Akdha FF:when i first saw you chapter5 updated on page 13 (18/3/2016)

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Just read you ff...wonderful!!!👏👏👏

Not only it is heading towards a beautiful love story, it is also a live picture of teenager students just became adults,who have just passed out scl and going to clg. Everyone of this age can find him/herself inside all the characters while reading...👍🏼

I like Jodha as a spoilt brat. Somehow it had been emblemed in my head that Jodha will have to be the perfect,the best and the most good one in all the stories. Your story broke that idea and I am liking it very much...😳

Continue soon...⭐️

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

adorable chapter but a short one...

finally jo called!

update soon...😊

thanx for the pm...😃

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#483

awsum

wow
joja are frnds

ja had some gf
& broke up.
& now playing with jo's emotions

no...
plz give jalal's pov also

update asap

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Res payal

Will unress soon pakka:-) :-)

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Gud one..
FInally after a lot of struggle jo finally give hr no. To jalal..
N trio who were deseparately of her call cant stop themselves doing a small bhangra after getting her call 😆
Bt what the hell Ja said about her..that he is not serious about her ..is he going play with her feelings...

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sho123

@sho123

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#486

really a superb chappi payal
love the way u describe jos confusion regarding whether to miss call ja or not
to give her number to him or not
then jas excitement after finally receiving jos miss call
continue soon
thanks for pm

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

payal...🤗
super fantastic update dear..
ja was soo much excited n eager n we r also aftr ur thrd update😆 u md us wait soo long haan..very bad😭 but tht call turn out to be ja long lost friend Amit😆 oh god payal reading ja reaction aftr every cmmnt of abdul n maan n reading maan reaction aftr every glare frm ja was very hard to stop my laugh🤣 tht was amazing payal..
n othr side jo was soo confused to wht to do gv him call or nt...😆
aahh..aftr long restlessness n too much wait finally jo gv call..oops sorry missed call😆
now ja hd jo no. N fr tht thy celebrate😕😆 u actually alive a picture payal this is wht actually now a days boy bhv lik thy gt an Oscar 🤣
ohh...so tht cmmnt on ja Ex n i thought😆 wht really fr ja jo is TIMPASS i nvr thought tht..i thought he like her i will nt say love but i thought he like her...hmm..let see hw r u going to unfold this story..whts in future...
oh now frm jo pov...nice interesting payal😊
waiting fr nxt update..😃
update soon n thank u fr pm

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">who said jo has a boyfriend nidhi?😕😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">will update tomorrow dear!!</font>

😆 my mind..i guess who again gt confuse due to ur confusing tzr payal😉🤣
but aftr reading chap all clear now😃😆