Akdha OS {Chocolate}

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"My chocolate!!!" cried the girl and ran behind her 'stupid devil'. The boy sat on a rock waiting for his 'cutie' and just when she reached there n was about to grab her favourite purple coloured packet d boy stood up jumping. Giving her a 'catch me if u can' look he started running again. "Aawwwhhh" d girl made a pouty face stumping her foot. "De naa, devilll..." she screamed on top of her lungs while chasing him all around d park. "luk ja naaa..." she cried again to which d boy stopped for a moment looked back n showed her his cute little tongue. "Hwww luk abhi dekti hu tujhe!! Stupid!!" now she ran behind him like mad. After a good time of Tom & Jerry chasing finally d girl stopped him by grabbing d collar of his orange T shirt from d back. The small fair boy turned towards her n kept d chocolate in d pocket of his black & grey three quarter jeans. "Ab kya kalegi tu???" asked d boy raising his eyebrows with a naughty smirk.
"Kat dungi tela pocket aur kya!!.." answered d girl with not much of a caring tone.

"Chiii... Jodha, tu bali hoke pickpocket banegi kya??!!" said d boy with a toothy smile.

"Kya kaha tune!!! Stupid devil!!! M kyu pickpocket banungi?? Tu banega robber, bht bala(bada) wala.

The little boy's eyes widen in cofusion n cheeks turn red in anger not understanding his 'cutie's' robber wala accusation on him.

Now d small naughty girl understood her friend's conditon very well. She slapped her forehead but mentally patted her shoulder for talking too smart with her 'devil'.

"Offo!! Dekh, abhi se tu mela chocolate chin laha h to bala hoke tu robber hi banega naaa... Stuppid!!!" she tried to make her friend understand by giving him d best explanation she could throwing n waving her palms. "Waise Jalal tu joker bhi bn skta h. Dekh na gusse me tela nak kaise laal ho gya h" n she started giggling.

"Dekh moti, m koi robber wobber nhi banunga samjhi!!! Kuch bhi mt bl warna m tujhe cotton candy lake ni dunga"

She feared of losing her cotton candy but how could she show that!!! "Thik h mt dena. Ullu Jallu!!" she said shrugging her shoulders while trying to keep her sliky straight long hair away from her face with her litte fingers.

"Tu h chuha. Ni ni rabbit!! Aur m tujhe sunflower bhi ni lake dunka Aur ha ab m kbhi tujhse baat bhi nhi kalunga. Yaad rkhna!!" said d boy spitting all his narazgi on his best friend.

The girl looked away as her eyes filled with tears. She went from there stumping her feet n sat on d grass hugging her knees. No doubt she was upset about him not giving her cotton candy n sunflower BUT she could never bear him not talking to her anymore. She placed her small head between her knees n looked down.

Now his face also turned gloomy. No matter how much he loves to annoy his 'cutie' he can never see tears in her eyes. He slowly walked towards her n sat beside her making a puppy face.

"Sun na rabbit" he tried to manaofy her but
"I am not a rabbit." came from an angry Jodha still looking down.

"Alle to maine galat kya bola h??!! Khudko dekh to zala moti." hearing this from Jalal Jodha looked at herself n found out she was really looking like a cute rabbit in white top n pink short skirt. She sweetly smiled at him but soon made her face straight n said "Tune kaha tha na mujhse baat ni kalega to thik h m bhi tujhse baat ni kalungi. Kabhi ni!!"

"Pal m to tujhse baat KL laha hu na moti! " he hit her head lightly.

"M moti ni huuu..." she screamed with a puppy face while trying to hit him
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"moti moti moti" he laughed showing her his thumb.

"huhhh.." she again turned her face away.

"Achcha baba solly. Ye le." he gave her a purple coloured packet.
"Ni chahiye" said d angry princess.

"Le naaa..." d stubborn kid broke a piece of d chocolate n entered it in her mouth.

"Tu meli chocolate mujhse chin kl ab mujhi ko khila laha h!!!"

"Alle ni ni, ye teli wali ni h. Wo to maine tujhse paklam pakli (pakram pakri) me jeet ke liya tha na... to m waps kyu du???" he said possessively n continued "ye mela chocolate h."

