FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 5 (Chap 27 page1 10/06/15) updated

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harshal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

as usul awsum chaptr...1st of all congo on a new thread 😉 ur ff is bcuming so interesting I really wait fr ur updatev eagerly... 😳 jalal is v much concernd abt jodha's ganesh chaturthi celebratn 😉 interesting best part jodha frgt abt it and hd nonveg amazing... 😆 jalal ka kuch jyada hi asar ho raha hai jodha per ki sab kuch bhul gayi 👏 so its a happy realization fr jodha for falling for jalal 😆 😉 Her smile fetches great kick, more than Martini!!" go on jalal nw evrythng relatd 2 jodha wil giv u a grt kick dn ny drinks 😆 "What a combination he is!!" her heart filled with pride. "Softness and shrewdness beautifully wrapped and gifted... FOR ME???" he is teda particularly suitable for jodha as she is also tedi 😉 teda hai per mera hai I mean jodha 😆 😉 ohhh so nw evn samyu hs bcum alert and tensed up regarding a murder attck on jodha...its really mysterious 2 knw who wants 2 kill jodha... shold b knwn persn I believe 😕 "Are you a reincarnation of a bat or what? 😆 m luving d banter btw both its so amzing 2 read... "Adipaavi... vaayamoodu..." 🤣 lovely dialog by samyu...btwn y is Ramesh goin 2 delhi along wid her I wantd jalal 2 go y dat jerk is accmpnying her 😕 dat means wil she go 2 delhi? since both jalal and her badepapa are worried cz of d murder attempts on her...? 😕 nywyz update soon luved reading it...eager 2 knw wat haapens nxt... 😉

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_akdha.forever_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

congrtass humari Mallika-e-os❤️ and congoo shongoo for the new thread dii🥳

wonderful update heemakirti dii👏

it was so lovely update...had so much fun reading this update dii

Loved the cute 'pre-ilu ilu' talks between joja 😆 but when will ilu happen and jalal resembles her idealistic lover wooww

And the investigation was interesting too. Bdw any scene between prithvi and samyu😆

It was good to see her concern for Jo, which means she is not guilty. but then who is the the murderer😵

JoJa will go to delhi na..why this ramesh babu somehow jalal will not leave jodha..haa dii??

and waiting for jalal's surprise appearance for his Jo

update soon dii🤗🤗

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Jeryl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Congratulations for the new thread...Wow...another wonderful update Jahnu!Finally, Jalal has realised that Jo too has special feelings towards him. It was so nice of him to think about Jo's festival in spite of his differing religious background. Jo is indeed lucky to have such a protective and caring partner in her life! So the first step towards remembering the Goa incident has begun for Jalal too. Does he still have the thorn which he has hidden from Abdul during the Goa incident? This reminds me of Jo' jasmine strands too...no one knows its whereabouts so far??????

I really loved the way you have penned down the emotions of Jo to realise that "Jalal is the man that makes Jodha forget herself!!" The cute late night light hearted chats are helping them to get to know about each other very well. The relationship is progressing towards the next stage nicely. Hopefully, they will have a conversation about Jajal's past before their confession.

Prithvi's interrogation of Samyu was quite interesting. I am looking forward to another interesting track with these two...

The much awaited Delhi trip is happening at last! How is Jalal going to surprise his "sweet idiot"who is so desperate to see him "sooonnn"? Are they going to fly together? I assume that Ramesh will definitely act as a catalyst here to help the possessive Jalal to come more closer to his Jo.

Waiting to know how Jo will find about her Don's birthday...

The narration of events so far especially the funny and cute conversations written by you makes us the readers wanting more and more of such updates at the earliest...so please update sooonnn...

Jhanu! You claimed in the previous thread that we get 3 PBD updates per month but it didn't happen as you promised for the months of March and April. ( I did my maths using the PM's you have sent me). We can consider "Roses and Thorns" as a compensation for March but we demand that we must be compensated for April. So update before the end of April. Rosita

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Super excited for the next part

plz Jahnavi.. tondara ga. rayadam modalu pettu .. plz

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: al_pal
Jahnu love you for this back to back awesomeness ,sweetness 🤗😳
Why you are killing me with suspense though 😭 ,I have exam in two weeks and here I am on IF ,waiting for next update ,every week end 😕 .firest it was lashy's now you Devils 😆😆😉
Kaly my pally lots of love .

