: lovespari

superb chap dear..
bt y it soo short pless mk it looong in nxt
nxt updt soon n ples pm me also

thankew dear
will try
sure