Akdha New OS-Will u marry me?

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Hey guys this is my first attempt to write os so plz forgive me for this stupid os.

I would like to dedicate this os to my sweety(savindi.db) who encouraged me to write this os. I would also like to dedicate this to my cutie pie harini,my darling suddha akka(shruthi karthik),my chinnie payal di(sharmacatty)and to my darling sammy di...love u guys...😳😛

so enough of bhak bhak here it goes...😉

Will u marry me?

It was a beautiful morning,birds chirping happily all over welcoming the new day. A handsome young man was still sleeping bared on his bed wrapping his arms around her beautiful slender curvy waist. Suddenly the alarm sounds waking up the beautiful lady 4m het sleep she opens her beautiful eyes and sees the time it was 7 in the morning she rubs her eyes and sees beside her there he was sleeping like an innocent kid "my jalal love u sooo much" said jodha and pulled his cheeks lovingly this disturbed his sleep he tightened his grip on her waist she bite her toungue cutly and tried to remove his hands.she was somewhat successful but he caught her and pulled her towards him more like fusing her into him
"Jalal leave me"said jo with frustrating look. He smirked and said"ofcouse babe i will leave oly when u pay the tax 4 disturbing my beautiful sleep" keeping his fingers on lips asking 4 a kiss. She frowned and replied blushingly"well you got it enough yesterday night itself" yes they made love all night😆
"But i need one now" replied jalal and started to kiss her delicious lips passionately jodha can't resist it so she started to respond as well.thn he started to kiss her neck with trail of kisses but jodha stopped saying that he was getting late 4 his office he got up unwillingly and went to take a bath suddenly he thought to pull her legs and mischiveously he asked"Babe y don't we take bath 2gthr" jo sensed his naughtiness she replied" sorry jaan iam not in mood today so better luck nxt time"saying this she ran away. Jalal just smirked and went to hav a bath. After having bath jalal got ready and started to leave 4 his office jodha bid him with her good bye kiss thn jalal drove his car to his office.
After he went jodha got a phone call"Ms.Singh conratulations!!! U hav got the opportunity to do ur internship in london ur internship starts on nxt month so plz pack everything to leave " after listening this jo's face got lit up with happiness she said thank u to the caller and ended the call. "I hav to tell this to jalal" but suddenly her happiness went away how can she tell this to jalal after this everything will come to the end her's and jalal's relationship will come to an end.
Bcoz they are not married they were living together from when they confessed their feelings. Jalal doesn't want marriage bcoz he doesn't believe in marriage but jodha always wanted to marry him but feared to tell him that she wish to marry him. She feared if he leaves her the fear of losing him made her numb.
It was evening jalal returned home jo opened the door the sadness was clearly visible ob her face he asked"wat happened babe" she told him everything and she hugged him and cried
he also wrapped his arms and comforted her.He also felt vry sad he cannot live without out her after he started to live with her he became completely dependent on her. He cannot stay away 4m her. He doesn't know wat to do. He cried silently.
It has been a month since the call came jodha is leaving 2mrw. She was packing her things but she don't want to go she want to leave him, her jalal,her life,her part,soul,her everything
same is the condition for jalal he also don't want to leave her.
on the day of leaving:
Jodha started to leave expecting jalal will stop her. Suddenly jalal yelled"jodha stop don't leave me like this i will die without you babe plz..."jo rooted at her place she was at the verege of tears she turned to see a completely shattered jalal infront of her she ran towards him and hugged him tightly and started to kiss him like there is no tomorrow. Jalal broke the kiss and kneal down in front of her holding her hands and asked"WILL U MARRY ME BABY ?I LOVE U I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT U" she don't know wat to say she was beyond happy she jus kneal down and kissed him jalal wiped her white pearls and said"don't cry babe they r precious to me" jodha asked "u will never leave me na jalal if u leave me i will kill u" said jodha resting her forehead on his he smirked and said"iam not that dared to leave u babe" and kissed her forehead and embraced her tightly she said"I love u jalal..." " love u too babe" he said in a husky voice.
And after a month they were married and lived happily ever after.
I know this is utter non sense but plz hit like button and leave ur precious comments that will encourage me😛
Iam also ready 4 jutas and chappals
PS:-Sorry 4 the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors😛

REGARDS,
Meera😳


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lovely story
thanks😊
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Nice os romantic continue ur work keep it up
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minne finaly you posted it na..i realy loved that morning scene of akdha..its a lovely os dr..oh i forgot..you dedicated it me tootks baby..plllease write more and more..okay..love u..❤️tks for the pm too dr..
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Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

lovely story
thanks😊

thq dr..😛
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Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Nice os romantic continue ur work keep it up

Thq sooo much😛
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

minne finaly you posted it na..i realy loved that morning scene of akdha..its a lovely os dr..oh i forgot..you dedicated it me tootks baby..plllease write more and more..okay..love u..❤️tks for the pm too dr..

yep i posted 😆 i know u will love it 😊 and i will try to write more😊
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meeru!!😃
lovely os!!!!
I loved it!!😊
thanks for the pm!
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Thq...😛

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