''Blank Space'' - an Akdha ff !(updated CH 6 page 40) - Page 7

Originally posted by: avika444

Nice chapter dear
Pls pm from next update
It will be easy for us
Or add index on first page
Thanks for updating

though i have added an index on first page, i will pm u too.
Thanks alot for likig it ! :)

Originally posted by: Kutty58

I am loving this FF... Lol.. Hope Jalal keeps the charade going.. Coz Jo is adorable spinning stories not knowing she is talking to her supposed hubby.. Hahahaha..

Pls PM me..I love to follow this story..😆

awww.. Thanks alot sweety !
I'm too glad u liked it !
I will surely pm u from now on !

Originally posted by: Spriha_Jha

though i have added an index on first page, i will pm u too.
Thanks alot for likig it ! :)

update soon 😉

Hey guys, m back with the Second chapter.. I hope u'll like it. But before that i really wanna thank each and every one of u for all the love, support and encouragement. Though being a groupbie, i aint permitted to make numerous post so didn't reply to some of u.. Keep loving this ff, hit the like button if u like it and do comment. Thanks once again. Anyone who want pm, please send me buddy request. #Chapter 2 : JODHA'S POV : ''I'm ur Shenshah's one of the Begums'' this is wat i told him, i never wanted to lie but situation made me do so.. I called my baapusa's biggest enemy my husband! These mughals are too cruel and mannerless, they don't know how to respect women, for them women are just like toys they play with or materials they exchange to gain power and political support, that's what Sujamal bhaisa always told me.. And that Shenshah of theirs.. He's the most filthy persona on earth ! But, no matter how much Rajputana loathe him, the truth is not hidden that these mughal men praise their Shenshah and would never do anything that could upset him.. So for my safety i lied that I'm his shenshah's begum.. And anyways Suryabhaan ji often told me that a lie for a noble cause isn't counted as a lie. And atleast now, when this man thinks that m his Badshah's begum, he can't even think of harming me.. Thank god ! But Kanha.. I still couldn't calm myself ! My conversation with this Mugha.. WAIT! I didn't even ask his name.. (pov ends) ''Listen'' Jodha peeped towards the other side of bone fire, he was collecting something.. ''hmm'' ''whats ur name?'' ''whats in a name'' he answered gathering the fallen leaves.. ''that's not the answer to my question'' she glared him.. ''Ok! I'm.. I'm Rahim'' without thinking much he lied and blurted out the name wch crossed his mind first- RAHIM ! His khane khana, though he was his step son, jalal loved him like his own. ''Rahim! Anyways what are u doing.. Why are u cleaning this area.. Are u some cleaner??'' she rose her eye her left eyebrow ''have u lost it?? I'm a warrior.. Can't u see??'' her tone and stupid question irritated him this time.. ''Warrior what??'' she laughed making fun of him.. ''cheese woman! Had u had eyes u should've noticed my attire, that sword and the bruishes on my arms !'' he left what he was doing and literally yelled at her.. This women has left no patience in him, first her introduction of hers as his begum which she definitely wasn't then her stupid question and now this ! He was losing his calm. This was new to him, a Girl never tested his patience before or to be precise he never let any girl do that. ''Okay okay ! U'r warrior.. ! Happy now?? Will u care to tell me what a WARRIOR would do of these fallen yellowed leaves'' she rolled her eyes ''i'm just trying to comfort u.. I mean.. I'm trying to make a leafbed so that u can sleep'' he whispered, surprised at his own actions and words.. Why is he doing all these for a girl he never met before.. A girl who is lying since last some hours and who is eating his mind like ants eat the syrup ! Giving his thoughts a rest, he added.. ''there is still some hours for dawn, till then we can catch a sleep and then we'll move for Agra'' he told her ''Agraaa????'' she jumped from her position shouting and hence startling him.. ''Woaah women! U will kill me if u do it one more tym'' ''but..agra.. And whts this WE WE..'' she gulped.. ''Yes ! Agra.. That's where Shenshah live and so do u..! And WE means me and You.. Simple!'' He smirked, there is no way he will leave her unpunished.. He would irritate her as much she irritated him..!! ''hello! Gimme a break..Why would i go with u??'' her eyes widened as her chunri flew the flow of wind and was now resting on her shoulders, her head naked. Jalal gasped, hoping to see her face clearly but in vain, she was standing in the direction of moon and hence she could see him but not the vice versa ! ''see begum'' he coughed to get his voice back ''I'm also travelling in the same direction, so i'll drop u and as u said ur Shenshah's begum, i think i can get enough coins if i return u to him safely'' he added with a smirk, patting himself mentally for his wit. ''No..!'' she quickly cried. How can she go there if she's not his begum at first place, leave alone his begum she haven't even seen him ever.. She knew she had to shoo this man if she wanted to return amer ever.. ''I think i would go towards east.. Towards Amer, thts where my husband is..'' she stammered. ''but from what i heard, he's in Agra..'' he again smirked, holding back his laughter.. ''so u think m lying!?'' getting her confidence back, she shouted ''he is there for some political matters that won't fit in ur pea sized brain or u should've been the Shenshah not him..'' ''that to i already m'' he wishpered under his breath.. ''wat'' ''nothing!lets sleep nw we'll discuss all tht's left later'' He grinned as confusion and fear of getting caught reflected in her eyes!

Amazing chappy spriha its awesome the conversation between them 😉

Awesome... It waz wonderful

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Amazing chappy spriha its awesome the conversation between them😉

Jalal taking fun of jodhas white lie heee

hehe ! Thanku so much ! I too love it wen jalal irritate jodha ! 😃

nice update spriha
conversation part is just awesome
waiting for their actual introduction to each other😉😉😉
continue soon
thanks for pm

Nice chapter

Awsm chapy spriha.. Liked there nok jhok.