~Akdha OS: She still loved me~

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arushi

@...Arushi...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

read your OS and I am speechless... and don't have words to describe it...

i was so much carried away with it...that it took me few hours... to get out of it's spell...

it was such a emotional OS that it really made me emotional...😭

very well written dear...u pen down the emotional of Jalal very well...i could felt his pain...his desire to be with Jo...

density played a cruel game with them...

want to say about ending... it very well depicted the message you want to conva... that LOVE NEVER DIE..🤗

thanks a lot for writing and sharing such a beautiful OS

And plzz... do write more OS ...you write very well

Thanx for the Pm

lots of love

Arushi

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

heart wrenching OS
u have written beautifully

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sayyed farah naaz

@fnaz299

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

oh my God

what d story

super, awesome, fantastic

u made me cry

keep it up

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Sush

@Forthislifeonly

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hey, Krina.U...I just hate u!!!!!@ How dare u to write such sad OS😡 😡 😭 😭...I really didn't had any plans to come here today...But as Arushi & Anu & Shalu told me...I read first & really cried...that I didn't wait to end of my busy schedule...to comment here...

This was so so wonderful, marvelous, awesome OS...I am still crying!!!😭 😭...I hate u!!!!!! ...But I love u!!! SO much!!!!!!🤗 🤗...

Yes.Love hurts...It kills u!!!!! Bond is that which is bonded by heart...Not which is bonded by society...love blinds souls...If both combines.then it's perfect...otherwise it's a pain for many lives...

She had vermillion...but that was for society...her ring reflected her heart...

I cried when she died...But that was good for all...otherwise pain increased.that hurt both damn much!!!

Krina...I am just stunned.at this OS...I just love u , love u, love u!!!!!!!! & Now come to the main point!!!! U have to write such OS es more...don't think it as a request.It's an order😡 😡🤗 🤗

Love u & thank u dear very much for this outstanding OS👏 👏

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

OMG...Such a touching story ... i am speechless... it was an outstanding OS..

She died in the end...yes..she still loved him...heart wrenching.. but i hated the ending...

.U wrote it beautifully and perfectly...

Thank u for an amazing story Krina

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

hey krina , wonderful OS...👏

though it's a heart wrenching one , but so finely written...😃

aww...my akdha their true love got cursed...😭

indeed u hv penned it down so well...👍🏼

u should write more often...😳

Edited by cute.manasi - 10 years ago

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Sofia Liverpool

@._.Bubbles._.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Krina i hate u 😡hw cld u make me cry so much😭

Omg what did u jus did, my heart actually hurt😳

Dis was #out_of_this_world

I tots love it...omg u are awesome sis

Well i waz here😆

#with_love_bubbles ❤️

Edited by ._.Bubbles._. - 10 years ago

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Di ye kaise baat hui
what have u done...i always like happy ending...and this story
di u r a awesome writer aur update ke bare main kya batau sabne toh tarif kar hi dia hain ...mari pass word nehi han...i am marveled di
keep it up
thanks

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

heart touching os di...it is just awsm...thanks for the pm...

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

awesome story krina😛😳

You made me cry !😭😭

It was so sad😭

And plz so sorry .I don't mind to hurt you but i have share your Os on my fb page without your permission. I know i should not do it but i liked it so much that i thought to share it. and my my the Os got 111 likes and 16 comments .👏👏 everyone liked it so much yaar 👏 but they have only one complaint sad ending of the story .😭😭 and rest was awesome 😳😳😳