Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015) - Page 3

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Nice one shot payal..

thankyou shruti🤗

beginning was good ..flash back that misunderstanding was very well written..

their pain with few dialogues beautifully penned by you...

really? i didn't expect this much appreciation😲

really loved jalal saying forgive me then JO denying it n he asks for the punishment.. he he soo sweet..

yeah.. he is❤️

love their reunion .. with passionate kiss ..simply superb..

thanks a lot dear😊

finally they decided to elope. that final touch was awesome,, i liked it very much dear..

😆

u plz continue this..

yeah i will😊

Avika is right u can make this into SS ..

i am thinking to make it a three shot😃

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

awesum os.beautifully described emotions .

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Awesome os

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

thank u payal😊😊

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesone n update soon

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Originally posted by: rima4ever

beautiful os

Originally posted by: cuty1997

Awesome os

jalal realize his mistake it's good

thanks to pm me