Brother I am so sorry for the late review, I read the chater last night at pretty late. So thought I would comment my review tomorrow when I wake up, and look I am up at 2pm 🤣🤣🤣
Anyway, with the chapter, I have 3 things to.
1: 👏
2: 👏
3: 👏
You probably don't now but you've beautifully described the palace's background, show, architects designs, floors, those marble pillars. Wow brother, the words you've used to describe them are perfect. I literally imagined the whole palace when you were describing it amd when jodha was admiring it very closley.
I got shocked to know that this palace is jodhas when the idiot man asked for the invitation card etc. abdul got angry then later said "don't know what's gonna happen today when jodha finds out that this whole palace is hers, it's her property."
Wow, this means that the party jalal and bakshi/abdul were talking about was for jodha and him, meaning will he tell her the truth today?! well not today, but in this party track?
Cause jodha is still unknown of her husbands full name, of what her husband is, how rich he and herself she is, she doesn't know anything!!
Hope this reveals very soon, and I hope that jodha doesn't get upset at him for hiding all this from her.
Brother I must say, I loved how you revealed salman's case to jalal through the bodyguards, jalal then wonders why jodha hadn't told him about this, and then the next second he sees that idiot pratap kissings jodha's hands.
Jalal was so angry throughout the party, until he couldn't handle how pratap was touching his wife jodha.
And finally the dance : 😳😳😳
their dance was amazing. I loved how they danced so openly, didn't think about who was around them or watching them.
you chose beautiful and suitable songs that went very well with their dance. I had goosebumps not to mention 😉😉😉
But no, well done brother, their kiss at the ending was the best part, they kissed, and kissed, and kissed; without any shyness or thinking about whose around us watching. You've described each and everything very well.
I loved your vocabulary on this charter, it was amazing!! Very proud of your work brother. The wait was truly worth it. If this was meant to be an essay for an exam, you would've got 100% 😆😆😆
Your precap seems very interesting, cannot wait for it it.
Don't forget to PM me the next chapter soon, when are you updating? I'll be waiting brother, take care and god bless. ❤️❤️❤️
Edited by mohammadnoureen - 10 years ago
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