😲😲 who's here? OMG! Pallu my lovu😭😭😭 you too become minnal and then Devil😡

Btw All the best for your exams!!!👍🏼

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: al_pal
when you go out ,out of IF then use your double charge batteries I.e your eyes ,you will find one 😆😆
Bird watching girl 😉

How much we missed these expert advices..😭😭.. after ur exams you're going to be back in full form, okay!! 😡

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Super excited for the next part
plz Jahnavi.. tondara ga. rayadam modalu pettu .. plz

mundu andariki replies.. tarvate chapter.. lekapote janam rallichuku kodataru sudha 😆

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

mundu andariki replies.. tarvate chapter.. lekapote janam rallichuku kodataru sudha 😆

😆 😆 😆

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abhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

mundu andariki replies.. tarvate chapter.. lekapote janam rallichuku kodataru sudha 😆

😆 Jhanu you are so determined this time 😆

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abhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Jhanu wonderful 👏update especially JJ are getting closer & with SMS now calling natural leg pulling at midnight also 😆

WoW JOdha symptoms of LOVEA disease started forgot about Vinayaka chaviti & eat NON_VEG, hipnotised & focussed only on Jalaal ..😆 ... Why did I forget it when I was with HIM? How could I be so mindless?" FIRST STAGE of the disease 😉

JO Fantasy is fulfilled, the drawing has Jalaal eyes which she ae haunting her from GOA tour itself 😎

Jalaal got a reason to SMS and now call starred with cute banter ..

"Please don't put me into fix with such questions Jodha... I find it difficult lying!!"🤣

"Uff ... don't call me like that... You have no idea how badly it effects me..." Ayoo JO is GONE case in DREAM land 😆

Liked the way Jalaal caring when he got to know about the jerks truth, gave her advice and also opened up his angry on her saying LONER , tried to share with him what's holding her..👏

Now both are praised each other's talents and Jalaal doesn't loose chance.. "I did it only twice and you are branding me like a hardcore Chambal valley thief." 🤣

"Her smile fetches great kick, more than Martini!!" 😆 GET her marry & enjoy those KICKS daily substitution to Martini 😉

"Softness and shrewdness beautifully wrapped and gifted... FOR ME???" Ready to take the ownership 😎

Good that Samyu was not a suspect and the Prithvi got the details how the incident happened & also the attempt is also a pre-planned one while Samyu got to know about JO being the target

I am feeling the attack is done by someone closer to JO family & now Poor Samyu, now has to be very careful talking to JO ...

As I expected JO is going to DELHI, with Ramesh not AMM girl and I am sure that Jalaal may join later 😉

So JJ SMS chats & calling continues and both are open up know about each other..Jo is so cute she herself message him at mid-night & call him MR.Batman even turned it saying as praising HERO 😆

Finally Jalaal got to know about JO going to delhi and also JO got suspicion something going on... Aah... talking to this woman is like handling a two edged knife",🤣 Also Jalaal very well diverted her suspicion with cute & explained in a meaningful way👏

Poor JO couldn't hide herself to say she missed & longed to see him 😎 Jalaal is so good didn't reveal HIS birthday asked her to find out herself ...You are born exactly at the moment when all the nine planets were out of their orbits; else, you can't be as twisted as you are now."🤣 Jalaal got to know JO longing to see him once & also changed his plan 👏...

Waiting for Delhi trip with JJR... Jalaal JO Ramesh A BLAST Will Ramesh become JEALOUS VILLIAN, as JO surely try to ignore him & be with Jalaal 😆 Why I am feeling Jalaal past will also appear , this TRIP will bring JJ more closer emotionally 😃

Jhanu wonderful update as usual 👏 👍🏼JJ casual & lovely talk ❤️ with investigation ..🤗 Waiting for next one dear ...