"Pl Jalal tune kb jeeta?? Maine to tujhe pakal liya tha na!??"

"Offo Jodha tu kha naa..." he quickly said to avoid d embarrassment. "Teli wali Roasted Almond thi aur ye Fruit & Nut h. Bilkul humali talha"

"Mtlb???" asked Jodha in utter confusion.

"Mtlb ye jo Nut h, this is like Me. STRONG. n this Raisin is like You. SOFT SOFT."

"And what about this chocolate that covered d fruit n nut??" Jodha again threw one of her never ending questions.

"The Chocolate is our Friendship. That bounds us together. Samjhi dumbo!!"

Jodha gave him d widest smile n kissed his cheek after listening to d perfect answer of her question n said "But Jalal tu to mujhe cutie bulata h na?? Mujhe wohi jyada pasnd h. Cutie."

"Ha I also like devil better. It sounds like a big guy." said Jalal raising his collar.

"Haww"

Both d 3 year olds laughed after this n fed each other chocolate.

"Stupid Devil, tu bala hoke mele se shadi kalega na??" asked Jodha innocently chewing n licking d chocolate.

"Ha le baba Cutie. Warna m ye kaise kalunga???" saying this he pulled Jodha's small little nose with his chocolate dipped fingers.

"Aaa Devil!!" Jodha too pulled his chubby cheeks with her hands full of chocolate.

Both soon started rolling on d floor holding their tummy laughing their lungs out seeing one's nose n other's cheeks fully covered in chocolate. After they finished their chirpy laughter Jalal took a handkerchief n gave it to Jodha n said "Now wipe your face Cutie. Warna mamma gussa karengi." to which Jodha nodded very seriously. After wiping their faces n smiling at each other suddenly Jodha screamed

"Devil look, Kesar Coolfi!!!" n they both ran towards d coolfi stall holding each other's hand...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I couldn't sleep for d last few nights after hearing d whole JA going off air thing. I didn't even log in here also in d past few days as I can't look at d bad news anymore.
Honestly guys I'm so confused. I called Balaji yesterday n they confirmed it's a rumour n JA's not going off air but Zee is still saying they have no official news about d show.
So sleep was fr away from my eyes... got up at 3 am started writing this to get my mind off d off air news n just finished it. (well took a 10mins brk to eat ice cream😉 hope u all don't mind😆)
I know guys is stupid OS ko padne k baad mujh pr juto ki barsat hone wali h but mujhe is confusion se mukti chahiye tha😳

plzz everyone leave your precious comments (sath me jitne chahe jute attach kr sakte ho🤗) n kisiko bhi agr Stupid Devil aur Cutie achche lage to plzz hit d like button. Aur ha kisike pass is stupid story k liye koi achcha sa naam h to plzz suggest 😃 story khtm krne k baad mujhe bht neend arhi thi n koi naam ni sooj rha tha to Chocolate rkh diya...
plzzz forgive my mistakes. No proof reading done. I'm feeling sooo sleepy n no pms sent (told u I'm terribly sleepy ri8 now😳)

N ha sbse ek akhri n sabse important request...

PLZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ WATCH JODHA AKBAR AT 8 AND SAVE MY LIFE. EVERYTHING HAS UPS N DOWNS RIGHT?? WE SHOULD SUPPORT THEM WHEN THEY R NOT AT D TOP. PLZZZ EVERYONE WATCH JA AT 8 N HELP INCREASING D TRPS TO KEEP D SHOW GOING M SURE EXCITING TRACK WILL BE COMING SOON.
Edited by SreshthaBiswas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute os
and don't get tension about the JA ending
sleep with dear 😊
thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww such a cute and sweet os. Reminds me of my childhood days. Being carefree, having fun, no stress or tension, laughter and happiness all the time and everywhere.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super cute os :))
loved it :)
and don't be tensed about JA's ending..
it's surely a rumour.. As JA got extension till August :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. Loved their innocence and cute fight
Edited by chunty1962 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww
It was so cutie devil OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cute n sweet is dea...
thanks for writing.

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