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maheshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#821

your Radha is waiting😈 for revenge.do not break her heart.give an opportunity to make him jealous.

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KanJmaskis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#822

Tansen gave deep mysterious smirk to Jalal and began to sing.

Koi Fariyaad Tere Dil Mein Dabi Ho Jaise

Tune Aankhon Se Koi Baat Kahi Ho Jaise...

Jaagte Jaagte Ek Umr Kati Ho Jaise

Jaan Baaki Hai Magar Saans Ruki Ho Jaise...

His singing was so deep that Jalal and Radha's soul carted out with intense unexplainable spirits for each other. Both of them were beholding each other without fluttering an eyelid... As if their souls were communicating silently.

Har Mulaakat Pe Mehsoos Yehi Hota Hai

Mujhse Kuch Teri Nazar Pooch Rahi Ho Jaise

Raah Chalte Hue Aksar Yeh Ghumaan Hota Hai

Woh Nazar Chhup Ke Mujhe Dekh rahi Ho Jaise...

'As if, your eyes are secretly watching me...' at this line both of them were gazing at each other, but suddenly both came out of the spell and began to look somewhere else...

Ek Lamhe Mein Simat Aaya Hai Sadiyon Ka Safar

Zindagi Tej Bahut Tej Chali Ho Jaise

Is Tarah Pehron Tujhe Sochta Rehta Hoon Main

Meri Har Saans Tere Naam Likhi Ho Jaise

On each and every line Jalal was praising Tansen... His heart was feeling connected to each word, but throughout the song his eyes were constantly searching her eyes... He didn't care he was surrounded by people... He didn't care Hamida was looking at him... His soul was lost deep in the enchanting song and was creating waves of passion of love for her. She was no exception either, even though she was struggling to control her emotions, it was not possible, her heart and eyes were getting attracted to him like moth to flame. Both were magically enchanted.

While Atgah was giving him information, Jalal's eyes once again caught Adham, who was staring at Radha lustfully...

Jalal's concentration diverted, his jaw clenched

Edited by KanJmaskis - 9 years ago

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karishma.s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#823

Have u given up on the story ?? Atleast please tell us how long it's almost 5 months since u updated !! Plz when is the next update coming tell us and if u don't have time to continue Atleast tell us so that we don't keep waiting for update. love this story and want it to continue at the same time we have been waiting for an update forever. At least a hint about when the update might come will be useful

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Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#824

Kanchan,beautiful musings dear👏

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Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#825

Bavi di,get well soon🤗 and put an end to our wait😊

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KanJmaskis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
Kanchan,beautiful musings dear👏

Thanku bindu 😊

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maheshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#827

there are few people who are gifted with arts and Bhavini you are one of them.. you are God' favourite .let the flap your wings do not tie it.you are the reason of happiness of many people.ek bhi din aisha nahi hota jab main tumhe yaad nhi karti huin bhale hi hum dono ek dusre ko nahi jante hai but i always pray for ur well being.zindgi mein ups and downs aate hai eska matlab yein nahi ki hum har maan lein.your RKG has captured my whole existance if you will not complete it ,i will be shattered ,i can not forget this story in my entire life.yei hamesha mujhe meri jindgagi mein ek soonapan ka ehsas karwate rahega.i have saved your both stories aur jab bhi main inhe padti hoo khushi mere chehre se tapkne lagtih hai.lagta hi nahi ki kahani pad rahi hoon,main to unhe sajiv dekhti hoon.tum jaisi exceptionally talented genius lekhika ko likhna band nahi karna chahiy,waise bhi tumne wada kiya tha ki tum apni kahanio ko adhura nahi chhorogi unhe unke mukam tak pahoochaugi.tum unki janamdatri ho aur ek janamdatri ka farz kaya hota hai,use tum bhali bhanti janti hogi.hum log hamesha tumhara sahug karne ke liye tyar hai.

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#828

Bhavu di 🤗
get well soon...
Please jaldi vapas aao naa😔

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melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#829

hope you are fine now . come back soon.

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melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Hi Everyone,

This is Preet and I'm writing this message on behalf of Bhavini.

She is done with her surgery and it went well. She is recovering well but she still needs time to rest and also she has a lot of pending work at office.

So, you guys need to be very patient...she will not leave the story in the middle, she will definitely complete it. Give her a few months to recuperate and get back in routine.

Thanks for understanding, she really appreciates all your love and update requests.

Love
Bhavini