Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ...Arushi...
di it's not at all weird😡
hey.. arushi.. thank god😆
it's so cute😳
really?😲
it doesn't seem to be your first time it's awesome👏
aww thanks a lot dear🤗
and last part☺️
yeah😆

thanks for the PM
you're welcome dear😊

@ pink

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

i was thinking the same avika and arushi.. 😊but i was confused about readers would like it or not as i just wrote it without thinking much..

so der kis baat
pls.write it dear
and thanks for pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: avika444
Lovely os payal
thankyou avika🤗
at first i was like will jo really marry surya??
but then the last part
jajo eloping from the wedding hehehe
i loved this part
me too😆
payal cant u make it a two shot or three
yes i was thinking the same😊
i want to see surya's reaction and jajo wedding pls pls pls
even i want to write about surya's reaction😆

love you dear❤️

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

thanks savini😊

welcome drtks for the pm. and plz continue it..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
It was superb and cute os chinnie
loved it😛
write more os dear😊

thanks a lot meeru🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: avika444

so der kis baat
pls.write it dear
and thanks for pm

ohk dear.. will write its next part soon😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: savindi.db
welcome drtks for the pm. and plz continue it..

will continue soon dear.. thanks for liking it😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
lovely os...

thanks raksha😊

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

thanks raksha😊

welcome dear😊

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Nice one shot payal.. beginning was good ..flash back that misunderstanding was very well written..

their pain with few dialogues beautifully penned by you... really loved jalal saying forgive me then JO denying it n he asks for the punishment.. he he soo sweet.. love their reunion .. with passionate kiss ..simply superb.. finally they decided to elope. that final touch was awesome,, i liked it very much dear.. u plz continue this..

Avika is right u can make this into SS ..

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago