Unres...
Part 1:
Oh my god...what a start...Payal...
At starting I thought Jodha & Jalal marriage was happening
But suddenly surya appeared...
Our Jodha is crying 😭...
When the I read flashback I wanted to give a slap to hero...
How can he call as like that...
I didn't like Jalal..
But when he came back I was doing
Thank god.. He said sorry...how sweet...
Look Jodha didn't gave punishment... How sweet...
I love u jo..
Wow... They eloped from marriage..
Because of Jalal only Jodha took such decision,,,
What is this Jalal always mess up Jodha life...
Part 2:
Wow Jalal & Jodha at temple..
Good Jalal u took correct decision...
Or else I may kill u.. 😡
Without telling anything Jodha understood u Jalal... 😛
Wow Abdul is a true friend arranged everything...too good...
Good job Abdul👏
I must say he is naughty also arranged Sr also..
Jalal u are really lucky to have Abdul as ur friend...
Surprise.. I am also waiting for surprise...
Finally our Jodha & Jalal are married...
Hurray.. Party time...🥳
Song is Superb Payal...
Let's go mrs Mohammed... I just loved this line...😳
Part 3:
Finally reached farm house..
Oh my god they are in a relation for 3 years..
Separated for 6 months...
Jalal how can u do this??? 😡
For six months how u lived without jodha???😲
Poor Jodha crying for u...
I don't like this Jalal...but it's ok.. U are back..
In the car.. Wow how romantic...😳
I was blushing like a idiot..while reading.
Just mere touch of Jodha makes him lose for her...
But came expected...
hahaha...😆
U did a good job Jodha.. 👏
Slappp...
I expected this from u from starting..
U did now...
He was shocked...Jodha rocked...
But plz Jodha don't give that shy smile...
He won't live u... Oops he already understood u...
How sweet when she said 10 days 15 days finally 1 month...
Part 4:
Jalal... U really got the pulse of Jodha...
U put a smooth song to trap Jodha???😉
I must say Payal... U have very good collection of songs...
That to opt for the situation...
Good job Payal...👏
Ok coming update,,
Payal ur Jalal really knows Jodha weakness...
It was superb & so sexy update...
i was really blushed..
It seems along with Jodha for me also redness is permenant on my cheeks
When I read ur update...
U penned it very well payaliya...
So beautiful...
Love u dear...
Part 5:
Wow finally.. Both became one..
Jalal u started again morning romance...😉
I think u want to fill these 6 months separation...
Won't u??😳
I just loved the way he wake up Jodha...
Jungleebilli... Control ur tongue Jalal or else she will show u real Jodha..Hahahha...😆😆
U should have write the bathtub scene also Payal...
But it's ok,, it was cool & beautiful morning update..
Loved it..
Oh my god...
Who is that guy??
Dare to punch Jalal????
I Must say he really have guts to do that..
Payal... Totally completly beautiful story...
I loved each & ever bit...
I am thinking how come I missed this beautiful story...
Lash next time don't miss Paya story... I Have to keep this remind on my mind Payal...
U are really amazing writer...
U are really expert any expressing feelings..
Thanks sooo much for the wonderful story...
Now I understood y Avika wants this update...
Great work Payal..👏👏👏
Love u dear...
A biggg 🤗 to u...
Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago
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